Re: WineO vs. Stryfe (OPEN FOR VOTES)
'm a Grizzly Skoaling this dog to pieces, he's all bark and tucking his tail too
I'd say you size up but you'd have to bite, to have more than you could chew
didnt conect well to the set up here.
Straight up strafing stryfe, i'm blasting this bastard to a bloody pulp and all
if he's bringing guns, it's him painting the picture of his death on the wall
coulda been dope but aight
Fucking strife is the master, bating thoughts of aggression in his mind right
Kinda like how he gets tons of pussy, by taking it out on his dick at night
weak
This puny bitch needs to be beaten until he stops breathing, yeah it's said
Cause if his jive ass shit makes you feel alive, then im already fucking dead
played flip
His name says it all, he thinks he's great I don't, so let's agree to disagree yo
Change the Y to an A and i'll use his name, to literally backfire on him bro
coulda landed harder but too basic
vs
let ur gums flap n get beaten, im cold sober so fuck what this dumb faggot is thinkin
if Wine try to Cloud Strife judgment...then this Buster Sword'll cut back on his drinkin
not feelin it. got too wordy
every fatigued scheme u flip is pleadin for help, there's no way ur thick reaches r felt
ur verse is like Vampire Hunter D's left hand..that weak piece of shit speaks for itself
lol i messes wit it
ill was thrashin ur soft ass, now ur stuck in a fuckin rut cuz ur wack n u drop trash
Kay wet ur rep up n ur still damp from Liquid after Guerrero's patented frog splash
naw not feelin it
u need to start rappin fire, ever since ur girl left ur feeble heart lack desire
now the pink got u so bitter..
..when u play MK on Wii u try to key Princess Peach's kart n slash its tires
lmao
u ain't the true meaning of realness, subtle jabs push u from the streets to off-grid
while each Firm body blow leave ur Cormega sore worse than his beef w/ Nas did
dope
stryfe got this easy imo. Wine had a few punches brewin but nothin really landed hard. gotta get more creative
v. stryfe
Re: WineO vs. Stryfe (OPEN FOR VOTES)
WineO
- Liked where this was going, but don't feel like it hit as hard as it could have.
I'm a Grizzly Skoaling this dog to pieces, he's all bark and tucking his tail too
I'd say you size up but you'd have to bite, to have more than you could chew
- Concept here had more potential, just didn't use it to the full capacity
Straight up strafing stryfe, i'm blasting this bastard to a bloody pulp and all
if he's bringing guns, it's him painting the picture of his death on the wall
- Clever, I really liked this one, well put together.
Fucking strife is the master, bating thoughts of aggression in his mind right
Kinda like how he gets tons of pussy, by taking it out on his dick at night
- Standard glove slap here, nothing too heavy.
This puny bitch needs to be beaten until he stops breathing, yeah it's said
Cause if his jive ass shit makes you feel alive, then im already fucking dead
- I get the connection between 'Strafe' and explosion, but backfire, ehhh, again ok concept, didn't feel like it was leveraged to the full extent of the potential...Just a little weak for a closer.
His name says it all, he thinks he's great I don't, so let's agree to disagree yo
Change the Y to an A and i'll use his name, to literally backfire on him bro
Overall 4.5/10 - Ok concepts, poor execution.
Stryfe
- You spiked this punch like an alcoholic volleyball player...Good opener
let ur gums flap n get beaten, im cold sober so fuck what this dumb faggot is thinkin
if Wine try to Cloud Strife judgment...then this Buster Sword'll cut back on his drinkin
- Didn't really feel this one too much, the vague reference
every fatigued scheme u flip is pleadin for help, there's no way ur thick reaches r felt
ur verse is like Vampire Hunter D's left hand..that weak piece of shit speaks for itself
- Good work here...a little vague for me because I don't know these members yet...
ill was thrashin ur soft ass, now ur stuck in a fuckin rut cuz ur wack n u drop trash
Kay wet ur rep up n ur still damp from Liquid after Guerrero's patented frog splash
- Very nice, this one got the point across loud and clear
u need to start rappin fire, ever since ur girl left ur feeble heart lack desire
now the pink got u so bitter..
..when u play MK on Wii u try to key Princess Peach's kart n slash its tires
- Closer was the hardest punch IMO...
u ain't the true meaning of realness, subtle jabs push u from the streets to off-grid
while each Firm body blow leave ur Cormega sore worse than his beef w/ Nas did
Overall - 6/10, Better concepts, couple hard shots, but a couple vague ones prevented a better score from me.
For me STRYFE took this...
For some reason the poll wont take a vote though...
Re: WineO vs. Stryfe (OPEN FOR VOTES)
yo mods just close this and give sryfe the W, he's got it on lock anyway. im down 4-0. it's cool, let him have it
Re: WineO vs. Stryfe (OPEN FOR VOTES)
Wine had some weak concepts didn't think anything was too hard hitting lot of basic concepts that have been done before and executed before. Wine o I read from you before and you're improving you wouldn't even diss your opponents before and not you're slowly getting the hang of this, keep it up. Strife had some cool stuff the frog splash was funny to me made me lol thought that was the lotb and everything else was decent. Vote strife
Re: WineO vs. Stryfe (OPEN FOR VOTES)
5-0 stryfe wins. thanks for all the feed tay I appreciate. finally someone votes lol