Group Therapy Session (ft. Neighbor and Vulgar)

Equipped alien weaponery aimed directly at the planes trajectory
Traverse this plane wit telepathy; levitate out a blackhole wit a sign that reads...
"R.I.P Malaysia Flight 370"
Degree in chemistry; mix hydrocloric brews; Agent Orange and Blue
Watching Neigh Palm weapons big enough to turn the whole Vienam forest floor a fluorescent hue
Mordors hordes weapons in view, fire at will; Admire the skill
aim skyward and reel; drag ya leader back to the frontline and funeral pyre the kill
Ya Lord Sire forreal; from start to finish I create and flow well
I'm even a motherfucking psychopath at the check-in... welcome to Bates Motel.
Mix Vodka, Kahula and Baileys - that's a recipe for disaster
Getting Drunk in Washington protesting funerals with Westboro Baptists after
You forced this laughter watch you grab ya throat vomiting
Addicted to holy water promethazine ready to accept Morpheus peace offerings
A cult following, popularity is the reason they rally
Describing my crew? the Term 'In' is Welcome... more than Walking Dead's season finale
Group Therapy session, psychiatrists diagnosis is clear
and the beast inside is starting to tick... Captain Hooks Crocodile is near

The Glock 9 that I'm grippin could start a bonfire.. I'll hog tie ya division
A dogfighter w/ SWAT sniper precision; my strong right'd make God cry in submission
W/ shots primed to go online in an instant, put the pistol-grip to ya neck
Rippin into ya flesh; the grimmest picture of Death's sickle swingin in synergistic effect
Constructin your fate w/ multiple blades I culled from the Ancients
Approach your city carryin the skulls of the vanquished like the hull of a slave ship
Summon the strength of Goliath.. hit like a Congo viper hocking saliva
Somalian pirate in the wake of Poseidon, my optical fibers like an Oculus visor
A locust swarmin out the lotus blossom, the wrong one to go to war w/
Ronin swordsman in cloaking armor like a Trojan horse full of Roman Spartans
A polar storm shiftin the global orbit, reached the pinnacle of lethal cynosure
My genes're sinister.. DNA print reads as genius literature w/ Nietzsche's signature
Brain fires impulses from pilot's controls.. process data w/ dire results
My mind make a diamond corrode; to write what I know'd leave you white as a ghost
Or w/ Meyer syndrome.. I'm Einstein if he wired his skull to a nitrogen bulb
A dynamo clone in a scientist's coat, deciphering rows of binary code

I'll take a fictional setting and rake the thistle and webbing
Nabatean idioms reckoned I'd face a zillion legends
To skate the literal tempests - my ancient friends wouldn't mention
Inept friars, protect ya neck fibers when I'm raving to GZA with clenched fists
Let's make it simple as Reddit; if Para & Saber's gripping the weapon
you're off to a rocky start boxin' with the old guard like Mason Dixon's obsession
Just taste the venom, accept it - Pagan riddles erected
If Kano's kissing your empress, each page is visual leverage
RESPECT my team. We ain't your average Aretha Franklin nipple suppressors
We came to give you a lesson, a statement issued to enrich or triple investments
Overhaulin' with no balls - couldn't even scrape the Michelin's melon
I'm eight parts phalanx, nine percent gold digger
Five percent 5-Percenter, cypher set stone slinger
Prescribing final deaths to idle lines of vets, no zingers
cause V's an unsympathetic, isometric cybersect CoHpe stickler
Megatron rebuilt by Chevy, the system's not gonna fall
The cinderblocks in my palms had Liston droppin' his jaws
Enough subtle teasing. No longer preachin' to Priory's
A fuckin' beast when I'm writing these on eternal scrolls of summer evening ivory
Another creature entirely with another creature inside of me

Posted this like a month or so ago on Netcees... was the last thing I wrote and deserves some more props tbh

Links:
1 - http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...lack-Padmasana
2 - http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...th-Iscariot%29

I'm assuming your from NC. This was dope, the flow and rhyme scheme and blah blah you know the rest. This piece is packed with so many references it's ridiculous but also very well thought and written in most places. Not sure who did what but I'm assuming the order of the verses follows the order of the names. Little shit bugged me here and there, like spelling with- wit. It's one less letter, does it really help your flow? No. Anyway, this was a really dope drop but I'm sure you already know that. Good to have you immigrants floating around here. God damn boat people.

word this was pretty dope and creative, I'll do a better breakdown over the weekend when I have time.. shit was nice from what I got so far.

Degree in chemistry; mix hydrocloric brews; Agent Orange and Blue
Watching Neigh Palm weapons big enough to turn the whole Vienam forest floor a fluorescent hue

sheesh

Summon the strength of Goliath.. hit like a Congo viper hocking saliva
Somalian pirate in the wake of Poseidon, my optical fibers like an Oculus visor
A locust swarmin out the lotus blossom,

:0

DNA print reads as genius literature w/ Nietzsche's signature

word

Let's make it simple as Reddit; if Para & Saber's gripping the weapon
you're off to a rocky start boxin' with the old guard like Mason Dixon's obsession

/r/ELI5

Just taste the venom, accept it - Pagan riddles erected
If Kano's kissing your empress, each page is visual leverage
RESPECT my team. We ain't your average Aretha Franklin nipple suppressors

wut lol

Megatron rebuilt by Chevy, the system's not gonna fall
The cinderblocks in my palms had Liston droppin' his jaws

woof

very heavily-geared towards the one-liners so i've chosen to critique it as such. this was a tight collab. contrasting styles but very complementary. 3 of my all-time favorites without a doubt..

i think you're still looking rediscover your voice, kin. you're almost there. keep the wheels greased.


thanks friend




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Watching Neigh Palm weapons big enough to turn the whole Vienam forest floor a fluorescent hue
^ nice, though if neigh isn't writing this you're saying he has big hands


The glock 9 I'm gripping could start a bonfire
^ lol this has to be Neigh

Summon the strength of Goliath.. hit like a Congo viper hocking saliva
Somalian pirate in the wake of Poseidon, my optical fibers like an Oculus visor
^ just nasty

Brain fires impulses from pilot's controls.. process data w/ dire results
My mind make a diamond corrode; to write what I know'd leave you white as a ghost
^ flames

I'm eight parts phalanx, nine percent gold digger
Five percent 5-Percenter, cypher set stone slinger
Prescribing final deaths to idle lines of vets, no zingers
cause V's an unsympathetic, isometric cybersect CoHpe stickler
^ liked how that flowed



This was a nice piece. I won't give adequate feedback but all three did well. Para could tighten his flow a smidgen, Vulgar got hot towards the end, Neigh had good flow, maybe less braggo & more on topic.

Great job

Jesus, this was fucking crazy.

Some of the best self-hype I've read. Reminds me of Rhyme-Asylum a bit. Rhymes (although slanted at times) were great and creative, and the punchlines were just ballistic. Imagery was on point for all of you. Great job, guys. I really enjoyed the read.

thanks for the feedback

word at blacketh

one last up

all three killed it dead

love neighs style tho

done!

THATS how Malaysia got in the mix… still reading

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Ironic re up of this post… I’m on promithazene and just posted that too

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YAYYYYY LETS ALL MAKE SOME MONEY NOW!!!!

Done!

@Echelon done means what?