that peom was good
it was deep
NICE PIECE
8/10
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that peom was good
it was deep
NICE PIECE
8/10
thanks alot and i luv ur sigs they dope as hell....
love the poem
u have a lot of anger and sadness n u........................
let it out and this will bring a new chapter n ya life.................... TRUST ME
after my cousin Donald died i was mad as hell gettin n2 trouble wit da police let the anger and sadness go n a verse and u need 2 do da same...........
how bout a poem 2 dedicate 2 ya sista///////// u will so much better after u write it............ Put your heart first
PEACE AND LOVE
thnks but after Nikkie left it was hard i dont have time for school but i make time and i manage 4 jobs NOW....and it is hard u try living in my shoes for 24 hrs u would hate it...
nice peice felt the imagery creativity was fine......complexity was good cud of been better but good ...keep it up ill be looking for more peices from u....oh yeah and i also liked how the title matched the peice...and go hit up ma peice honestly its intitled Brotherly Love