LLL Week 10: King vs Reef Flex / king wins

verses due: MONDAY 11:59PST
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AYO King

yessir

Ext

When I first got into battle rap;

OG’s said any man can bleed, from vets to amateurs just spray these canisters/
I smoke purps and put the regicide.. I was a king slayer way before Jamie Lannister/
There’s no pleasing these old heathens, it’s like any site I go to it’s just hoe season /
Reef was born to go against the king so it’s no question who brought the trees in/
Damn it Bobby; he ain’t the king of the hill but I’ll still give this pro pain/
Plus I haven’t seen something so skinny and white since the last time I did cocaine/
I’ll put you in the ground soiled. Something hot for ya, I’ll keep this round foiled/
Sending so many shots at this Kings head you should be sponsored by crown royal/
Fo’ fiffin’ ya core stiffin, gun singing leaving notes for the mortician that’s so vivid/
I put ya name on the bullets, a death fit for a king, but still the message was prolific/
Nothing but g swag, u look like u get tee bagged, head shot then I’m bouncing /
I’m on my high horse and this pole I got is so damn big it feels like I’m jousting/

All u do is disappoint. If set ups counted, u'd get quoted
But every bar ends so fuckin bad I think the game of thrones dudes wrote it
Ur girl told me not to nut on her coz she was goin to ur place
Now I call her Chernobyl coz she had a meltdown after I exploded on her face
That name change was wack af but s'all good, I'm past lifted
Idc if u go by reef'r Josh...I just hope u overpay n there's crushed glass in it
Don't belong in the league, more of a stan then a factor
U aint a fuckin player here, u r to text what Drake is to the Raptors
Been killing this shit for years, Goat level, sound like god flowin
I'm a fucking showstopper. U became a mod and dudes just stopped showin
Better at writing mags than punches, coz ur bars are way soft
Welcome to the mod fam, now I'ma knock a brother out like steph in the playoffs

Reef

Opener was dope I really liked the regicide wp and the flip. King crown royal concept was nice also. Death fit for a king line was dope nice use of multi display with the setup.

One of the better drops I’ve seen from you took your time had a few nice hits.

King

Opener was good nice humor. Chernobyl was creative funny also. Showstopper was cool personal tie in.

Both tied on quotables decent battle I felt king was a bit more consistent. I liked reefs np direction but it some situations in doesn’t win battles.

V/King

Reef Flex
OG’s said any man can bleed, from vets to amateurs just spray these canisters/
I smoke purps and put the regicide.. I was a king slayer way before Jamie Lannister/
um
this cudve ben executed better but the concept is dope af
There’s no pleasing these old heathens, it’s like any site I go to it’s just hoe season /
Reef was born to go against the king so it’s no question who brought the trees in/
decent, almost corny & a little light but decent.. i like the concept
Damn it Bobby; he ain’t the king of the hill but I’ll still give this pro pain/
Plus I haven’t seen something so skinny and white since the last time I did cocaine/
nah, whack
I’ll put you in the ground soiled. Something hot for ya, I’ll keep this round foiled/
Sending so many shots at this Kings head you should be sponsored by crown royal/
cool
Fo’ fiffin’ ya core stiffin, gun singing leaving notes for the mortician that’s so vivid/
I put ya name on the bullets, a death fit for a king, but still the message was prolific/
weak/fillerish
Nothing but g swag, u look like u get tee bagged, head shot then I’m bouncing /
I’m on my high horse and this pole I got is so damn big it feels like I’m jousting/
same as the last bar + played idea, it needed more

2 gd punches
1 jab
3 misses

vs

Quote:

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Originally Posted by King

All u do is disappoint. If set ups counted, u'd get quoted
But every bar ends so fuckin bad I think the game of thrones dudes wrote it
k, simple but decent enough
Ur girl told me not to nut on her coz she was goin to ur place
Now I call her Chernobyl coz she had a meltdown after I exploded on her face
ok
That name change was wack af but s'all good, I'm past lifted
Idc if u go by reef'r Josh...I just hope u overpay n there's crushed glass in it
fire
Don't belong in the league, more of a stan then a factor
U aint a fuckin player here, u r to text what Drake is to the Raptors
lol nice
Been killing this shit for years, Goat level, sound like god flowin
I'm a fucking showstopper. U became a mod and dudes just stopped showin
dece
Better at writing mags than punches, coz ur bars are way soft
Welcome to the mod fam, now I'ma knock a brother out like steph in the playoffs
dont like this, awk.

2 gd punches
3 jabs
1 miss

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v/king
pretty good battle

Lop sided battle here king is obviously more experienced battler in this head to head. Reef was okay but wasn't grimey, more basic straight forward ideas. Reef no tips to offer up really at this point but just read king's verse a couple times not asking you to admit it but king was a clear winner here. Reef had that jousting line but needed the whole verse to be like that to win. So yeah vote king.

OG’s said any man can bleed, from vets to amateurs just spray these canisters/
I smoke purps and put the regicide.. I was a king slayer way before Jamie Lannister/
Nice opener. I enjoyed the set up.

There’s no pleasing these old heathens, it’s like any site I go to it’s just hoe season /
Reef was born to go against the king so it’s no question who brought the trees in/
This was actually a dope swag bar... enjoyable, impact was okay though.

Damn it Bobby; he ain’t the king of the hill but I’ll still give this pro pain/
Plus I haven’t seen something so skinny and white since the last time I did cocaine/
LMAO. I thought this was dope.


I’ll put you in the ground soiled. Something hot for ya, I’ll keep this round foiled/
Sending so many shots at this Kings head you should be sponsored by crown royal/
Eh. Not sure I felt this one.

Fo’ fiffin’ ya core stiffin, gun singing leaving notes for the mortician that’s so vivid/
I put ya name on the bullets, a death fit for a king, but still the message was prolific/
Eh.

Nothing but g swag, u look like u get tee bagged, head shot then I’m bouncing /
I’m on my high horse and this pole I got is so damn big it feels like I’m jousting/
Eh.

All u do is disappoint. If set ups counted, u'd get quoted
But every bar ends so fuckin bad I think the game of thrones dudes wrote it
Lmao nice.

Ur girl told me not to nut on her coz she was goin to ur place
Now I call her Chernobyl coz she had a meltdown after I exploded on her face
haha, nice. Humor on point.

That name change was wack af but s'all good, I'm past lifted
Idc if u go by reef'r Josh...I just hope u overpay n there's crushed glass in it
Nice nameplay.

Don't belong in the league, more of a stan then a factor
U aint a fuckin player here, u r to text what Drake is to the Raptors
Not bad.

Been killing this shit for years, Goat level, sound like god flowin
I'm a fucking showstopper. U became a mod and dudes just stopped showin
damn... facts. Real bar.

Better at writing mags than punches, coz ur bars are way soft
Welcome to the mod fam, now I'ma knock a brother out like steph in the playoffs
Nice.

Pretty enjoyable battle... I actually was fucking with Reefs beginning swag... but
the ending bars he just lost steam... almost felt like two different type of efforts
King got it based on consistency here.

v/King

Reef Flex -

OG’s said any man can bleed, from vets to amateurs just spray these canisters/
I smoke purps and put the regicide.. I was a king slayer way before Jamie Lannister/

This was okay. Nice one.

There’s no pleasing these old heathens, it’s like any site I go to it’s just hoe season /
Reef was born to go against the king so it’s no question who brought the trees in/

This was cool.

Damn it Bobby; he ain’t the king of the hill but I’ll still give this pro pain/
Plus I haven’t seen something so skinny and white since the last time I did cocaine/

This was NICE.

I’ll put you in the ground soiled. Something hot for ya, I’ll keep this round foiled/
Sending so many shots at this Kings head you should be sponsored by crown royal/

This was okay.

Fo’ fiffin’ ya core stiffin, gun singing leaving notes for the mortician that’s so vivid/
I put ya name on the bullets, a death fit for a king, but still the message was prolific/

This was cool.

Nothing but g swag, u look like u get tee bagged, head shot then I’m bouncing /
I’m on my high horse and this pole I got is so damn big it feels like I’m jousting/

This was okay.


King -

All u do is disappoint. If set ups counted, u'd get quoted
But every bar ends so fuckin bad I think the game of thrones dudes wrote it

This was okay.


Ur girl told me not to nut on her coz she was goin to ur place
Now I call her Chernobyl coz she had a meltdown after I exploded on her face

This was cool.

That name change was wack af but s'all good, I'm past lifted
Idc if u go by reef'r Josh...I just hope u overpay n there's crushed glass in it

This was cool.


Don't belong in the league, more of a stan then a factor
U aint a fuckin player here, u r to text what Drake is to the Raptors

This was cool.

Been killing this shit for years, Goat level, sound like god flowin
I'm a fucking showstopper. U became a mod and dudes just stopped showin

lmao. This was nice.

Better at writing mags than punches, coz ur bars are way soft
Welcome to the mod fam, now I'ma knock a brother out like steph in the playoffs

This was okay. Cool.

Overall -

Cool battle here guys. Both were nice with the pens'. I'm going with King here.

V/ King

Ur girl told me not to nut on her coz she was goin to ur place
Now I call her Chernobyl coz she had a meltdown after I exploded on her face


LOL'ed

OG’s said any man can bleed, from vets to amateurs just spray these canisters/
I smoke purps and put the regicide.. I was a king slayer way before Jamie Lannister/
Damn it Bobby; he ain’t the king of the hill but I’ll still give this pro pain/
Plus I haven’t seen something so skinny and white since the last time I did cocaine/ 
I’ll put you in the ground soiled. Something hot for ya, I’ll keep this round foiled/
Sending so many shots at this Kings head you should be sponsored by crown royal/
Fo’ fiffin’ ya core stiffin, gun singing leaving notes for the mortician that’s so vivid/
I put ya name on the bullets, a death fit for a king, but still the message was prolific/
Nothing but g swag, u look like u get tee bagged, head shot then I’m bouncing /
I’m on my high horse and this pole I got is so damn big it feels like I’m jousting/

vs

All u do is disappoint. If set ups counted, u'd get quoted
But every bar ends so fuckin bad I think the game of thrones dudes wrote it
Ur girl told me not to nut on her coz she was goin to ur place
Now I call her Chernobyl coz she had a meltdown after I exploded on her face
That name change was wack af but s'all good, I'm past lifted
Idc if u go by reef'r Josh...I just hope u overpay n there's crushed glass in it
Don't belong in the league, more of a stan then a factor
U aint a fuckin player here, u r to text what Drake is to the Raptors
Been killing this shit for years, Goat level, sound like god flowin
I'm a fucking showstopper. U became a mod and dudes just stopped showin

Josh I dig what you did there with the multi driven style and swag-matic approach.. even though concepts weren't really smashin I really enjoyed the read. King, you pretty much flawless this.. Didn't care for the opener but outside of that, fucking fire. Good battle fellas

v/King

King wins

Closed