Wk 5: Plethora(1-0) Vs Unfukwitable(1-2)[open for votes]

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@Kill Spree picked unfuk as the odds on favorite to win 70/30..



shit like a smash, murder, marry game til his remains rot in a blaze
u chose Fuk,Kill.. but his fam gonna have a hard time deciding between body & face
battled Graves & lost the fight like a disease riddled alcoholic bum
that Scrumptious left nothing but crumbs outta u when it was all said & done
yeah before battlin him u were extra loud, now look at dudes face
i mean let's be real Un,Packed made u settle down into a quiet new place
ur cute bae went crazy, reaching for the ceiling when i poked her
she was climbing up the wall to get that nut, looked like spiderman vs. vulture
shouldn't be born, but ya dad a bum for fuckn a huge cooch that night
cuz Amandas know when to pull out of the big one like the Nunes fight
PG beat u many times. that big-domed nigga knows u shook
got exposed by Superhead way before karrine stephans wrote a book
u know whats good when they ask "who-raw"? its pleth #straightfacts
for u "Hoorah" is heard right b4 goin down in flames like the marine plane crash
PG vs. Lesnar escalated quickly.. its like the tiny bird in ur draws
cuz that little beef got outta hand real fast.. like when ya girl jerking u off








16.

Metal tucked, u'll get the buck if it don't register;
I'm shootin til it's empty... & I got it by the plethora.
got a .357, a couple Mac10's and hunnids of drums;
But the Macklemore than likely be the judge if u Under the Gunn.
roll on'em in a foggy whip, 9's layin across the quads for this;
u even budgets goin out the window & I Madoff hittin w.e Ponzi wit.
Checkmate!, Ya death dates signed U'll catch a rocket in the mist;
got a Deadstock for the Human Race & u can lick the bottom of the kicks.
all that talkin got me wantin to buss ya nose wide;
& we'll only make a mends where - ever u come to get the Clothesline.
Add some base when u speak... 50% more volume or atleast close to that;
U tryna find a Buffer voice but sound like u should only Host the match.
I'm robbin u on sight Idc if the chrome is equip;
buildin a Birds Nest is the only way u'll make it home w/ the sticks.
I'm breakin his neck.. death or paralysis is the fate of whats next;
& if he Heelys gonna be rollin out instead of taking a step.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by plethora

@Kill Spree picked unfuk as the odds on favorite to win 70/30..



shit like a smash, murder, marry game til his remains rot in a blaze
u chose Fuk,Kill.. but his fam gonna have a hard time deciding between body & face

☆☆☆☆☆ rofl this was actually dope af


battled Graves & lost the fight like a disease riddled alcoholic bum
that Scrumptious left nothing but crumbs outta u when it was all said & done

☆☆☆

yeah before battlin him u were extra loud, now look at dudes face
i mean let's be real Un,Packed made u settle down into a quiet new place

☆☆☆☆☆

ur cute bae went crazy, reaching for the ceiling when i poked her
she was climbing up the wall to get that nut, looked like spiderman vs. vulture

☆☆☆☆☆

shouldn't be born, but ya dad a bum for fuckn a huge cooch that night
cuz Amandas know when to pull out of the big one like the Nunes fight

☆☆☆☆☆

PG beat u many times. that big-domed nigga knows u shook
got exposed by Superhead way before karrine stephans wrote a book

☆☆☆☆☆

u know whats good when they ask "who-raw"? its pleth #straightfacts
for u "Hoorah" is heard right b4 goin down in flames like the marine plane crash

☆☆☆ really wish u didn't use a simile for this, you're better than that bro, you could of flipped this without using a simile for real, reconsider using them in the future, they're a crutch for lesser talented writers

PG vs. Lesnar escalated quickly.. its like the tiny bird in ur draws
cuz that little beef got outta hand real fast.. like when ya girl jerking u off

☆☆☆☆☆







16.

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Originally Posted by Unfukwitable

Metal tucked, u'll get the buck if it don't register;
I'm shootin til it's empty... & I got it by the plethora.

☆☆☆☆☆

got a .357, a couple Mac10's and hunnids of drums;
But the Macklemore than likely be the judge if u Under the Gunn.

☆☆☆☆☆

roll on'em in a foggy whip, 9's layin across the quads for this;
u even budgets goin out the window & I Madoff hittin w.e Ponzi wit.

☆☆☆☆☆ nice execution

Checkmate!, Ya death dates signed U'll catch a rocket in the mist;
got a Deadstock for the Human Race & u can lick the bottom of the kicks.

☆☆☆

all that talkin got me wantin to buss ya nose wide;
& we'll only make a mends where - ever u come to get the Clothesline.

☆☆☆

Add some base when u speak... 50% more volume or atleast close to that;
U tryna find a Buffer voice but sound like u should only Host the match.

☆☆☆☆☆

I'm robbin u on sight Idc if the chrome is equip;
buildin a Birds Nest is the only way u'll make it home w/ the sticks.

☆☆☆

I'm breakin his neck.. death or paralysis is the fate of whats next;
& if he Heelys gonna be rollin out instead of taking a step.

☆☆☆☆☆

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This shit was bananas. Both of you spazzed on each other with a bunch of creative material. You guys have similar styles, you just execute your concepts differently in terms of impact. I think if Unfuk would have found some dirt on Pleth he would of been able to counter Pleth's personals. I think Pleth took the win here based on that. Props to both of you.

v-Pleth

Pleth: body and face was crazy dopeee, crumbs was okay, quiet new place was dope. Spider-Man vs culture was cool. Nunes was cool. Super head was good lmaoo. Hoorah was wack to me . Jerking off was bad.

Vs

Un: plethora was good, under gunn was wack. I didn't get the ponzi line. Deadstock was okay, clothesline was good. Buffer was dope. Wasn't feeling bird home at all. Heelys was dope.

Overall: dope battle, nice read from both. Greedy had some really creative flips.. super witty, I honestly have greedy taking this comfortably .. un had a solid verse but nothing really matched up to any of greedys best lines

Vote: shafi

Wtf

Plethora opener
Unpacked
Outta hand

Vs

Buffer voice
Heelys
Macklemore was cool also

Those were the best lines in both verses I just thought pleth didn't miss at all through the verse and I didn't like a few of unfuks lines , with that said just alone on consistency gotta go plethora


Good battle


Vote pleth

shit like a smash, murder, marry game til his remains rot in a blaze
u chose Fuk,Kill.. but his fam gonna have a hard time deciding between body & face
battled Graves & lost the fight like a disease riddled alcoholic bum
that Scrumptious left nothing but crumbs outta u when it was all said & done
yeah before battlin him u were extra loud, now look at dudes face
i mean let's be real Un,Packed made u settle down into a quiet new place
PG vs. Lesnar escalated quickly.. its like the tiny bird in ur draws
cuz that little beef got outta hand real fast.. like when ya girl jerking u off

vs

roll on'em in a foggy whip, 9's layin across the quads for this;
u even budgets goin out the window & I Madoff hittin w.e Ponzi wit.
U tryna find a Buffer voice but sound like u should only Host the match.
I'm robbin u on sight Idc if the chrome is equip;
buildin a Birds Nest is the only way u'll make it home w/ the sticks.

Good battle. Both had fire verses. Pleth threw in personals against Fuk, and he pulled out creativity in those bars. Those were dope and hit hard. Fuk had some dope concepts, strong punches, and overall he came wit flames. But Pleth one upped Fuk with the personals and constructed a better verse from that. Good battle guys. It was good read.

v/ Pleth

plth wins