Hold of me

Now that i found happiness/
without feminem presence/
no i didn't turn gay/
its just that drugs got a hold of may/
i hope they don't let go any day/
its in eazy game don't go over the limit/
you don't try to flow like z-zibit/
Its a perfect moodswinger/
its like i'm living world witha cigeretfilter/
Makes me enjoy and live easy/
people sooner or later turn slazy/
so thats why i need this shid so i can see exstacy/
sooner or later i'll replace it with beouty next to me/

experiece the feeling humanly not acivable/
feelings tens and outrages unbeliavable/
on some nights you never wanna go down/
to normal realety feelin outa town/
the night beofe it was fuckin amazin/
but got to wait for the buildup of ceratonen/
while your sould leeks all over/
you realize its over/
an other day/
just an other day/

Siting waiten for you to call,/
staring ryming of the wall,/
i can't believe i let if fall,/
just another image tatoot on my eyeball/
i woun't fall hard /
i'll just smoke untill i don't mind/
you gave me a big blow/
but i don't give a fuck i'm loading another bowl/
i regret my steps/
i can't forget couse your face image doesn't colapse/
but i'm getting more chill every day/
still waithen.......... for the devine miss/
untill till then i got to smoke avay the memory's bliss/

upin its been a long fuckin while, give me somthin

Well,
If you want me to be perfectly blunt, I, personally, believe you need to stop thinking about what you are writing and let it pour out. Good flow though, I like how you twist things around to make them work. If it has been a while, hit me with am e-mail and perhaps I can help you out a little bit.

Much respect.

upin