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'This-whore-is-wack' muhfucka i'll 'scortch-ya-back'
^^Think typing like that will give ya gay shit more of a impact?
Watch the green pile, muhfucka back up - i'm mean & wild
Ya punchlines are so worn out..
Peeps mistake 'em for the new jeans style
Mention me? i'll stomp ya face to the dirt & end this geek
Til ya so grounded.. u can't hang w/ ya friends for a week
Ya losing sanity - matter of fact, u can't even hold it
Ur just a bitch wrapped up in 'the net' like Sandra Bullock
This wack fuck's rep: weak personals & sluggish flowing
Hell, even saw some hippies lick it to get their buzzes going
10. post up kiddo
This is a 'birthday party gone bad'.... I'll 'bruise-this-clown'--
Attack ya chest.. like 'UK hold ups' I got you 'losin-pounds'--
Well 'daaaaaaaaaaamn', I haven't seen a rookie like-this--
'Turnin this fag off' faster than his own damn 'light-switch'--*
There's many different ways to lose son.. One-is-to-test-this--
Like 'powerful toilets' I'll always be 'crushin-your-best-shit'--
You suck as it is, and then you go addin-them-bare-bars-in--
Servin ya wit more 'Knicks' than 'Madison-Square-Garden'--
Cuz like the 'old saying' says, your shits just 'so last-week'--
Put 'Miami in a briefcase' an you still couldn't 'pack-Heat'--
*One of his open mic's is called "a light switch"..
seige=ok verse son nice punches..they need more to them then jus talkin shit thou....vocab was lackin too cuz....the content wasnt all that but it was about as good as your structure....average....ova all decent job
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'This-whore-is-wack' muhfucka i'll 'scortch-ya-back'
^^Think typing like that will give ya gay shit more of a impact?
talk=nice punches some of them hit hard some were average...more vocab then the last dude......consistent flow and structure.....may have seen some multiz in there too......nice verse dawg
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You suck as it is, and then you go addin-them-bare-bars-in--
Servin ya wit more 'Knicks' than 'Madison-Square-Garden'--
vote=talk
lmao, son that was my worst bar .. learn how to vote beav
can we get some real votes in here
I would vote, on this. But apparently my vote is useless until I reach 100 posts, to poll.
Man...i aint even gon break down.
Siege - Liked ur opener, coupla other bars after was aight, rest was weak. Didnt come hard but u done did enough here.
Talk - Dont put the ' ' around worplay cuz if its there n good we will catch it. Also, dont do "-" for multis. Other then that ur shit lacked punches cept ur closure, the rest was shit talk bout whatchu gon do to him or whatchu skills is compared to him. Aint feelin that son.
Vote - Siege.
Good Luck Fellas. :thumbup:
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^^Hahahaha, whatever, even though I had a punch in every bar..
man this went 2 Talk easily
Siege-so lame wtf(wordplay-none/punches-u wish u had some wtf was that man come on ow aim at Talk once/structure-dont get me started u were off so many times/perosnals-get real yall he had none)4/10 for effort
Talk-so so easy fa u mane(punches-you had some in evry bar fa real compared to his air vented shit/personlas-i saw when u went fa some/wordplay-was there i liked the effort it suited teh battle/structure-man the structure almost made me laugh at his man urs was perfect everything lines up)u get a 8/10
v-talk
The vote didn't go through yo.. :S:S:S:S:S:S:S:S:S
Yo My Vote Goes To Talk
I found talk had punches in his verse like every line and he kept on track.
On the other hand Siege i think his style needs improvement cuz the 2 lines that suked i thought n threw off his battle verse was
Mention me? i'll stomp ya face to the dirt & end this geek
Til ya so grounded.. u can't hang w/ ya friends for a week
I think that was played out that was my opinion Vote up
LMFAO at talk he bit and ill be providin links once i find them ive seen a number of those punches on HF...ill send the link to Admin cuz i dont want to be banned for advertising another site..but i seen that shit...peace
Yeah, ok proove it, I didn't bite.. Uppin.......^^
u bit, hope not, cuz that wuz some hot shyt even wit all da"..." n shyt
Don't worry, I didn't bite.. He prolly saw something like one of my lines and flipped out.. Anyways.. VOTE!!
haha none of it was bit sry...it was just really damn close to bein bit...anyways my bad..1
You shouldn't accuse people of biting without having the proof jackass.
Ok, that's enough fellas..
Last uppin........^^
Siege...
This-whore-is-wack' muhfucka i'll 'scortch-ya-back'
^^Think typing like that will give ya gay shit more of a impact?
not hard.
Watch the green pile, muhfucka back up - i'm mean & wild
Ya punchlines are so worn out..
could of been better.
Peeps mistake 'em for the new jeans style
Mention me? i'll stomp ya face to the dirt & end this geek
Til ya so grounded.. u can't hang w/ ya friends for a week
lol...ok, little chuckle.
Ya losing sanity - matter of fact, u can't even hold it
Ur just a bitch wrapped up in 'the net' like Sandra Bullock
i've heard many Sanddra Bullock punches, this was ehh.
This wack fuck's rep: weak personals & sluggish flowing
Hell, even saw some hippies lick it to get their buzzes going
lol...decent
Talksick...
This is a 'birthday party gone bad'.... I'll 'bruise-this-clown'--
Attack ya chest.. like 'UK hold ups' I got you 'losin-pounds'--
dont like it
Well 'daaaaaaaaaaamn', I haven't seen a rookie like-this--
'Turnin this fag off' faster than his own damn 'light-switch'--*
weak.
There's many different ways to lose son.. One-is-to-test-this--
Like 'powerful toilets' I'll always be 'crushin-your-best-shit'--
Blah...played as hell.
You suck as it is, and then you go addin-them-bare-bars-in--
Servin ya wit more 'Knicks' than 'Madison-Square-Garden'--
ok.
Cuz like the 'old saying' says, your shits just 'so last-week'--
Put 'Miami in a briefcase' an you still couldn't 'pack-Heat'--
weak..could of been better
Siege wins this pretty easy in my opinion, Talksick came pretty
played and weak in his verse nothing really stood out nor nothing
i liked either, siege came witha more wit and a much better verse
with more original n better thought out concepts/punches. 2 lines
made me laugh, nothing to good but enought to take the win.
Siege wins with a better overall verse and harder punches.
Talksick get rid of the "-*/" and all that other shit from your verse,
it makes it less interesting to read and sometimes harder to follow
same thing goes with the red font, all of that was pointless.
V/ Siege - just better
pz
shoulda thought about that b4Quote:
Originally Posted by BraGGin' Rights
seige - you came hard with good punches and very good personals....i think seige had better structure.....'This-whore-is-wack' muhfucka i'll 'scortch-ya-back'
^^Think typing like that will give ya gay shit more of a impact?
you came out strong that was a good personal.....and punch i really liked that..you also had good metas
talk-u came aight not as ahrd as seige...but you would come with a wack or played line like this
There's many different ways to lose son.. One-is-to-test-this--
Like 'powerful toilets' I'll always be 'crushin-your-best-shit'--
that was wack...u also didnt really have any good personals....you could have been more clever
v/seige for being more clever and haveing better punches/personals
uppin
siege came better to be honest
Vote to talk because he had more wordplay he turned around meanings and shit and to me that is creative.
siege u did a good job to man u had some decent shit to be honest i laughed at both ya rhymes cause they both wuz funny.
VOTE=TALK