10-12 lines
u spit first
due in 30 mins
let the games begin
and o yeh feel free to use shit bout how i set it up wrong u herb
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10-12 lines
u spit first
due in 30 mins
let the games begin
and o yeh feel free to use shit bout how i set it up wrong u herb
aight,
I'm on some cool out shit/
but I will pull this tool out quick/
and put some holes in ya new outift/
you aint no willy you a small soldier/
give it up son its all over/
and-you neva sold a pund of caine/
you a clown wit fame/
and thats bout to go down the drain/
all yo' shit sound tha same/
Nigga's hate to see me bubble they rather see me struggle cause wat they got ima get double/
you wanna see rocks look at ma wrist/
and wen you see me in tha club drinkin Mo that mean they dont sell Cris..
good spit good luck
haha na i aint sayin nuttin bout ur mistakes even tho u bout to make another mistake
o word ok..by the way that was terrible nothing about me just another verse u stole...o by the way i looked at u rposts and in ur last "battle" u stole a whole big l freestyle
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...20#post1612320
mods can check that out faggot ass but ima still rip u
haha aight but that aint this battle so spit so i can b out
okayy
no punches..or multis,my hunch is, ya all lies/
and u played ur mind, when ur pladurized.../
i spit curses... in verses...how can it be Hov vs this/
i merked u. now u spit big l verses/ (l-loss)
talkin bout pullin guns.. hov puts u in order/
cuz the only guns u tote is the kind with water/
i dont see rocks or pistals..how u coppin cris?/
when i put u in the chokehold, inplode ur esophagus/
a lil wankster,faggot, talkin and the heat ull see/
cuz in the hood..we bear arms like sleeveless t-s/
a little advice, and i hope u console it/
next time u battle..actually spit about ur opponent
shut up u little faggot u dont deserve ur life..never spit ma nigga ls shit agin herb be gone now..
ok danger- had some weak punchs, didnt really flow well either
iova- had some better punches, flowed better
vote/iova
I-Hova killed this one! Yo Danger there aint one person on this site who cares about what you drink in the club, for real. It was an aight verse but no personals, just talkin bout I'm gon shoot you and you aint no drug dealer just aint gonna cut it. Add some personals and you'll be on ya way. Hova, good shit and you focused on the right aspect of this whole thing...which would be his verse suckin. Also you had some good word choice fa rhymes. it was real easy to follow, Good Flow. Good battle.
Vote: I-Hova
extremely wack battle
Danger - Your verse was garbage. Work on extending your lines, adding flow, adding punches... basically start over and learn the basics on how to battle on this site before you move forward
IHOVA - Not much better, but you easily take this. You didn't even spell plagarize right, but at least the opener was an attempted personal and it sort of worked though work on making things more creative and using metas. You need a lot of work too, but you threw punches so you win this.
Vote - Ihova
iight im just tryin to get my structure and what not on point i did this quickly..but chea uppin for votes 2 more to get this voer with
UPPIN 2 more votes to finish off this herb.........UPPINNNNNNN hit this
Hmm.. Hova, your fuckin vote didn't even count in that battle cuz you don't got enuff posts to poll a vote yet dumbass..
But I'll vote here anyways, just cuz it's one-sided by far..
dangerzone=faggot/biter..
Plus Hova won this anyways in almost every aspect except good multies..
\\// Hova
i think I hova took this one as does clearly everyone else... i dont know anything about "dangerzone" so im not gonan call him a "faggot/biter" because i dont know if he is.. but this was an easy one to decide who won this battle was pretty one-sided... so yeah good job to the both of you but i found it very obvious that Ihova won....
V/ Ihova