Just Spittin..

i know u not down wit satan but u a hell-of-a-turd,
just an intelligent-nerd spittin irrelivent-words,
u rip these people off.. pay the qauntity its like ya sellin-them-thirds,
get in my face and get cut-up-jagged u just anotha-fagget,
gettin protien from ya lova's-maggets that stick too pubes like magnets,
you onna list.. ill rip u now and remove your existance,
claim to 'walk the walk' but u cant even walk half the distance,
ill flip scripts till ya heads spinned and leave a mental scar,
ill leave u more fucked up then a JACKASS witta rental car,
i got constant stability ya try n punch it but i save my knees,
the good news is you passed a test but it was for h.i.v,
we hear u spit, now we know where the fuckin wackness-at,
bow your fuckin head in shame and never come back unless u practice-rap,

peace.

that was a nice flow my nigga. i liked the punches but try and get just a lil more wordplay in your rhymes. overall this was a good drop........7/10

holla

yeah i thought this was good on flow, but creativity was slightly lackin, it was good in some aspects, just nedded some wordplay and good metas...sumthin like that..aight....see ya!........