WK 5 Contenders: DZasteR(3-1) Vs Kill Spree(2-0)[open for votes]

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@DzasteR

This my check in

check.

Let's go 12.

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Originally Posted by DzasteR

check.

Let's go 12.

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Requesting the ext just in case. I should have my verse tomorrow after work tho

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Originally Posted by Kill Spree

Requesting the ext just in case. I should have my verse tomorrow after work tho

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you got it - ima need one as well. I should be able to post tomorrow morning or afternoon

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Originally Posted by DzasteR over Art Vs Me FL Champ match

I wanna see this champ match happen..

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Originally Posted by Dzaster in week 3 interview w/me

Give me your top five current battlers on RB...
Art.
Packed
Broke Back
Let
Spree

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Allen knight and Fuk No Showed him



Listen Faggot...
Beef W/Grimm In FL, dont make U tough guy! I'll hit lame W/Toys
League agreed U got Lucky W/Gal... & Still U tryin to Spit Game @BOYZ
& IF U had a hoe? After I tap her dome? punches'll drop guy
We can argue Over head love... Right after U tell'er why Spree's In ur top five
Ledger This knockout, homo get dropped NOW! D Leaving this rappin
sayin he favors Broke Back isn't the only showing he's scene as a faggot!
U & dope? Isnt choosed to Mold! K let led grow on'a punk kid
W/Age U'll never amount to art Orchil..S'why I'll have Ur body found covered in Fungis
Homo U got here by No Shows, So I'll damage yuh health
Knight, FUk N BOYZ... Just words describing the way U'll shine handling a belt!
Dude is rattled when I punch through his jaw bone, Leave'em In Aw
Whole season was "Open For Feed" Now I'll leave him digesting food through a straw
My bars A Danger! Fright! Kill U before champ match to make it right
Leave yuh brain W/no Memory to the point Broke couldnt Explain ya life
@Deza steR went 14 I think. alchohal wins

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Spree how’d I end up with you? Lol its obv this lame’s finished
You mod a lot of dope battles – too bad we never see your name in it
Lol you even tried to start a crew – come on why even attempt it?
A shame, Empire blew over.....the same way THAT season ended
I’ll destroy you boy…….my fists’ll imprint scars in ya face
With a force so hard that’ll pop ya Melanin….regardless ya race
I throw haymakers, punches make ya head turn – the arm is extreme
And your haymakers turn’n bale……...just like a farmer’s routine
Your career is fake…you been more a hype man than a battler, its horrendous
& no matter Wakanda BS you make up – even Black Panther wouldn't defend it
12K posts of you beggin ppl to like you - no doubt if this fool’s stable
Pull the sticks out - drop 6 holes in his top…....that’s a pool table
K literally PICKS his battles.. you scared of anyone else beating ya?
You even went so low with Iron... but only got hit with anemia
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14.

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Originally Posted by Kill Spree

Allen knight and Fuk No Showed him



Listen Faggot...
Beef W/Grimm In FL, dont make U tough guy! I'll hit lame W/Toys
League agreed U got Lucky W/Gal... & Still U tryin to Spit Game @BOYZ

☆☆☆☆☆

& IF U had a hoe? After I tap her dome? punches'll drop guy
We can argue Over head love... Right after U tell'er why Spree's In ur top five

☆☆☆

Ledger This knockout, homo get dropped NOW! D Leaving this rappin
sayin he favors Broke Back isn't the only showing he's scene as a faggot!

☆☆☆☆☆ i was going to give this ☆ star but u flipped it pretty nice because that's exactly what he said, if u would have used brokeback in any other way i would have disregarded this bar

U & dope? Isnt choosed to Mold! K let led grow on'a punk kid
W/Age U'll never amount to art Orchil..S'why I'll have Ur body found covered in Fungis

☆☆☆

Homo U got here by No Shows, So I'll damage yuh health
Knight, FUk N BOYZ... Just words describing the way U'll shine handling a belt!

☆☆☆

Dude is rattled when I punch through his jaw bone, Leave'em In Aw
Whole season was "Open For Feed" Now I'll leave him digesting food through a straw

☆☆☆☆☆

My bars A Danger! Fright! Kill U before champ match to make it right
Leave yuh brain W/no Memory to the point Broke couldnt Explain ya life

☆☆☆☆☆
@Deza steR went 14 I think. alchohal wins

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Originally Posted by DzasteR

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Spree how’d I end up with you? Lol its obv this lame’s finished
You mod a lot of dope battles – too bad we never see your name in it

☆☆☆☆☆

Lol you even tried to start a crew – come on why even attempt it?
A shame, Empire blew over.....the same way THAT season ended

☆☆☆

I’ll destroy you boy…….my fists’ll imprint scars in ya face
With a force so hard that’ll pop ya Melanin….regardless ya race

☆☆☆☆☆

I throw haymakers, punches make ya head turn – the arm is extreme
And your haymakers turn’n bale……...just like a farmer’s routine

☆☆☆☆☆

Your career is fake…you been more a hype man than a battler, its horrendous
& no matter Wakanda BS you make up – even Black Panther wouldn't defend it

☆☆☆ wakanda and what kinda are completely different so this wordplay came off forced to me, but damn bro this was dope so I'm going to give u credit for it

12K posts of you beggin ppl to like you - no doubt if this fool’s stable
Pull the sticks out - drop 6 holes in his top…....that’s a pool table

☆☆☆☆☆

K literally PICKS his battles.. you scared of anyone else beating ya?
You even went so low with Iron... but only got hit with anemia

☆☆☆
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14.

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This battle was great. You guys came out of this with an equal amount of quotes and did your best to attack each other with creative personals. I really want to give this battle to DzasteR because he stepped his game way the fuck up for this. Dude wasn't fucking around. But after reading through the verses multiple times I have to give it to Spree. His personals were constructed just a little bit better.

v-Spree

Spree: game at boys was okay, top 5 was good, scene as a faggt was bad. Fungis was wack. Handling a belt was bad. Open 4 feed was dope asf. No memory was a bad closer

Vs

Dz: opener was a dope personal. Empire was okay, melon in was ill. Farmers routine was okay. Wasn't feeling black panther. Pool table was dope. Anemia was a decent closer.

Overall: decent battle. I have dz winning this just by his wording alone, his concepts were good as well.. however KS's concepts are too, but tbh, his wording kills him no pun intended. All those typos and shit just mess up the flow of the bar tbh.

Vote: dz

Dude is rattled when I punch through his jaw bone, Leave'em In Aw
Whole season was "Open For Feed" Now I'll leave him digesting food through a straw

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Spree how’d I end up with you? Lol its obv this lame’s finished
You mod a lot of dope battles – too bad we never see your name in it
I’ll destroy you boy…….my fists’ll imprint scars in ya face
With a force so hard that’ll pop ya Melanin….regardless ya race


those were the stand out bars to me. sprees opener was cool too, top 5 was ok, feel like u could have used that a lot better. then wasn't feeling much until open for feed which was probably lotb. wasn't really feeling the closer. DZ had the quoted bars, turn n bale u could hit harder. pool table was decent. overall a smoother verse with better wording which made the difference for me.

vote DZ

Beef W/Grimm In FL, dont make U tough guy! I'll hit lame W/Toys
League agreed U got Lucky W/Gal... & Still U tryin to Spit Game @BOYZ
& IF U had a hoe? After I tap her dome? punches'll drop guy
We can argue Over head love... Right after U tell'er why Spree's In ur top five
U & dope? Isnt choosed to Mold! K let led grow on'a punk kid
W/Age U'll never amount to art Orchil..S'why I'll have Ur body found covered in Fungis
Dude is rattled when I punch through his jaw bone, Leave'em In Aw
Whole season was "Open For Feed" Now I'll leave him digesting food through a straw

Vs.

Lol you even tried to start a crew – come on why even attempt it?
A shame, Empire blew over.....the same way THAT season ended
I’ll destroy you boy…….my fists’ll imprint scars in ya face
With a force so hard that’ll pop ya Melanin….regardless ya race
I throw haymakers, punches make ya head turn – the arm is extreme
And your haymakers turn’n bale……...just like a farmer’s routine
Your career is fake…you been more a hype man than a battler, its horrendous
& no matter Wakanda BS you make up – even Black Panther wouldn't defend it



Simply, Dz had more. Entertaining battle

Spree

Opener was ok
Top five was ok
Too much broke back joints.. this was different in a way but still broke back/ faggot wasn't digin it a lot..
Art orchil was good
Knight fuk n boys was ehh
Open for feed was dope
Closer was cool

Diz

Opener was nice
Empire was ok
Melanin was nice
Turn n bale was dope
Wakanda was forced
Pool table was cool
Closer was ehh

Damn good battle folks.. both had a couple misses, n I liked the personal approach from both I just felt diz hit a tad harder with his n why I'm leaning toward him.. was a tough one to judge but I got diz by a hair.. good shit

Diz

Spree: Gal Boyz personal was ok little simple n basic
Top five couldve been worded better
Broke Back flips played
ORCHIL wp was cool slight force
Open for feed and closer were dope

DZ

Opener ok personal impact was simple basic
Empire flips seen alot wasnt feeling the flip
Melanin wp was dope
Turn n bale was nice
Wakanda slight force but real dope attempt

Spree some wording hurt u here on potential hits. I really liked the open for and closer i thought those hit hard and kind of saved u cuz u had some light hits too. Dz wakanda turn m bale were cool also melanin good creativity. I still feel spree had the two harder hits just overall good impact.

V/Spree

D wins