This Is My Story-GIVE FEED BACK

Ever Since A Youngbull I Been Threw Some Bullshit/couple Year Older Aint Nothing But Some More Shit/ready-roc On The Strip Got 1 Of My Bulls Hit/relax Wit A Late After The Day Done Went/up Glenmills School 16 Months I Spent/pint Of Henney Few Blues Then Ya Boy Be Bent/and These Scares On My Face I Couldn't Prevent/when I Catch Derrick Whitfeild I Gotta Vent/ima Marry Shy Twizz It Must Be Ment/just Came Up On Twenty,dont Need Ya 2 Cents/you The Pipe And Ima Get My Last Few Hits/dude Broke I Stay Wit Consecutive Flips/nigga's Went Behind My Back And Ran They Fuckin Lips/now Nigga's Let Back While I'm Takin Trips/

This Aint Comin At Nobody On Here

Good drop man. It felt raw, like a freestyle. The only thing i'll say, is that the verse is a bit muddled up. Next time space it out a bit more 'cos I found it hard to follow. But, the flow was good . I reckon this would be a good audio