WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0) - Jit Wins

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@Jit @Greedy

Exotic my clothes, my hoes, and my reefer.
Yea.
They say its cheaper to keep her.
Yea.
But fuck it, im rich so i left her
Yea.
Shot out my plug. He let me keep all the extra
-Lil Baby
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E33qmmI6qyY

.45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
& by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
& 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
& if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin

At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates

So yea, this was a great way to start off the competition this week. Both opponents came with equally creative concepts, and each of them was consistent mostly throughout. It came down to the battler that seemed to personalize their verse more. Note the per vs gen explanations in the breakdown to see where Im going. Personal/Generic obviously.

.45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
This Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
^nice .. gen/
U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
& by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
^tight wordlpay setup could been a lil better.. per/
If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
& 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
^this was set up well but lost sting somehow, good concept tho... gen/
We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
& if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
^decent, a bit flat on delivery.. gen/ with a per/ nod for a name drop
Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
^pretty cool setup and wordplay... gen/
Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
^Interesting attempt, a bit wordy forsure tho... per/

vs

At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
^Good concept, cool delivery minus a wordy setup... per/
Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
^this was funny, good delivery, it flowed well... gen/
But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
^Dope concept, cool delivery... gen/
U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
^nice concept, awkward wording in the setup.. gen/ with a per/ nod for relevance.
St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
^meh.. meh not, cool attempt, fell flat mostly tho... gen/
Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
^kinda the only flat out miss in your verse.. gen/



I gotta vote/Jit for more personal attempts and a tad bit more consistency. Very good battle from both overall. high level stuff really.

up.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Jit

.45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
swaggin, could of been cleaner
U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
& by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
nah not feelin it
If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
& 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
i like the concept but same as ur first bar
We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
& if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
these r ur signature bars. i fks w/ em though. solid
Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
cool cool
Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
no sir

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Greedy

At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
nasty
Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
clean asf
But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
this could of hit harder
U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
tie ins made this bar solid. nice
St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
not feeling this one
Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
alil humorous, could of closed better

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Paddys Done, holiday sweater

vs

family matters, snicker doodle, friend of hours

v. Greedy...in a close one. Could go either way

.45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
-ok

U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
& by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food 
-no

If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner 
& 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner 
-decent

We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
& if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
-nope

Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
-nah

Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen 
Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
-not feelin

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At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
-been done b4 but ok

Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas 
-dope & happy holidays to u & ur fam

But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
-not feelin and it's not bcuz it's a "cripplin" bar

U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers 
This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
-ok

St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
-lol shit was funny.

Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
-lol ok closer

Overall cool battle

V- greed

.45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
^good tie-ins but a miss for me
U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
& by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
^what?
If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
& 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
^no
We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
& if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
^ok as is but coulda been worded better for harder punch
Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
^dope
Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
^miss

Vs.

At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
^lazy
Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
^dope
But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
^ehh
U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
^no
St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
^remote location is played
Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
^nah man





V/Jit

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Jit

.45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
not into these.
U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
& by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
nah
If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
& 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
dope idea, not crazy about how u finished it
We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
& if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season.
ok jab
Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
dope, fresh concept to me and worded well.
Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin

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ehh this doesnt hit for me.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Greedy

At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
eh u had cypher bars better than this lol
Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
dope, lol @ u both dropping holiday bars
But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
cool idea, not feeling the execution
U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
eh ok
St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
ok flip but remote location definitely played
Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
funny but too simple imo

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this is tough to call. taking the best 2 bars from each verse, i like jits more. but i think jit also had the worst misses with pedigree and degree. greedy made this tough because even the bars i thought missed were worded well for the most part. i think i still have jit here, he had 2 of the best 3 punches.

vote Jit

jit
.45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
a little stretched but coo
U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
& by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
reach on the np
If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
& 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
ehhh, ok
We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
& if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
ok
Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
ok
Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
miss

1 good punch
3 jabs
2 misses

vs

greedy
At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
ok, family matters is played but it was ok the way u did it
Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
dope
But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
fuck no
U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
this would have been fire when wordplay came out, not in 2018
St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
played again
Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
too simple/filler

1 good punch
1 jab
4 misses

v/jit

yikes
thats an upset