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318 make you face ya dreams... misplaced in scenes
so who's facing me...i'm too ill to be cured ... while you smoked a scured
scared of your own shadow ..one blast make you recollect .. so by -all -means reflect
statuesque Jordanesque design... so who am i... not one to be messed with
i bless spits ... but cursed Cajet's scripts... stiff upper lip
i predict he's hiding out ... i completely foreshadowed kicked
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Easy
Those childish ass lines, ya no adult, ya so addled
ask ya self why drop an open mic just lose in a closed battle.
No threat of ya comeback, my win's in reserve
because passive aggressive's the only revenge of the nerd.
Introducing me into RB was the worst suggestion
now yo corpse driven into the dirt, will be my first impression.
V/Cajetan for a more structured well thought out battle verse. His opponent dropped a spoken word type poetic flow that failed to strike an impactful hit throughout. Nothing to rave about overall here, but good luck to both of you, keep elevating.
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Oh but y'all guys forgot the pollQuote:
Originally Posted by Networth
So, to be honest this seemed forced like you didn't know what to say and just kind of threw out some random lines. Areas without rhyme. No real punches to speak of, overall it was kind of a flop. Not trying to be a dick or anything but tough criticism will push you to do better. If it doesn't then maybe battling isn't for you. Keep practicing though.Quote:
318 make you face ya dreams... misplaced in scenes
so who's facing me...i'm too ill to be cured ... while you smoked a scured
scared of your own shadow ..one blast make you recollect .. so by -all -means reflect
statuesque Jordanesque design... so who am i... not one to be messed with
i bless spits ... but cursed Cajet's scripts... stiff upper lip
i predict he's hiding out ... i completely foreshadowed kicked
So, your opener was pretty basic and didn't have much impact behind it. No real comments on bar 2 and your close concept was fair but poorly worded.Quote:
Those childish ass lines, ya no adult, ya so addled
ask ya self why drop an open mic just lose in a closed battle.
No threat of ya comeback, my win's in reserve
because passive aggressive's the only revenge of the nerd.
Introducing me into RB was the worst suggestion
now yo corpse driven into the dirt, will be my first impression.
V/Cajetan - Because of the two drops yours was better structured, easier to read, had better impact and honestly just made more sense in general.
Again not being an asshole for the sake of being an asshole, I just call it how I see it.
In truth I get the feeling your both new at rap & battles. So, don't be discouraged by my oppinion if it pissed you off, good. Use that. Practice and improve.
good battle
oh yea lol, you do have to a voting poll.
Use to be rules about 4 bar min battles in order to count on your record... I'll let this slide
Poll Added & Opened for Votes
I got nerdy i liked his concepts and werdong sorry if i fucked up my interpretation but dude was sick with like a more direct text i mean how did u come up with the reflect/shadow concept that was crazy... the other guy was fedundant and boring.... yeah...
Vote the other guy....
No threat of ya comeback, my win's in reserve
because passive aggressive's the only revenge of the nerd.
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v/ cajetan, ok first off nerdy had just statements no real punchs tbh, work on that bro
real some old battles an figure out the sites style cuz u'll be straight ur wordin is smooth.
cajetan took this.
3-1 lmao
Lol wow this still open?
Nerdy didn’t have anything that is worth breaking down the slightest bit, he just started out obviously and he most likely listens to rock music and randomly saw the mtv show with the white rapper snowman sooooo
Cajetan stupid idiot wins because he at least knows how to write a bar
Vote CATEJAN
Caj wins