shut up

:stfu: i sed shut the fuck up bitch yes il hit you with my microphone im gaining sucess whilst your still stuck on the methodone your still paying for pay as you go phone but i have so much credit like the millenium dome you racist cunt go and sign up for the edl oh wait your a child?go watch harry potter bitch il cast a spell only difference is il finish were voldemort left off and hit u with kalashnikoff:speaker:

First things first, structure. Orgainze your lines so it can flow smoother and people don't have to search and find your rhymes. Also, write more. This is what, 5 bars? Min is atleast 16 bars dude. Fix your structure and write more.