Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2) - Kill Spree wins.

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@Justice Grimm @Kill Spree

Check. Planning for 12-14.

Sounds good

He’s beat
A Disciple
Echelon
Malediction
Mimic


He’s lost to
phal aka The Great One X2



That win list a Bad Look, I’ll tear this lame fuck
It says allot, when your biggest win’s a guy who wear’s makeup
Faggot! Any muscle you fight?…leaves you rattled pal
You’ve taken on that dick Great… & ur ass gets sore w/e you battle Phal
I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
Battling ain’t your habitat! It’s nothing to choke & dead Grimm
Or this gun have his heart ‘Burst Out’ like Fresh W/votes against him
Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy

Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
Ya whole careers on ice! And in contention we all agree on voting him off
So bring all ya methods to summit the peak. Only one I need to beat you’d Wim Hof
Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine
Your lines are garbage too, recycled n all we finding is crap
Got aspirations to trap? Ya bars sooo full of filler Slim Jim tried to sign him to rap
No runner ups in this race, all these voters ballots goin for me
So as long as I’m here you best Biden ya time… like Kamala’s presidency

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Kill spree: Opener was light for a personal. The Phal/dick line had some added humor factor but a slight reach felt you could’ve done more with a Phallus concept. Align pro bar was pretty dope solid hit. Engram np was ok again little reach but overall creativity on the flip.

Grimm: Opener was pretty dope. 2nd bar like the humor factor there. The seasoned Indian cuisine line was pretty funny too.

I felt battle was pretty even but I felt kill spree was slightly more creative with the wordplay n np hit. Probably can go either way humor factor vs creativity.

V/spree

That win list a Bad Look, I’ll tear this lame fuck
It says allot, when your biggest win’s a guy who wear’s makeup
decent stab
Faggot! Any muscle you fight?…leaves you rattled pal
You’ve taken on that dick Great… & ur ass gets sore w/e you battle Phal
okay ...
I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
iight... the end could use better wording
Battling ain’t your habitat! It’s nothing to choke & dead Grimm
Or this gun have his heart ‘Burst Out’ like Fresh W/votes against him
you love gun bars... pun was a lil weak
Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
in grimm/engram... i little stretched.. wordplay wasnt bad though
Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy
not feeling this


Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
okay
think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
straight
Ya whole careers on ice! And in contention we all agree on voting him off
So bring all ya methods to summit the peak. Only one I need to beat you’d Wim Hof
i looked dude up... if Wim Hof is an entendre let me know
Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine
straight
Your lines are garbage too, recycled n all we finding is crap
Got aspirations to trap? Ya bars sooo full of filler Slim Jim tried to sign him to rap
i dunno about this one
No runner ups in this race, all these voters ballots goin for me
So as long as I’m here you best Biden ya time… like Kamala’s presidency
could be better

i got Grimm edging this out ..sorry Spree (i know what you're thinking.. but it's not what you thought)... spree should lighten up on the gun bars ... they're hurting his verses..

vote - Grimm

I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy

vs

Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine

pretty close but i thought grimm had lotb with his operner so hes gonna get my vote

v/ justice grimm

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Kill Spree

He’s beat
A Disciple
Echelon
Malediction
Mimic


He’s lost to
phal aka The Great One X2



That win list a Bad Look, I’ll tear this lame fuck
It says allot, when your biggest win’s a guy who wear’s makeup
Light jab w/ the personal.
Faggot! Any muscle you fight?…leaves you rattled pal
You’ve taken on that dick Great… & ur ass gets sore w/e you battle Phal
Not sure I like what this implies. That said, the personal hits.
I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
[B] Punch was a decent jab.[
Battling ain’t your habitat! It’s nothing to choke & dead Grimm
Or this gun have his heart ‘Burst Out’ like Fresh W/votes against him
I laughed. Simple but timely.
Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
I fucks with it.
Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy
I like this. I did just if eyed, but I like your flip.

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Justice Grimm

Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
Not bad. Just not the first time Ive seen this angle vs Spree.
think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
Lol. Funny light jab.
Ya whole careers on ice! And in contention we all agree on voting him off
So bring all ya methods to summit the peak. Only one I need to beat you’d Wim Hof
Feel like Im missing something? This whiffed for me.
Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine
Solid jab.
Your lines are garbage too, recycled n all we finding is crap
Got aspirations to trap? Ya bars sooo full of filler Slim Jim tried to sign him to rap
Not big on this. Light jab at best.
No runner ups in this race, all these voters ballots goin for me
So as long as I’m here you best Biden ya time… like Kamala’s presidency
This was mild...at best.

12

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Not a bad battle. I got Spree landing the heavier shots. Grim just had too many bars I didnt like. Surprising, because he's been super consistent for most of the season.

Vote - Spree

That win list a Bad Look, I’ll tear this lame fuck
It says allot, when your biggest win’s a guy who wear’s makeup
Not bad. The bad look/wears make up connection is OK. With a fairly direct punch bar like this I really need the execution to be flawless to like it and there’s some spelling and punctuation missteps here that, for me, do take from the impact (it’s “a lot”, not “allot” & “wears” not “wear’s”).
Faggot! Any muscle you fight?…leaves you rattled pal
You’ve taken on that dick Great… & ur ass gets sore w/e you battle Phal
OK. Personal punch idea is cool.
I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
Is JG aka Pro?. Pretty cool if so, although “you’ll never have a line” maybe could have been something stronger that still let the wp work. If he’s not aka Pro then ehhh it’s a bit of a reach to me
Battling ain’t your habitat! It’s nothing to choke & dead Grimm
Or this gun have his heart ‘Burst Out’ like Fresh W/votes against him
OK, decent jab
Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
I’m guessing the player’s name is pronounced like EN-grum in which case “in grimm” is passable and this is cool. Tight end set up tie in works also
Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy
Cool np. Justify/proof aren’t quite the same thing, connection’s a little tenuous. Split you in half & you bleed tie in is good though and overall I like it

Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
Cool. Basic np flip but execution’s adequate
think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
Cool. Punch is good. Wp is simple but the way it all ties in works
Ya whole careers on ice! And in contention we all agree on voting him off
So bring all ya methods to summit the peak. Only one I need to beat you’d Wim Hof
Is wim hof meant to be a wp? If so it didn’t work for me. If not, too basic/not punchy enough to compensate
Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine
Alright. Seasoned and herbs wps are olllld but the personal aspect helps and it’s worded strongly for the punch
Your lines are garbage too, recycled n all we finding is crap
Got aspirations to trap? Ya bars sooo full of filler Slim Jim tried to sign him to rap
Ehhh. You did as well as you could with this punch wise but the wp/flip is just not doing it for me
No runner ups in this race, all these voters ballots goin for me
So as long as I’m here you best Biden ya time… like Kamala’s presidency
Nah seen Biden plays before and the punch wasn’t that strong here


This battle is very close IMO. I’ve had to re-read and come back to it a few times. JG had streak, telekinesis, Indian cuisine that were all pretty cool. The other three I didn’t really like. KS had burst out which was basic but OK, not as creative as JG’s lines I liked. But the giants bar and the justify one were probably the best bars of the battle to me. Not by a lot, though. But enough. Other three bars of his were so-so. So let’s call it three quotables each, with KS having the very slightly better ones. Good shit fellas.

V/ KS

That win list a Bad Look, I’ll tear this lame fuck
It says allot, when your biggest win’s a guy who wear’s makeup
not bad opener..
Faggot! Any muscle you fight?…leaves you rattled pal
You’ve taken on that dick Great… & ur ass gets sore w/e you battle Phal
I seen the concept.. not bad..
I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
cool..
Battling ain’t your habitat! It’s nothing to choke & dead Grimm
Or this gun have his heart ‘Burst Out’ like Fresh W/votes against him
lol nice..
Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
ehh seemed a little streched..
Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy
nice closer...

vs

Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
nice opener..
think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
had soooo much potential but just missed the way it was worded..
Ya whole careers on ice! And in contention we all agree on voting him off
So bring all ya methods to summit the peak. Only one I need to beat you’d Wim Hof
nah..
Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine
decent concept.. just not really feeling this..
Your lines are garbage too, recycled n all we finding is crap
Got aspirations to trap? Ya bars sooo full of filler Slim Jim tried to sign him to rap
okay..
No runner ups in this race, all these voters ballots goin for me
So as long as I’m here you best Biden ya time… like Kamala’s presidency
not a great closer..

I feel like this was fairly matched. However, I felt Justice would of easily taken this if he reworded some of his concepts. Because the concepts like the telekensis line and Indian Cuisine line had so much potential but just fell short for me.. although I did feel like he had LOTB with the Kill spree/dogs/streak line. Kill came slightly more consistent - maybe less creative concepts but overall more solid hits..

V/Kill

Kill Spree wins 4-2.