WK12 CONT MATCH: Blue Bayou (7-1) vs Bash (7-4) - BashEmUp WINS

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@Blue Bayou @Bash

Gluck

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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

Gluck

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Same.I'm goin 14 btw

time after time i straight give u the business u chump..
as far as losses go Moral pile up… what u Righteous isn't enough
this battle's a Wash. ur concepts are played w/ no shine..
it's NOTHING ‘airing out your old material’ the way u Clotheslines
took ur girl to the movies. she chose seats & she said yes impressed..
told’er pick Aroma then took her home til my room Smelled of sweat & sex
gave'er cock in the booth. she's a slut we're always knockin the boots..
trust me dawg that ‘Bishop to No Good’ … as if a Priest was talkin to you
i Pump Fakes & since you're nothin but a bitch opponent..
i'm makin ur Center Pacer.. far as ur death goes we'll all say It's Sabonis!
we can throw hands but u'll have no answer in fairness..
hit u w/ a body shot so hard it forces ya ‘Ribbon ur Chest’ like breast cancer awareness
ur shits so wack that my stomach truly hurts from the laughter..
Keanu verse & it's so bad Greedy will even say it was worse then the actor

14.

Blue Bayou aka Ayperos

Ya last champ match was awful, if u need a few pointers call Bash
U lost the ‘blue barc’ battle...n ironically took it in the face all match
Casket ya peeps, cant compete w/ the ammo i dispose
‘Hill House' a beautiful family & ill turn em ghost like the show
Surround this pussy, my hounds'll leave this clown sprayed
Got arms raising atchu from left to right, shits a fkn crowd wave
Get bodied w/ no revival, punches make the voters scream
This loss'll turn heads, got the board lookin' like the exorcist scene
The beams get savage, for the loot u get cooked so tragic
Light his face up for the paper...this the new book light patent
1 on 1 w/ the great one? U can get ur grill stomped & slayed
Boot to his face, leave em wired up like he spied a drug exchange
I'm the silverback in ya path, bro ya bars cant see me
Nobody reads ‘Ayp shit’, we'd rather see u hit w/ a wad of feces

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

time after time i straight give u the business u chump..
as far as losses go Moral pile up… what u Righteous isn't enough
Righteous/write just? Nah... Reye-CHUS is how it's pronounced. Like the More'll/Moral play bit it's kind of over done, man.
this battle's a Wash. ur concepts are played w/ no shine..
it's NOTHING ‘airing out your old material’ the way u Clotheslines
Very dated and over done play and execution here.
took ur girl to the movies. she chose seats & she said yes impressed..
told’er pick Aroma then took her home til my room Smelled of sweat & sex
Slight reach but i'll let slide, smh lol..
gave'er cock in the booth. she's a slut we're always knockin the boots..
trust me dawg that ‘Bishop to No Good’ … as if a Priest was talkin to you
Ok.
i Pump Fakes & since you're nothin but a bitch opponent..
i'm makin ur Center Pacer.. far as ur death goes we'll all say It's Sabonis!
Ok. Not exactly harsh but alright.
we can throw hands but u'll have no answer in fairness..
hit u w/ a body shot so hard it forces ya ‘Ribbon ur Chest’ like breast cancer awareness
Ribbon/Rib in play is dated but your flip on it was dope, IMO.
ur shits so wack that my stomach truly hurts from the laughter..
Keanu verse & it's so bad Greedy will even say it was worse then the actor
What? It's pronounced KEY-AH-NEW, not Key-ON-uh - wtf lol... Reachhhhhhh.

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Originally Posted by BashEmUP

Blue Bayou aka Ayperos

Ya last champ match was awful, if u need a few pointers call Bash
U lost the ‘blue barc’ battle...n ironically took it in the face all match
Not sure what you are referencing here? What's blue barc?
Casket ya peeps, cant compete w/ the ammo i dispose
‘Hill House' a beautiful family & ill turn em ghost like the show
Ok.
Surround this pussy, my hounds'll leave this clown sprayed
Got arms raising atchu from left to right, shits a fkn crowd wave
Ok.
Get bodied w/ no revival, punches make the voters scream
This loss'll turn heads, got the board lookin' like the exorcist scene
The whole turn heads concept with that execution's pretty dated. Not a fresh enough flip.
The beams get savage, for the loot u get cooked so tragic
Light his face up for the paper...this the new book light patent
Like it.
1 on 1 w/ the great one? U can get ur grill stomped & slayed
Boot to his face, leave em wired up like he spied a drug exchange
Eh... This needed something. Had potential but needed more...
I'm the silverback in ya path, bro ya bars cant see me
Nobody reads ‘Ayp shit’, we'd rather see u hit w/ a wad of feces
Lol corny but got a chuckle on the visual.

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IDK, man... TO me, Bash pulled an upset here. Wasn't feeling a lot of Blue's shit in this verse. A lot of reaches and even one I let pass because it was close. The A-ROW-MA one. It was close enough... If pronounced slower the normal. Keanu, Righteous were reaches and the clothesline bar was just way to dated without a fresh flip. Bash didn't have anything heavy but enough jabs to take this. Blue's verse seemed effortless and rushed...

v/Bash

Blue Bayou
time after time i straight give u the business u chump..
as far as losses go Moral pile up… what u Righteous isn't enough
the dictionary police need to srsly check themselves w/ wp like this. its called slant/slang wp, & tbr only the best can make it work. it takes a lyrical g to think outside the box enough to stay fresh n keep not-so-exact words (on paper) work perfectly fine aloud when you say them. so props for that, unfortunately i believe @Allen Knight did righteous already, + moral is played
this battle's a Wash. ur concepts are played w/ no shine..
it's NOTHING ‘airing out your old material’ the way u Clotheslines
not much better in the originality department, had the potential to be a jab but ur execution was lacking. screamed filler IMO
took ur girl to the movies. she chose seats & she said yes impressed..
told’er pick Aroma then took her home til my room Smelled of sweat & sex
decent. awkward but decent
gave'er cock in the booth. she's a slut we're always knockin the boots..
trust me dawg that ‘Bishop to No Good’ … as if a Priest was talkin to you
reads weird as well, but ima say jab
i Pump Fakes & since you're nothin but a bitch opponent..
i'm makin ur Center Pacer.. far as ur death goes we'll all say It's Sabonis!
dope wp in here but again, shits reading like the wp is just thrown in there w/ no substance around it. not ur usual. another jab
we can throw hands but u'll have no answer in fairness..
hit u w/ a body shot so hard it forces ya ‘Ribbon ur Chest’ like breast cancer awareness
nahh
too played and not technically sound enough. reads weird, which is weird for u
ur shits so wack that my stomach truly hurts from the laughter..
Keanu verse & it's so bad Greedy will even say it was worse then the actor
dope
cool wp, plus being apart of the convo in chat helped make this dope to me

1 gd punch
3 jabs
3 misses

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Bash
Ya last champ match was awful, if u need a few pointers call Bash
U lost the ‘blue barc’ battle...n ironically took it in the face all match
miss. tho the personal was true, i have NO idea where u were going w the concept
Casket ya peeps, cant compete w/ the ammo i dispose
‘Hill House' a beautiful family & ill turn em ghost like the show
dece
Surround this pussy, my hounds'll leave this clown sprayed
Got arms raising atchu from left to right, shits a fkn crowd wave
jab
Get bodied w/ no revival, punches make the voters scream
This loss'll turn heads, got the board lookin' like the exorcist scene
ok
The beams get savage, for the loot u get cooked so tragic
Light his face up for the paper...this the new book light patent
cool
1 on 1 w/ the great one? U can get ur grill stomped & slayed
Boot to his face, leave em wired up like he spied a drug exchange
whack
I'm the silverback in ya path, bro ya bars cant see me
Nobody reads ‘Ayp shit’, we'd rather see u hit w/ a wad of feces
played

1 gd punch
3 jabs
3 misses

v/tba

after a few rereads, ima go w bash edging
his concepts just came off cleaner & less awkward
v/bash
what an upset

time after time i straight give u the business u chump..
as far as losses go Moral pile up… what u Righteous isn't enough
^good tie-ins/wordplay. good opener
this battle's a Wash. ur concepts are played w/ no shine..
it's NOTHING ‘airing out your old material’ the way u Clotheslines
^played
took ur girl to the movies. she chose seats & she said yes impressed..
told’er pick Aroma then took her home til my room Smelled of sweat & sex
^slick
gave'er cock in the booth. she's a slut we're always knockin the boots..
trust me dawg that ‘Bishop to No Good’ … as if a Priest was talkin to you
^bishop is played
i Pump Fakes & since you're nothin but a bitch opponent..
i'm makin ur Center Pacer.. far as ur death goes we'll all say It's Sabonis!
^didn't like the wording but it was a good bar
we can throw hands but u'll have no answer in fairness..
hit u w/ a body shot so hard it forces ya ‘Ribbon ur Chest’ like breast cancer awareness
^nice
ur shits so wack that my stomach truly hurts from the laughter..
Keanu verse & it's so bad Greedy will even say it was worse then the actor
^dope


Vs.


Ya last champ match was awful, if u need a few pointers call Bash
U lost the ‘blue barc’ battle...n ironically took it in the face all match
^lol
Casket ya peeps, cant compete w/ the ammo i dispose
‘Hill House' a beautiful family & ill turn em ghost like the show
^solid
Surround this pussy, my hounds'll leave this clown sprayed
Got arms raising atchu from left to right, shits a fkn crowd wave
^likes it
Get bodied w/ no revival, punches make the voters scream
This loss'll turn heads, got the board lookin' like the exorcist scene
^lol but nah
The beams get savage, for the loot u get cooked so tragic
Light his face up for the paper...this the new book light patent
^dope
1 on 1 w/ the great one? U can get ur grill stomped & slayed
Boot to his face, leave em wired up like he spied a drug exchange
^ok
I'm the silverback in ya path, bro ya bars cant see me
Nobody reads ‘Ayp shit’, we'd rather see u hit w/ a wad of feces
^lol







V/bash

time after time i straight give u the business u chump..
as far as losses go Moral pile up… what u Righteous isn't enough
decent
this battle's a Wash. ur concepts are played w/ no shine..
it's NOTHING ‘airing out your old material’ the way u Clotheslines
nah, very old concept
took ur girl to the movies. she chose seats & she said yes impressed..
told’er pick Aroma then took her home til my room Smelled of sweat & sex
doesnt work
gave'er cock in the booth. she's a slut we're always knockin the boots..
trust me dawg that ‘Bishop to No Good’ … as if a Priest was talkin to you
no man stop this
i Pump Fakes & since you're nothin but a bitch opponent..
i'm makin ur Center Pacer.. far as ur death goes we'll all say It's Sabonis!
only works one way. Not good
we can throw hands but u'll have no answer in fairness..
hit u w/ a body shot so hard it forces ya ‘Ribbon ur Chest’ like breast cancer awareness
now this is dope
ur shits so wack that my stomach truly hurts from the laughter..
Keanu verse & it's so bad Greedy will even say it was worse then the actor
reach but decent


Vs



Ya last champ match was awful, if u need a few pointers call Bash
U lost the ‘blue barc’ battle...n ironically took it in the face all match
ok lol
Casket ya peeps, cant compete w/ the ammo i dispose
‘Hill House' a beautiful family & ill turn em ghost like the show
coulda done a lot more with the concept, fell short here wasn’t feelin it
Surround this pussy, my hounds'll leave this clown sprayed
Got arms raising atchu from left to right, shits a fkn crowd wave
ok
Get bodied w/ no revival, punches make the voters scream
This loss'll turn heads, got the board lookin' like the exorcist scene
nah
The beams get savage, for the loot u get cooked so tragic
Light his face up for the paper...this the new book light patent
cool
1 on 1 w/ the great one? U can get ur grill stomped & slayed
Boot to his face, leave em wired up like he spied a drug exchange
i mean I guess. You have good concepts but your execution lacks effectiveness
I'm the silverback in ya path, bro ya bars cant see me
Nobody reads ‘Ayp shit’, we'd rather see u hit w/ a wad of feces
alright lol


This battle pretty much confirms my theory. This site only appreciates wordplay, there’s no room for gun bars or anything gutter. Blue reaaaaaally overdosed on trying to force wordplay here, most of it did not work out in his favor. Blue was definitely the favorite to win coming into this battle but that verse wasn’t up to par. Bash has a lot of cool concepts and I suppose I can understand why his bars get praised so good over here on RB. IMO bash, your bars tend to lack sometimes and I feel you could have done more with the concept. Nonetheless you definitely had the better verse in this one, you get the win.


Vote Bash

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Literally sickened by barcotic not being able to vote against blue bayou as per wordplay enthusiast protoccol.


Ridiculous

time after time i straight give u the business u chump..
as far as losses go Moral pile up… what u Righteous isn't enough
Thought this was dope
this battle's a Wash. ur concepts are played w/ no shine..
it's NOTHING ‘airing out your old material’ the way u Clotheslines
nah man
took ur girl to the movies. she chose seats & she said yes impressed..
told’er pick Aroma then took her home til my room Smelled of sweat & sex
not feelin this either my dude
gave'er cock in the booth. she's a slut we're always knockin the boots..
trust me dawg that ‘Bishop to No Good’ … as if a Priest was talkin to you
Dope
i Pump Fakes & since you're nothin but a bitch opponent..
i'm makin ur Center Pacer.. far as ur death goes we'll all say It's Sabonis!
I fuck with the idea but this jus read awkward
we can throw hands but u'll have no answer in fairness..
hit u w/ a body shot so hard it forces ya ‘Ribbon ur Chest’ like breast cancer awareness
seen Ribbon to many times man
ur shits so wack that my stomach truly hurts from the laughter..
Keanu verse & it's so bad Greedy will even say it was worse then the actor
some wont like this but I fuck with it and the Personal shot to...

Vs


Ya last champ match was awful, if u need a few pointers call Bash
U lost the ‘blue barc’ battle...n ironically took it in the face all match
i dont get it... I know what your refering to but this doesnt work for me
Casket ya peeps, cant compete w/ the ammo i dispose
‘Hill House' a beautiful family & ill turn em ghost like the show
jab... felt this could have been harsher. cool current event bar to
Surround this pussy, my hounds'll leave this clown sprayed
Got arms raising atchu from left to right, shits a fkn crowd wave
I fuk wit it...
Get bodied w/ no revival, punches make the voters scream
This loss'll turn heads, got the board lookin' like the exorcist scene
Seen this but this was a effective basic angle I fuk wit
The beams get savage, for the loot u get cooked so tragic
Light his face up for the paper...this the new book light patent
I like this
1 on 1 w/ the great one? U can get ur grill stomped & slayed
Boot to his face, leave em wired up like he spied a drug exchange
meh.. not a fan
I'm the silverback in ya path, bro ya bars cant see me
Nobody reads ‘Ayp shit’, we'd rather see u hit w/ a wad of feces
Lol I fuk with this too



V/Bash.. was more consistant and less misses

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Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

time after time i straight give u the business u chump..
as far as losses go Moral pile up… what u Righteous isn't enough
So do you literally try to do this with every word you come across? What in the fuck is this. I respect the wordplay here, but I don't love anything else bout it.
this battle's a Wash. ur concepts are played w/ no shine..
it's NOTHING ‘airing out your old material’ the way u Clotheslines
This is tricky
took ur girl to the movies. she chose seats & she said yes impressed..
told’er pick Aroma then took her home til my room Smelled of sweat & sex
I don't love this
gave'er cock in the booth. she's a slut we're always knockin the boots..
trust me dawg that ‘Bishop to No Good’ … as if a Priest was talkin to you
This is tight. Can you explain why you don't end on Bishop to No Good?
i Pump Fakes & since you're nothin but a bitch opponent..
i'm makin ur Center Pacer.. far as ur death goes we'll all say It's Sabonis!
This is cool
we can throw hands but u'll have no answer in fairness..
hit u w/ a body shot so hard it forces ya ‘Ribbon ur Chest’ like breast cancer awareness
This is cool. It doesn't hit that hard though. I kind of expected to be more impressed by it after I read it. It's super technical but not that hard hitting IMO.
ur shits so wack that my stomach truly hurts from the laughter..
Keanu verse & it's so bad Greedy will even say it was worse then the actor
Yeah. He does love Keanu.

14.

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Honestly? This isn't my favorite battle from you. But it is you doing what you do.

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Originally Posted by BashEmUP

Blue Bayou aka Ayperos

Ya last champ match was awful, if u need a few pointers call Bash
U lost the ‘blue barc’ battle...n ironically took it in the face all match
Ignore the rest of these voters! I get your obscure military reference. It's so obvious! Also can we ban @Zunto for swaying in his votes? Thanks.
Casket ya peeps, cant compete w/ the ammo i dispose
‘Hill House' a beautiful family & ill turn em ghost like the show
DUDE ALL FUCKING WEEK WITH THIS WORDING! I love everything about this bar. But why in the fuck end on "The Show" instead of on "Hill House" or Ghost or any of the more interesting images??? Dispose isn't even a strong enough multi to justify the setup. Someone needs to sit me down and explain this. Because I do not like it. He doesn't even need to change his bar to fit the wording -- "& ____ turn em ghost" works
Surround this pussy, my hounds'll leave this clown sprayed
Got arms raising atchu from left to right, shits a fkn crowd wave
This is tight.
Get bodied w/ no revival, punches make the voters scream
This loss'll turn heads, got the board lookin' like the exorcist scene
I don't love this. This is pretty played out.
The beams get savage, for the loot u get cooked so tragic
Light his face up for the paper...this the new book light patent
So I really didn't like this the first time I read it. Then I read it a couple of times. I respect this bar. I don't like something about it. But it's a really cool bar.
1 on 1 w/ the great one? U can get ur grill stomped & slayed
Boot to his face, leave em wired up like he spied a drug exchange
I don't feel like you made the connection. Spied =/= wire.
I'm the silverback in ya path, bro ya bars cant see me
Nobody reads ‘Ayp shit’, we'd rather see u hit w/ a wad of feces
I don't really love this

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VOTE: Bash. I feel like he had one more bar here and was just more consistent, overall.

time after time i straight give u the business u chump..
as far as losses go Moral pile up… what u Righteous isn't enough
Lol, nice.

this battle's a Wash. ur concepts are played w/ no shine..
it's NOTHING ‘airing out your old material’ the way u Clotheslines
Kind of played? I think? Still pretty good.

took ur girl to the movies. she chose seats & she said yes impressed..
told’er pick Aroma then took her home til my room Smelled of sweat & sex
Dope.

gave'er cock in the booth. she's a slut we're always knockin the boots..
trust me dawg that ‘Bishop to No Good’ … as if a Priest was talkin to you
lol. Nice.

i Pump Fakes & since you're nothin but a bitch opponent..
i'm makin ur Center Pacer.. far as ur death goes we'll all say It's Sabonis!
Eh, too simple I think.

we can throw hands but u'll have no answer in fairness..
hit u w/ a body shot so hard it forces ya ‘Ribbon ur Chest’ like breast cancer awareness
Nice.

ur shits so wack that my stomach truly hurts from the laughter..
Keanu verse & it's so bad Greedy will even say it was worse then the actor
Eh. Wasn’t feeling.

Ya last champ match was awful, if u need a few pointers call Bash
U lost the ‘blue barc’ battle...n ironically took it in the face all match
Okay. Not a bad start.

Casket ya peeps, cant compete w/ the ammo i dispose
‘Hill House' a beautiful family & ill turn em ghost like the show
ok.

Surround this pussy, my hounds'll leave this clown sprayed
Got arms raising atchu from left to right, shits a fkn crowd wave
Eh. I’ve seen this often, and I don’t think you advanced the punch or freshened it up.


Get bodied w/ no revival, punches make the voters scream
This loss'll turn heads, got the board lookin' like the exorcist scene
Eh.

The beams get savage, for the loot u get cooked so tragic
Light his face up for the paper...this the new book light patent
This was alright… I don’t think I liked the double light here? Took away from it for me.

1 on 1 w/ the great one? U can get ur grill stomped & slayed
Boot to his face, leave em wired up like he spied a drug exchange
lol. Okay. I fuck w this.

I'm the silverback in ya path, bro ya bars cant see me
Nobody reads ‘Ayp shit’, we'd rather see u hit w/ a wad of feces
Eh.

I got blue here… yes some of his stuff was old, but it was well executed and was feeling the aroma and awareness bars to carry him.

Bash wins