https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uQWE073b7uk
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hey that shit was dope
fav line was that addict/anne frank line..
yeah I really cant say nothing
lyricism was good, flow and delivery sounded confident
content wise was cool.. this was a solid track.
its missing something though - cant think of it right now but if I do
ill let u know
Flow was forced and not really feeling the delivery and stuff on the track. I liked the lyrics throughout some nice bars spit out
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I liked the flow, but you don't sound motivated.
More emotion is needed. Beats pretty cool. You almost got something going, but your voice is lacking a little energy. some solid lines, but the way you deliver it could make them impact harder.
stay dropping/