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Free thought
My thoughts are nothing, something, and everything inbetween,
I could be you, him, me, her, it, or the unseen,
maybe ive been, maybe im just a dream,
I could be a figment, a part of the unseen,
but believe me im real, more than imagination,
gradualy waiting to be discovered
connected and uncovered,
I exist, but i dont,
believe me if you wont,
free thoughts are free.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...s-a-cold-world
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Re: Free thought
That could be your theme song... especially with the contradiction type oxymorons... you should change your closing to that and it’d be too perfect.
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Re: Free thought
i like this. The back and forth works well and i like to identify the unidentifiable trying to be identified. very nice and good read
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Re: Free thought
Uh, cool.
Nah, this was alright. Simple. Not too hung up on complexity, rather just give it to us in black and white. Sometimes I forget you can tell a story that way. Anyways, I like it. We don't have to get into details, but the subject matter was dense enough give this clout. It isn't just talking about your cliche-typical drivel, but you're switching things up and being abstract. And in that, it's refreshing to read.
Keep it up.