Re: Week 2: Barcotic 1-0 Vs Ryno 1-0 - Open for Votes
this fraud got me yawnin guys, but im always shy of sleep. bet
i wanted someone in the top 40, so ima just body Ry n seek rest
fucking garbage
the mac is final.. fuck everything else, im blastin 5 yo
ace ventura bullets, the way theyre exiting out the back of ryno
ok
this match was perfect how? ill hurt the clown's heart
i kno Ryan Dunn think he wont crash & burn around barc
doesnt work. ry and done? ry'n done? done as in dont? your fucking canadian dude
he a cushion but if he pushes mike, the smoke is next...
point it at him, make sure Raichu's on a bullet like a pokedex
dope
bet. at the very least u'll be gettin some plates and pegs
took u a few days tibia fgt, it takes me 2 seconds to break ur legs
forced
ima shatter ya glass jaw so much ur face explodes
tongue hangin out, surrounded by purple like undertaker's pose
ok
vs
Your from canada, ur swaggers limited while all my clothing is insane
I could come to ur country n ball out on u bitches like Zion Williamson preseason games
eh
Word is u cut grass with pops, that type of business aint bringin’ no paper
It must be hard to start a hedge fund when Daddy barely makes it trimming his neighbors
word
I run with real g’s on the block, concealing weapons n spreading fear
He’s only in the streets pushing tools if they labeled it John Deere
poopy
Summer classic showed ur ultimate meltdown, this “legend” needs to hear it
I mean it was ironic u were put in the grave by ghost n came back a vengeful spirit
ok
I’ve got fam down to knock ur head off, its just a phone call for a favor
If u fuck with my Kin, i’ve got a brother that’ll blast u with somethin foreign just like the trailer
do people call guns forines? i dont think so
Real textcees despise u, they piss u off just to see what happens
The way hush, bags,n des come at u, u catch more hell than the cheesecake assassin
no
v/bar
ry just needs to keep working it. getting there. the closer was really bad though. it was just a wack statement. john deere didnt work because they don't make tools and it wasn't that intricate either way.
bar forcing shit like crazy as usual but that raichu bar was flames. opener was fucking retarded.
Re: Week 2: Barcotic 1-0 Vs Ryno 1-0 - Open for Votes
Ace Ventura was fire
So was hedge fund
Some wps here I didn’t like cuz they only worked one way
But some high creativity in action
Rynos closer was really bad and def hurt his verse as a whole
Cool battle tho
Re: Week 2: Barcotic 1-0 Vs Ryno 1-0 - Open for Votes
Bar Comic-
Opener:
I didn't really like how you did the wordplay, idk it works to me just reads funny. Overall the line hits
Ace Ventura:
I liked it because i used a similar concept against Boston. Visuals made it hit even more imo
Ryan Dunn:
Nah i cant let you do this.
Raichu:
Works for me. Reads very smooth like. Short n to the point.
Undertaker:
I dont watch wrestling so idk wat to say about this.
Tibia:
Idk it works for my accent. I keep saying to be a/tibia out loud it works. And the overall bar was funny. I like it.
Vs
Ryno
Opener:
I didn't like this. I get the reference but it just came off light to me
Hedge Fund:
This was nice. Clean and hit hard.
John Deere:
Nah this was weak to me. Idk how played it is. But its just not good. Get the landscaping angle tho.
Summer classic:
I dont get it. I wasn't around for that. Idk What to say here. Could be fire idk.
Foreign:
Damn another bar i dont get. Smh
Closer:
This was kinda trash if im being honest. Super basic. Lazy af. I didn't like This one at all.
Vote:
Bar Comic.
He had an overall better verse to me. However i thought that hedge fund bar was fire
Re: Week 2: Barcotic 1-0 Vs Ryno 1-0 - Open for Votes
this fraud got me yawnin guys, but im always shy of sleep. bet
i wanted someone in the top 40, so ima just body Ry n seek rest
this is cool, the body tie-in is a bit MIA but the top 40 ref is cool & the wordplay, while obscure works fine and is creative
the mac is final.. fuck everything else, im blastin 5 yo
ace ventura bullets, the way theyre exiting out the back of ryno
decent, the ryno tie in is cool but a similar concept was done against him a few weeks ago
this match was perfect how? ill hurt the clown's heart
i kno Ryan Dunn think he wont crash & burn around barc
lol nice, ive said this to you in the past I don't like the barc/bark play as its been done and done but tbh it works perfect for this concept & I like how u did it
he a cushion but if he pushes mike, the smoke is next...
point it at him, make sure Raichu's on a bullet like a pokedex
had to look this up, assuming a 'bullet ' is somehow tied to the pokemon guy this is pretty dope (for a pokemon bar).. like the wp & np as an attack line
bet. at the very least u'll be gettin some plates and pegs
took u a few days tibia fgt, it takes me 2 seconds to break ur legs
tibia's been done so this wasn't super fresh to me wp wise... flip is enjoyable enough , although loosely tied
ima shatter ya glass jaw so much ur face explodes
tongue hangin out, surrounded by purple like undertaker's pose
I don't get the purple tie in tbh... his face explodes / purple? the meta is cool enough for a wrestling bar, maybe im missing something here
vs
Your from canada, ur swaggers limited while all my clothing is insane
I could come to ur country n ball out on u bitches like Zion Williamson preseason games
not had hitting imo as far as the punch hitting barc, kinda cool on the zion / preseason series tho I fuck with the concept
Word is u cut grass with pops, that type of business aint bringin’ no paper
It must be hard to start a hedge fund when Daddy barely makes it trimming his neighbors
lol, nice but neighbor and a few others have done the 'hedge fund' idea.. personal def helped
I run with real g’s on the block, concealing weapons n spreading fear
He’s only in the streets pushing tools if they labeled it John Deere
haha cool, 'if they labeled it" coulda been cleaned up but this hits
Summer classic showed ur ultimate meltdown, this “legend” needs to hear it
I mean it was ironic u were put in the grave by ghost n came back a vengeful spirit
decent personal, pretty basic for a spirit/ghost perspective, but again it hits pretty good with the meltdown tie-in in the setup
I’ve got fam down to knock ur head off, its just a phone call for a favor
If u fuck with my Kin, i’ve got a brother that’ll blast u with somethin foreign just like the trailer
pretty cool, good urrent movie play that works well as an attack line
Real textcees despise u, they piss u off just to see what happens
The way hush, bags,n des come at u, u catch more hell than the cheesecake assassin
ehhhh, pretty statementish without much swag the way its worded.. this is a miss for me
Damn pretty cool & really close battle tbh.. both were pretty consistent throughout ... tough call, but I think Ryno's closer cost him & Bar was a bit more creative & enjoyable with the concepts imo.... he edges it .. props guys
Vote - Barcotic
Re: Week 2: Barcotic 1-0 Vs Ryno 1-0 - Open for Votes