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...F'edUP,mentalz!
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My twisted mind don’t hesitate for its balance,
I let my flow write itself for less adjustment and standards,
So if you don’t like my verses you can left-click or progress,
Cuz this aint the emmys I wont win shit in advance,
So whether you feeling me or biting my punches,
Know that I didn’t give a fuck and wrote more shit by the bunches,
Cuz that’s---just---my--- style and my-basis,
Creating rhymes, am registered undefined,
And for the record most of these i-net bitches is basic,
Don’t make me take a role and be a judge to they faces,
Logging On to do judgments over these pity niggahs cases
And fuck a murder flow rape these niggahs with diction,
Cuz half these niggahs can’t spell,
So, what’s the point of battling against the comprehension?
Letting My Verbal stick and stand as Bullet Wounds to your head,
Got your flesh on library position staying open and previously read,
We don’t call out names just call out what it is for truth and sake,
And what it is, is that you’re a victim,
A hood pussy fucked by mistake,
So if you take offensive,
Fuck yourself and get over it,
Am a femcee that is unknown, un-existing and so lyte,
Which means am heavy in the spirit, and still un-received,
But my fucking mic-radiance is bright,
But Like any cannibal I’ll eat any niggah who bothers to speak against my insight,
And if you question my position/intellect/skill or personal rights,
I’ll merk your ass from its contraction and smile from the delight! :flipoff:
-Realism-
Links:
Syndrome-Just You
[http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...9#post3217379]
Nan-Just Gotta
[http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...6#post3217406]
(-Read for me, I'll return the Read-)
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I like this piece. deep and good vocab through out. U could have used some bigger words in here to make it more complex and what not.. but overall this was a pretty nice drop.. keep up the good work.
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Thanks for the Quick Reply, thats Always Appreciated...And, Also the Suggestions will be used, I just wrote this without editing, straight from thought, and trust me fam, you'll see how heavy i am, my style is complex and deep, reflects a nas tone with a common evidence to it...look for more....-Realizm-