LLL Week 10: Blas vs JEM / jem wins

verses due: MONDAY 11:59PST
AUTOMATIC EXTENSION HAS BEEN GIVEN IF NEEDED, DUE TO THE WEEK STRETCH
Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

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16.

i shall drop what i feel or you shall drop what you feel and then we shall match whoever is the brave young soul to post their lyrics first, best of luck good sir

@Blas , JEM sent 16.

these clips are large u'll get merked. AK47... pardon my burst
w/ jemmy gonna need one of THOSE for his bars to have FORCE
sparking his corpse, nice pic lame fuck.. im giving him the sledge
every1 knows ur pussy, definitely falling off but NEVER living on the edge
doesn't matter what u do, can't change that u'll live in regret
always on the networking on verses, u’d think he’s swapping contact info with vets
BITCH BEST RESPECT, no point in even reading this dudes spits
if he no-shows? we don’t mind <-- since he doesn’t even use his
ishootclips. geek is a forum addict, stay off the board this dudes jokes
voters on ur verse? absolutely nothing highlighted as if you clicked new posts
can't tell if ur a male or female but we know ur a fag
if u make a WhoreMoan it’s just to show what you lack
ya verse sux i know it bloke, everything u spit leaves me comatose
JEM isn’t a JUUL, cuz even when he’s charged up he only blowing smoke

JEMs verse

This mut fuck, I debated between chinese, arab & settled on mexican
Jose please... that limp tiny dick isn't pleasuring!
Plus your GF is 3d fat... she hearing how you getting done lately
So i'ma tellatubby you got murked, & it won't shock that sun baby
Colorful guy understands the hue more, but fuck comedic preaching
i'ma get to the meat and potatoes before his hoe decides to eat it
You know ya broke cunt. The collectors sent me & want you dead
Because you omega, & TRUST that last letter will cost your head
Walking around with pink hair and monopoly money, you straight lie
So full of shit, should beat the fuck outta ya w/ a garage sale sign!
If you sitcom, Ill movie pose the techs, cross T's & spot this guy
Showcasing after separating his body from his head when I dot the i
My guns take no holidays off... Trust me they ride w me blazing
& this fireworks, but he won't make it to the July 4th celebration
Drive by... gun poking out the window like airing out a hotbox
Blaze the whole block... Leave the ashes spread at your mom spot !

doesn't matter what u do, can't change that u'll live in regret
always on the networking on verses, u’d think he’s swapping contact info with vets

Possibly the only quotable (just about) from both verses. Blas verse definitely wasn’t that impressive but I think he did enough to edge the win here

V/Blas

Liking the pic references on both sides. Blas came with a couple dope wordplays, juul line and networking. That whore moans is really played out by my standards but over all your wording and punches were strong. Jem also had some fresh wordplays tell a tubby and Owe mega. I think Blas had a couple played lines that hurt him and jem didn’t have anything where I thought it was played out but a couple punches fell a little flat. Tough call both had different spots where they shined.i enjoyed this 1 easy read and both brought some good creativity. Props to both

Vote JEM

Blas

doesn't matter what u do, can't change that u'll live in regret
always on the networking on verses, u’d think he’s swapping contact info with vets

Jem

Colorful guy understands the hue more, but fuck comedic preaching
i'ma get to the meat and potatoes before his hoe decides to

Jem had one punch with humor factor Blas had one punch that was more a direct hit. Not much to quote here.

I felt the bar from Blas hit harder the flip of it was clean even though wp was simple.

V/Blas

Sorry can’t be more in depth on phone

Yo I really dig both verses for sure I think it was super close but I gotta go with JEM. Maybe if Blas wasn’t a basement dwelling emofag #suicidelyfe piece of non-binary trash he’d have gotten this but gonna need to bleach his hair and eyes til all the pink is gone.

Vote jem

Both guys were okay blas dude had a better flow throughout for sure. Couple times jem was off here, his first two lines were weird for sure, super sketch. But blas was kind of simple here to me. Simple ideas and think jem did enough to pull out the win at the end. So I'm voting for jem

sparking his corpse, nice pic lame fuck.. im giving him the sledge
every1 knows ur pussy, definitely falling off but NEVER living on the edge
doesn't matter what u do, can't change that u'll live in regret
always on the networking on verses, u’d think he’s swapping contact info with vets
ishootclips. geek is a forum addict, stay off the board this dudes jokes
voters on ur verse? absolutely nothing highlighted as if you clicked new posts

vs

Colorful guy understands the hue more, but fuck comedic preaching
i'ma get to the meat and potatoes before his hoe decides to eat it
You know ya broke cunt. The collectors sent me & want you dead 
Because you omega, & TRUST that last letter will cost your head
My guns take no holidays off... Trust me they ride w me blazing 
& this fireworks, but he won't make it to the July 4th celebration

Pretty even battle here.. props for staying active and showing up even when others aren't.. I'm leaning toward JEM here for to a slightly harsher tone.. fairly even otherwise

v/ JEM

4-2 jem wins

Closed