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right house rules due tomorrow er latest tomorrow afternoon really.... votes are 3 then you knock out best of five technical knockout...
please check in tonight if you can so tomorrow i know you are for real.... good luck and take care either way....
sorry forgot to say how many lines... 10 anyways...
Check. By tomorrow, huh? Smh... Ok.
dont know man im trying to write a set up in this line right
and battle this dude authentic while im by myself and im posting online
and i know you battle cats on Rapbattles and frontlines but ill still pop u like some snare
i like how this began he still aint prepared im like oxygen way im giving you some air
yo im stunning you aint dope and i aint cussing but ya bitches stay fronting
got me feeling like a doctor way you made me think that bitch was an ugly duckling
you just an acre of land ive got to lease like i was a looney toon and this aint acme
but killing authentic going make me happy like the time i fermented in a oustanding tapestry
but now i know you aint nothing and i should just refer to my buckle
you like some washing and drying and i see that now ya lines all filled with mumbles
..10 anyways... keyed up will post links soon... looking forward to this thanks,,
late bloomer.
You couldnt key a verse on that piano if you was taught by Beethoven
or on rb... so stick them keys up ya ass to fine tune your self-loathing
cause you rock raggedy clothing, and them fuckin shoes hittin the lean
shirt unravling at the seam, n those no bell-bottoms, just big ass jeans..
I mean.. You really resemble your work. You true to your art form, cool
Ray Charles was fucking blind and still he ain't look like a goh damn fool
Could neva wallk in ya shoes... Dont want the athletes feet or dead toes
If i did.. I'd stomp u w.them athletes n dead toes til ya body dead, cold
Just fuckin w.u doe... n that's way more than the women sayin my dude
Still.. Just playin w.u, i know u a late bloomer, so u gone get a attitude...
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Keystyle... Lets get them votes returned.
but now i know you aint nothing and i should just refer to my buckle
you like some washing and drying and i see that now ya lines all filled with mumbles
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cause you rock raggedy clothing, and them fuckin shoes hittin the lean
shirt unravling at the seam, n those no bell-bottoms, just big ass jeans..
Just fuckin w.u doe... n that's way more than the women sayin my dude
Still.. Just playin w.u, i know u a late bloomer, so u gone get a attitude...
Not much to say on this... keep practicing late bloomer
vote - authentic
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Could neva wallk in ya shoes... Dont want the athletes feet or dead toes
If i did.. I'd stomp u w.them athletes n dead toes til ya body dead, cold
wasn't digging either verse... LB, u got a lot of work to do and concepts to grasp....its a long road to get there...
Authentic, u spent a lot of time on his dressing/clothing... that personal doesn't really work without anything to back it up...
V- Authentic
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You couldnt key a verse on that piano if you was taught by Beethoven
or on rb... so stick them keys up ya ass to fine tune your self-loathing
cause you rock raggedy clothing, and them fuckin shoes hittin the lean
shirt unravling at the seam, n those no bell-bottoms, just big ass jeans..
I mean.. You really resemble your work. You true to your art form, cool
Ray Charles was fucking blind and still he ain't look like a goh damn fool
Could neva wallk in ya shoes... Dont want the athletes feet or dead toes
If i did.. I'd stomp u w.them athletes n dead toes til ya body dead, cold
Just fuckin w.u doe... n that's way more than the women sayin my dude
Still.. Just playin w.u, i know u a late bloomer, so u gone get a attitude...
Stop battling Late Bloomer if you have experience with Text-battling. He's obviously trying to learn @KnowP @Letterman close my battle with Late Bloomer dont give him a lose
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Vote: late bloomer for being the closest to forming a fucking punchline. Really terrible battle. thx for making me read
^ And you're the one to speak on nothingness... lol classic!
Bump.
and i know you battle cats on Rapbattles and frontlines but ill still pop u like some snare
i like how this began he still aint prepared im like oxygen way im giving you some air
yo im stunning you aint dope and i aint cussing but ya bitches stay fronting
got me feeling like a doctor way you made me think that bitch was an ugly duckling
vs.
cause you rock raggedy clothing, and them fuckin shoes hittin the lean
shirt unravling at the seam, n those no bell-bottoms, just big ass jeans..
I mean.. You really resemble your work. You true to your art form, cool
Ray Charles was fucking blind and still he ain't look like a goh damn fool
This battle was underwhelmin...imo these were the best lines from each verse. Single syllable rhymes, no real wp or heavy hitting punches to speak of. Gonna go with Authentic here. His verse read more cleanly, was more aggressive, and tied in some attempts at humor.
Vote:Authentic
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vote: authentic, terrible battle. nothing was hitting from either side. i got authentic for actually coming close to a punch... late, u need to start coming more creative
ugh, this was a landslide. Not even really fun to vote on but had a lol at one point.
Line of the battle:
cause you rock raggedy clothing, and them fuckin shoes hittin the lean
shirt unravling at the seam, n those no bell-bottoms, just big ass jeans..
'unraveling at the seam'<<<<<<
v/ Authentic
Authentic wins