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12-1...impressive,he's been whoring kat's..of thinking he spits tighter
Are you gay?cause the way you and TexT act..is loose like dick ryders
OK
thinkin your guy's style is dope..to much miss cleo..really ya not gifted
safty pin a rainbow on ya jacket..to much zoloft,is why ya brains Twizted
GOOD
thinkin that once me and him were cool..I admire it..really its so Ador-a-ble
you have 3 blade's but there aint no trilogy....or any since of Or-a-cle
NO
punches remain harmless..the way he Dakota Fanning's..wit Hide and Seek
how does ass feel when kat's dickryde...or when you slide in TexT deep
NO
I'm a end it like this..the only franchise is francis..from all of Mary-land
get a grip on reality..tell the dirty bird's come back from Fairy-land
OK
6/10
Quit now.... I'm referring to you as ThePond the way you fulla ducks
And no, I aint gotta point out cannibals to know this "member" sucks.
OK
Dawg you must be God, the way whenever you drop a verse you just "bore"*
Kid couldnt hit on target if he was trying to get pussy from a store.
NO
Pfft... Assazin? You should battle camels... Cuz you BOTH spit sloppy
And yo writing a right verse be the only way ya shit gettin copied.
NO
Got this? You a fag bitch..Only piloting flyweights for the cock-pit
Ya gonna have to fill your ass with steroids before you make "hot shit"
PLAYED 2ND LINE
Only time ya reflectin on past mistakes is when ya lookin in the mirror!
Look this kitten bares arms! ...When his ass is gettin fingered.
OK
5.5/10
v/assazin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=168150&page=2
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bump up 2 aight then pz........................................
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bump 3 pz.....................................
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12-1...impressive,he's been whoring kat's..of thinking he spits tighter
Are you gay?cause the way you and TexT act..is loose like dick ryders
Aiight opener..not thaqt great i'll say 6/10
thinkin your guy's style is dope..to much miss cleo..really ya not gifted
safty pin a rainbow on ya jacket..to much zoloft,is why ya brains Twizted
Again really not that good..but a personal nontheless...6/10
thinkin that once me and him were cool..I admire it..really its so Ador-a-ble
you have 3 blade's but there aint no trilogy....or any since of Or-a-cle
Again..needed to deliver better..worded wrong..5/10
punches remain harmless..the way he Dakota Fanning's..wit Hide and Seek
how does ass feel when kat's dickryde...or when you slide in TexT deep
Meh...6/10
I'm a end it like this..the only franchise is francis..from all of Mary-land
get a grip on reality..tell the dirty bird's come back from Fairy-land
NO...4/10
Overall= 27/50
Twizted's verse
Quit now.... I'm referring to you as ThePond the way you fulla ducks
And no, I aint gotta point out cannibals to know this "member" sucks.
Eh..kinda here n there...6/10
Dawg you must be God, the way whenever you drop a verse you just "bore"*
Kid couldnt hit on target if he was trying to get pussy from a store.
LOL...NO....whack...very weak...4/10
Pfft... Assazin? You should battle camels... Cuz you BOTH spit sloppy
And yo writing a right verse be the only way ya shit gettin copied.
No....again 5/10
Got this? You a fag bitch..Only piloting flyweights for the cock-pit
Ya gonna have to fill your ass with steroids before you make "hot shit"
No No No.//..u got it all wrong..thats weak..played concept...5/10
Only time ya reflectin on past mistakes is when ya lookin in the mirror!
Look this kitten bares arms! ...When his ass is gettin fingered.
Eh..decent closer...6/10
Overall= 26/50
Weak battle...seen beter from both..but twizted woulda won..if he didn't come wit so many played concepts..but good shoiwn by both..props
Vote=Assazin
Honest^
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12-1...impressive,he's been whoring kat's..of thinking he spits tighter
Are you gay?cause the way you and TexT act..is loose like dick ryders
kool....>>>
thinkin your guy's style is dope..to much miss cleo..really ya not gifted
safty pin a rainbow on ya jacket..to much zoloft,is why ya brains Twizted
nice, feelin it....>>>>>>>
thinkin that once me and him were cool..I admire it..really its so Ador-a-ble
you have 3 blade's but there aint no trilogy....or any since of Or-a-cle
your best line>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
punches remain harmless..the way he Dakota Fanning's..wit Hide and Seek
how does ass feel when kat's dickryde...or when you slide in TexT deep
lol enough with the text, funny still>>>>
I'm a end it like this..the only franchise is francis..from all of Mary-land
get a grip on reality..tell the dirty bird's come back from Fairy-land
blah>>>
Quit now.... I'm referring to you as ThePond the way you fulla ducks
And no, I aint gotta point out cannibals to know this "member" sucks.
1st line kool... 2nd line blah>>>>
Dawg you must be God, the way whenever you drop a verse you just "bore"*
Kid couldnt hit on target if he was trying to get pussy from a store.
seen too many target flips>>>>>>>>>
Pfft... Assazin? You should battle camels... Cuz you BOTH spit sloppy
And yo writing a right verse be the only way ya shit gettin copied.
doesnt work>>>>>>>>>>
Got this? You a fag bitch..Only piloting flyweights for the cock-pit
Ya gonna have to fill your ass with steroids before you make "hot shit"
ummmm, what?? steroids? hot shit? dunno>>>>>>>
Only time ya reflectin on past mistakes is when ya lookin in the mirror!
Look this kitten bares arms! ...When his ass is gettin fingered.
kool...>>>>
basically this was an alright battle, coulda been better, both had some valid points, both had ups n downs.. assazin had the best line, and was a little more consistant, i'd give him a 7 and twizted a 6.. had some playd lines.. little inconsistant.. flows were about even, personals went to assazzin.. i'd say he edged it with consistancy and the best line vote=assazzin
hit this up honestly plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168248
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both came dope nice verses from both but gotta say one was throwing nice personals while the other was throwing nice punches so thats what it comes down to Twizted he was throwing hard hitting and constant punches even though Assazin was throwing nice personals it kinda got stuck in just that so got to go with the hard hitting verse no hate just an honest vote peace
V. Twizted
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i think that twizted took this for sure..his punches just hit tha spot...assazian your personal punches showed that you tried to hard but good try kid...................
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bump 4 aight then pz............out...................
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uppin my final and last time pz...........out..........
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twisted had the better verse.. more punchlines better personals and some nice similies, comparisons.. asszin your verse was just lacking hard hitting stuff and some of your lines didnt make much sense your personals could have been alot harder also
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i vote twistesd his stuff made more sense and more and better punches, so he wins.... hit my battles both of you i would appreciate nice job y'all....... v/TWIZTED.
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nothing.
vs.
Dawg you must be God, the way whenever you drop a verse you just "bore"*
Kid couldnt hit on target if he was trying to get pussy from a store.
Pfft... Assazin? You should battle camels... Cuz you BOTH spit sloppy
And yo writing a right verse be the only way ya shit gettin copied.
wasn't feelin any of Assazin's punches.. itallics are wack.. and so is this..:
"ador-a-ble"...
"or-a-cle"...
i mean, come on.. the fuck is that shit? anyway, work on your concepts and wording to make them harder hitting.. your flow was alright.. structure was annoying with the itallics n dashes.. kinda herbish actually. yea, and unless you come with extremely witty dickriding punches, don't use them.. they're played n you used them in two lines.. and in a ten line verse, that's a :nono:
Twizted, you could improve on your punches too.. concepts could be wittier.. could word them better to make them harder hitting.. your flow and structure was better.. and you had the best two punches of this battle.. which is why you take this.
v/ -Twizted-
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12-1...impressive,he's been whoring kat's..of thinking he spits tighter
Are you gay?cause the way you and TexT act..is loose like dick ryders
IGHT
thinkin your guy's style is dope..to much miss cleo..really ya not gifted
safty pin a rainbow on ya jacket..to much zoloft,is why ya brains Twizted
NOT BAD
thinkin that once me and him were cool..I admire it..really its so Ador-a-ble
you have 3 blade's but there aint no trilogy....or any since of Or-a-cle
NICE
punches remain harmless..the way he Dakota Fanning's..wit Hide and Seek
how does ass feel when kat's dickryde...or when you slide in TexT deep
NA
I'm a end it like this..the only franchise is francis..from all of Mary-land
get a grip on reality..tell the dirty bird's come back from Fairy-land
NA
Quit now.... I'm referring to you as ThePond the way you fulla ducks
And no, I aint gotta point out cannibals to know this "member" sucks.
NICE
Dawg you must be God, the way whenever you drop a verse you just "bore"*
Kid couldnt hit on target if he was trying to get pussy from a store.
BEST LINES FROM BATTLE
Pfft... Assazin? You should battle camels... Cuz you BOTH spit sloppy
And yo writing a right verse be the only way ya shit gettin copied.
LOL
Got this? You a fag bitch..Only piloting flyweights for the cock-pit
Ya gonna have to fill your ass with steroids before you make "hot shit"
NA
Only time ya reflectin on past mistakes is when ya lookin in the mirror!
Look this kitten bares arms! ...When his ass is gettin fingered.
GOOD
V/TWIZTED. HAD HARDER HITTING PUNCHES AND LESS FILLERS, ASSAZIN CAME CLOSE BUT TWITZED EDGED THIS WITH HIS 2ND TO LAST LINE.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=168915
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