LLL Week 10: Barcotic vs RealBodySnatcher / Barc wins
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Re: LLL Week 10: Barcotic vs RealBodySnatcher
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Re: LLL Week 10: Barcotic vs RealBodySnatcher
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Re: LLL Week 10: Barcotic vs RealBodySnatcher - OPEN FOR VOTES
ima aim ollllllllld heat at'chu. wave slow.. peekaboo
catch ya with a bolt action from the waist, GO PIKACHU!
im a hofer aka monster, k. U do not display a dope trait
cut enuff corners w ya style to decorate the hall w paper snowflakes
Vs
Ballin? Never! I’ll help`em shop till he drop. Even if he’s too broke to be poor
I’ma let the ‘automatic open up at close range’...like doors at a grocery store
I’ll give this landscaper a dirt nap & if he gets claustrophobic...
I’ma leave his seeds wet just to ‘plant fear’ in him like a botanophobic
Got 2 bars I liked most from each verse. Found myself enjoying barcotics more overall and cutting corners was dope. Pikachu too even though it’s Pokemon I still dig it
V/Barcotic
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Body snatchers opener was great. And that shock g was on point. Plant fear punch was cool. Barcotic s sticks line was fire along with his opener. Over all not much to say about this, was easy read and I think both brought some clever bars. I gotta give this to snatch slightly because the personal aspect was jokes. I’ve seen Barc drop these quick verses and win many times but to me it feels like body put in the work and hit a bit harder. Props to both for showing up let’s get some more votes in!!
Vote snatch
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Barc
display a dope trait
cut enuff corners w ya style to decorate the hall w paper snowflakes
tight thru a scope..or a buster tryna flex ?
if he Amy Smart, i got a knife to his throat w/ a butterfly effect
I like the humor factor n flip with the paper snowflakes bar here. The Amy Smart bar was dope creative wp good concept
Snatch
I would’ve quoted the opener personal but I felt how wording was displayed u drop the ball.
I’ll give this landscaper a dirt nap & if he gets claustrophobic...
I’ma leave his seeds wet just to ‘plant fear’ in him like a botanophobic
We've seen ur gun bars & I’m not even Shock G. U can’t dump the pump
Ur too clumsy chump...
If u EVER pulled out a long nose...I’d assume ur idol is Humpty Hump
Plant fear was pretty dope metaphorical comparison. Humpty was cool good humor factor
Both had goodbars I felt Barcs were more creative here tbh.
V/Barc
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ur garage is empty. no dodge or chevy, face it..
u a Lowry possession...cuz u drop the ball on every payment
Nice start.
allow repossession
get it? ^thats wordplay, formed in the farthest slums
ill bury u so deep in the sticks, nc.org'll have bars for months
haha okay, okay... slick.
ima aim ollllllllld heat at'chu. wave slow.. peekaboo
catch ya with a bolt action from the waist, GO PIKACHU!
Ok.
im a hofer aka monster, k. U do not display a dope trait
cut enuff corners w ya style to decorate the hall w paper snowflakes
lmao, dope.
tight thru a scope..or a buster tryna flex ?
if he Amy Smart, i got a knife to his throat w/ a butterfly effect
Nice.
who cares about a map? ill blast at 'em. enough talk
and to toronto's defense, its a Rap after the Buckshot
Alright.
He must be hiiigh as a kite talkin stupid. I gotta`em paranoid, startled
Fuckin retard. This nigga's weed soo strong it's lace w/steroids; Arnold
Na man... the exeuction here... the young money finish was such a let down.
This blade`ll jab every ab inside his flesh, I’ll have`em grabbin at his chest
The joke starts w/ me walkin into a Bar & ends w/ me stabbin him to death
Lmao.... dope.
PeLE & Princess LEia bars? I mean the jury said it was a conceivable bout
& I won’t pass judgment cuz u can’t even get beyond a Reasonable Doubt
ok.
I’ll give this landscaper a dirt nap & if he gets claustrophobic...
I’ma leave his seeds wet just to ‘plant fear’ in him like a botanophobic
Pretty good.
We've seen ur gun bars & I’m not even Shock G. U can’t dump the pump
Ur too clumsy chump...
If u EVER pulled out a long nose...I’d assume ur idol is Humpty Hump
eh. this bar could either be really funny or cheesy... depends your humor type.. for me
it was cheesy.
Ballin? Never! I’ll help`em shop till he drop. Even if he’s too broke to be poor
I’ma let the ‘automatic open up at close range’...like doors at a grocery store
Pretty good.
Honestly? It was pretty even... not the best by either to be honest... Although
I do enjoy barc most when he's in small bar format... and hitting with concise precision
and for me it came down to the LOTB which was the snowflake bar.
v/Barc.
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ur garage is empty. no dodge or chevy, face it..
u a Lowry possession...cuz u drop the ball on every payment
allow repossession
get it? ^thats wordplay, formed in the farthest slums
ill bury u so deep in the sticks, nc.org'll have bars for months
im a hofer aka monster, k. U do not display a dope trait
cut enuff corners w ya style to decorate the hall w paper snowflakes
vs
This blade`ll jab every ab inside his flesh, I’ll have`em grabbin at his chest
The joke starts w/ me walkin into a Bar & ends w/ me stabbin him to death
PeLE & Princess LEia bars? I mean the jury said it was a conceivable bout
& I won’t pass judgment cuz u can’t even get beyond a Reasonable Doubt
We've seen ur gun bars & I’m not even Shock G. U can’t dump the pump
Ur too clumsy chump...
If u EVER pulled out a long nose...I’d assume ur idol is Humpty Hump
This was close in quotes but I think Bar edged it out concept wise. I fucking laughed at that walked into a bar joke, but that's what it was.. an old joke.. so can't really give points for creativity on it. good battle tho
v/Barcotic
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