Technicolor Type-A

Tongue in cheek, beast in heat
beat around du-bush or
chest on fire, lies, anguish, & deceit...
spray it as is, truth
relentless-forth, untoward...
Abroad...


I write fearlessly driven by
a no-holes-barred attitude &
'Heathen-D' Mentality...
a spurred on neurological misfit, ME!
an un-heel ding wordsmith
'Lyrically Inclined Chronic Assimilate'
runnin' du-3rd-eye down time's line...
brought with a hepatic awakening,
so I rhythmically rise to
the rhythm of the soil...
filled wit'
'Neanderthal-idic
Characteristics'
fuelled by the ignorant will to live...
an' yet; 'Unheralded Noma-Dick!'
'Gutter-ly Inspired'... SELF
CHOSEN!
to lead an Artistic
Revolution.

Entertaining' thoughts of a
'Bloodless Evolution of Word!'
Free living, smiling, cursing
'Bein'-2-du-X-treme!
Passion infused anarchy
unveiled to life...
by the trappings found lurkin' in,
‘Lustrous Ideology'
'Desolated Dogma'...
gleefully spread through religious
favor & zeal, subliminal cunningness
consuming all in a hub of
numbing nothingness
confused by
illusionary thought...
mesmerizing ignorant ideas of more
leaving millions brainwashed to suffering-
non believe, hopelessness &
breeding
in an environment where
the masses suffer the suffocating existence of
'not enough-ness'
which in essence is
a devilish design of spiritual manipulation...


1st Thought...
Majestically found an ample, yet
substantially poor in the
pure exquisite luminosity &
'dashing-qualities' of 1st Thought
'cum-2-exist'...
in the mind of an enlightened poet
eager to unravel 'establishment'
thats has conditioned many away
from the beauty of replacing it
with a poor
substituted existence of servitude-ism
to du-well-bein' of a slaving system...
...

ME BE A MINDLESS BIGOT! ... I THINK NOT!!!
so I stay clear of subliminal doctrine
by always staying close to nature &
spiritually delving within for Truth...
keeping my mind clear to remember
who I am...
technicolor supreme behind a sepia screen

Despite all the invention/blasphemy-in' discoveries of bein'...
quintessence intuition produced as ink
Ad-Lib'd in print as 'Conscious Engagement'
presented as "food for thought"
that fills all hunger for knowledge...
spread via bigotry-
Creating' an inspired creation...
a superlative exercise of
'Brain & Behavior'
the infinite potential of consonants & vowels
might never be fully realized
but I thrown down this scripture
a Collage in Word!
(A poor substitute for
feeling, emotion &
thought)

this was just an excellent fuckin read man... i loved how you came about with things and i loved your posture in this being subtle then abusive then aggressive with your words...being directed to the hate you have then the confusion and then the love... your own vocabulary in this was just over loaded and superb and well brought to the damn table man... top notch still dude good drop

Quote:

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I write fearlessly driven by
a no-holes-barred attitude &
'Heathen-D' Mentality...
a spurred on neurological misfit, ME!
an un-heel ding wordsmith
'Lyrically Inclined Chronic Assimilate'
runnin' du-3rd-eye down time's line...
brought with a hepatic awakening,
so I rhythmically rise to
the rhythm of the soil...
filled wit'
'Neanderthal-idic
Characteristics'
fuelled by the ignorant will to live...
an' yet; 'Unheralded Noma-Dick!'
'Gutter-ly Inspired'... SELF
CHOSEN!
to lead an Artistic
Revolution.

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loved how you based your emotions through words that was shortened with slang and then slammed with effective bigotry on words that is kinda hard to relate to at times unless you know the meaning yourself...lmfao.. but i understood sorry if i am off with feed im super tired dude... but this was sa great job and a hell of a read that i can say was a really well hard earned respect for you even more...though i miss your fantasy poems that killed with reality today... but you still have that nac of killing your verse with off the top wording and story ;ines through anger in sucha way man.. props to you again dude.

this was just an excellent fuckin read man... i loved how you came about with things and i loved your posture in this being subtle then abusive then aggressive with your words...being directed to the hate you have then the confusion and then the love... your own vocabulary in this was just over loaded and superb and well brought to the damn table man... top notch still dude good drop

Quote:

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I write fearlessly driven by
a no-holes-barred attitude &
'Heathen-D' Mentality...
a spurred on neurological misfit, ME!
an un-heel ding wordsmith
'Lyrically Inclined Chronic Assimilate'
runnin' du-3rd-eye down time's line...
brought with a hepatic awakening,
so I rhythmically rise to
the rhythm of the soil...
filled wit'
'Neanderthal-idic
Characteristics'
fuelled by the ignorant will to live...
an' yet; 'Unheralded Noma-Dick!'
'Gutter-ly Inspired'... SELF
CHOSEN!
to lead an Artistic
Revolution.

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loved how you based your emotions through words that was shortened with slang and then slammed with effective bigotry on words that is kinda hard to relate to at times unless you know the meaning yourself...lmfao.. but i understood sorry if i am off with feed im super tired dude... but this was sa great job and a hell of a read that i can say was a really well hard earned respect for you even more...though i miss your fantasy poems that killed with reality today... but you still have that nac of killing your verse with off the top wording and story ;ines through anger in sucha way man.. props to you again dude.

this was just an excellent fuckin read man... i loved how you came about with things and i loved your posture in this being subtle then abusive then aggressive with your words...being directed to the hate you have then the confusion and then the love... your own vocabulary in this was just over loaded and superb and well brought to the damn table man... top notch still dude good drop

Quote:

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I write fearlessly driven by
a no-holes-barred attitude &
'Heathen-D' Mentality...
a spurred on neurological misfit, ME!
an un-heel ding wordsmith
'Lyrically Inclined Chronic Assimilate'
runnin' du-3rd-eye down time's line...
brought with a hepatic awakening,
so I rhythmically rise to
the rhythm of the soil...
filled wit'
'Neanderthal-idic
Characteristics'
fuelled by the ignorant will to live...
an' yet; 'Unheralded Noma-Dick!'
'Gutter-ly Inspired'... SELF
CHOSEN!
to lead an Artistic
Revolution.

---

loved how you based your emotions through words that was shortened with slang and then slammed with effective bigotry on words that is kinda hard to relate to at times unless you know the meaning yourself...lmfao.. but i understood sorry if i am off with feed im super tired dude... but this was sa great job and a hell of a read that i can say was a really well hard earned respect for you even more...though i miss your fantasy poems that killed with reality today... but you still have that nac of killing your verse with off the top wording and story ;ines through anger in sucha way man.. props to you again dude.

Ah didn't see these posts, thanks alot mate i appreciate the positive feed!

Upping for one or two more opinions! Leave links, i'll hit them when i get a chance, but i will hit them.

I haven't had the pleasure of reading much of your work...but I really liked this...it was beautiful and understandable...some people try to get so deep in the poetry boards i read their stuff then I'm like huh?.........

these lines had perfect Rhythm...wish that i wrote them:
ME BE A MINDLESS BIGOT! ... I THINK NOT!!!
so I stay clear of subliminal doctrine
by always staying close to nature &
spiritually delving within for Truth...
keeping my mind clear to remember
who I am...
technicolor supreme behind a sepia screen....tightness