Week 2: Smog (1-0) vs plethora (1-0) [Smog wins]

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Punches due by THURSDAY NOV 16TH @ 11:59PM
Voting closes SUNDAY NOV 19th, 11:59PM

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@Smog
@plethora

Check.. I'll drop a punch later

@Smog i love ❤ that father/daughter pic in ur avy.. so precious..



..until my niggas lure her inside the house to rape & kill
they'll say Commandeer, then take her virginity against her will

Murder don't make me nervous, especially if I'm offin lames who been the wackest
N since u drop the most boring shit here.. u know I'll be commonplace u in a casket...

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Murder don't make me nervous, especially if I'm offin lames who been the wackest
N since u drop the most boring shit here.. u know I'll be commonplace u in a casket...

Plethora - I said something earlier about how the little sentence before the punch is essentially another line and defeats the purpose of 1-2 punch. It’s essentially a set up. Moving on, the punch was solid. A little vicious and little bit of wordplay with commandeer/will line if I’m understanding it correctly.

Smog - I like the punch. Solid wordplay and something different which is always a plus. Set up was ok at best.

Good battle but I’m going with Smog. He didn’t have to use an extra set up to deleiver.

Vote - Smog

didnt feel the flip/wordplay from plethora here. a bit of a stretch from where the set up was going. Smog had one typo but the punch landed hard here.

v. smog

i had to google for both lmao, as far as i understand, both were OKAY at best, not the craziest flips or wordplay.smog had a dope 8 syllable multy though, fire.
yeah and smog must of had a typo, bcuz "u know ima be commonplace u in a casket" is off lmao
ill reserve my vote until i get better explanation on the bars from both guys

I thought plethora got it.

Both wp's were ehh in their execution. Kind of weak statements.

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Originally Posted by Krucial Th1rt3en

i had to google for both lmao, as far as i understand, both were OKAY at best, not the craziest flips or wordplay.smog had a dope 8 syllable multy though, fire.
yeah and smog must of had a typo, bcuz "u know ima be commonplace u in a casket" is off lmao
ill reserve my vote until i get better explanation on the bars from both guys

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Smogs wordplay was calm & place u in a casket
Mine was come in dear

ohhhh ok, ida never got that lmao.
commandeer(come in dear)/against-her-will -VS- commonplace(calm n place)/boring
im gonna go with Smog, his more direct and hit harder IMO, and had an 8 syllable multy which is impressive seeing how he still got off the punch
its a edge though.

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Originally Posted by Krucial Th1rt3en

ohhhh ok, ida never got that lmao.
commandeer(come in dear)/against-her-will -VS- commonplace(calm n place)/boring
im gonna go with Smog, his more direct and hit harder IMO, and had an 8 syllable multy which is impressive seeing how he still got off the punch
its a edge though.

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Man what? Foh with that bologna

I didn’t like either too much tbh because plethora’s commandeer is come an deer not come in deer lol must be Canadian or just a cot alias

Smogs was a bit worse tho since his wording wasn’t good and the wordplay didn’t fit in

bro dont nitpick my vote lol we all got diffrent opinions, both's were reachy, i went with the more direct line

Smog wins