WK14: .SiQ. (0-0) vs For Battling (0-0) SiQ wins via NS

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@.SiQ. @For Battling

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Originally Posted by For Battling

It’s gotta be pics man

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I'm not doing pics bro lol sorry.
How many lines u goin?

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Originally Posted by For Battling

No pics? 20.

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No pics... we'll keep it just bars
And ok I'm cool with 20lines

What have u really done For Battling other than fuckin sound wack?
Ur so much of a Troll, if ur life was a movie.. Justin Timberlake would do the soundtrack

How dare u make us all read ur verse against Phalanx bout swagger & flow
Bitch, we were never caught off 'guard' that u got as much swagger as Joe

This fag be suckin dick for votes.. This Xmas he asked for a mouthpiece
Ur whole verse's filled wit gay bars.. the shit reminds us of South Beach

U aint in my Pedigree, Mut.. dont ever disrespect my house
They say "All Dogs go to Heaven"... well ur about to find out!

Im on a crime route, show u wit this nine bout
Clock u wit the back of the steel.. Watch u take a Time-out

I'll have his limbs torn, split.. soon as the sword lifts
Stuff his body in a box & never quit until Forfeits

U'll feel the rath of Th3 Saga from one of my mean toolies
Guns named A.Ward & Loso.. In other words they'll leave ur team holey

He's sad he dont got equity in LLL.. he should of wrote bars more kosher
But now he's gettin evicted & I dont got any interest in givin Foreclosure

U wouldn't murder a show or even kill a stage in ur wildest dreams
U approachin a Mic'll be a bigger disappointment than the last Halloween

Two 20's aimed @ his shirt is somethin he dont wanna think about
Slugs'll go thru 40!.. There aint a cleaners who can get the wrinkles out

@For Battling

off guard, South Beach, & forfeits were cool bars

Some cool stuff some really dated shit. Zelph retarded for not showing

A gay bar line though lol

Forfeits was ok

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Originally Posted by .SiQ.

What have u really done For Battling other than fuckin sound wack?
Ur so much of a Troll, if ur life was a movie.. Justin Timberlake would do the soundtrack
Not harsh but good tie ins

How dare u make us all read ur verse against Phalanx bout swagger & flow
Bitch, we were never caught off 'guard' that u got as much swagger as Joe
Nah

This fag be suckin dick for votes.. This Xmas he asked for a mouthpiece
Ur whole verse's filled wit gay bars.. the shit reminds us of South Beach
Very dated
U aint in my Pedigree, Mut.. dont ever disrespect my house
They say "All Dogs go to Heaven"... well ur about to find out!
No sir ur losing me

Im on a crime route, show u wit this nine bout
Clock u wit the back of the steel.. Watch u take a Time-out
Not feeling this either

I'll have his limbs torn, split.. soon as the sword lifts
Stuff his body in a box & never quit until Forfeits
Nasty

U'll feel the rath of Th3 Saga from one of my mean toolies
Guns named A.Ward & Loso.. In other words they'll leave ur team holey
Don't like the concept tbh

He's sad he dont got equity in LLL.. he should of wrote bars more kosher
But now he's gettin evicted & I dont got any interest in givin Foreclosure
Cookin
U wouldn't murder a show or even kill a stage in ur wildest dreams
U approachin a Mic'll be a bigger disappointment than the last Halloween
Eh at best

Two 20's aimed @ his shirt is somethin he dont wanna think about
Slugs'll go thru 40!.. There aint a cleaners who can get the wrinkles out
Nah bruh

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Some old concepts & some eh ones. The NPs were the best

siq:
opener- decent. nothing crazy, but it def works as a jab
swagger- i dont really like this one tbh. no real sting here, it comes of as a bit statementish
gay bars- this concept is prett played overall, and you didnt add much freshness to it, unfortunately
dogs/heaven- this is also played out. see above
time out- i liked this one. this is a go.
box- i dont really like put u in a box lines. but this is pretty mice. i fk w it
team holey- meh, i feel like you coulda made this one a bit better. as is, not really feeling it
foreclosure- this was good, but it lacked the harshness needed to really be that haymaker
halloween- meh, decent. good kinda current event play. nun special tho imo
for tee- i thought this was pretty clever. i fuck w it. good closer



overall, not bad.u clearly kno wat ur doin here. only critique id give is to try to make sure all your material is fresh, and work on harsher wording

Vote: for battling

.SiQ.

What have u really done For Battling other than fuckin sound wack?
Ur so much of a Troll, if ur life was a movie.. Justin Timberlake would do the soundtrack
^^I feel this one... @For Battling is absolutely a troll

How dare u make us all read ur verse against Phalanx bout swagger & flow
Bitch, we were never caught off 'guard' that u got as much swagger as Joe
^^Not for me, bro

This fag be suckin dick for votes.. This Xmas he asked for a mouthpiece
Ur whole verse's filled wit gay bars.. the shit reminds us of South Beach
^^This is the type of shit I was writing last week - i see why u thought it sucked

U aint in my Pedigree, Mut.. dont ever disrespect my house
They say "All Dogs go to Heaven"... well ur about to find out!
^^Is he a "Mut", though?

Im on a crime route, show u wit this nine bout
Clock u wit the back of the steel.. Watch u take a Time-out
^^I like the clock / time-out thing

I'll have his limbs torn, split.. soon as the sword lifts
Stuff his body in a box & never quit until Forfeits
^^Yeah... I like

U'll feel the rath of Th3 Saga from one of my mean toolies
Guns named A.Ward & Loso.. In other words they'll leave ur team holey
^^Lost on me, bro

He's sad he dont got equity in LLL.. he should of wrote bars more kosher
But now he's gettin evicted & I dont got any interest in givin Foreclosure
^^Wordplay is cute, but wordplay is overrated, especially if part of his name is used twice in one verse

U wouldn't murder a show or even kill a stage in ur wildest dreams
U approachin a Mic'll be a bigger disappointment than the last Halloween
^^Yeah... I like the Michael play here

Two 20's aimed @ his shirt is somethin he dont wanna think about
Slugs'll go thru 40!.. There aint a cleaners who can get the wrinkles out
^^Yes sir

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Originally Posted by Caged

Vote: for battling

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Nice free post loser