Georgey Porgey Pudding & Pie- Mortuus & Vortex
Georgey Porgey Pudding & Pie
P. Mortuus: Section 1
Vortex: Section 2
I’m digging holes of deceit
Burying dead relatives- I’m discreet
uncle was pain & aunt agony
Dangled feet in the grave- take a seat
in my astral plane- my physical long forlorn
worn out damaged when worn as a gown for
mock royalty- I submitted to no other
N.W.O wrestled with ol’ George as a partner
to make opponents cower- worrying over cells
not jails but there IQ sure never prevailed
when George tipped his finger up & an abrupt
“Fuck you” was whispered from an unopened
mouth which seemed shut- but echoed so loud
roped and hung- one gone many more to come
how’d he get so far- when far became close
& the Illuminati put the real president in comatose
to roam & pose- with a charade made by foes
of US- not USA but us- we the meant to be humanity
scathingly attacked- slyly lies covered the mat
so the youth of Islam couldn’t discern fiction from fact
pick up your GAT & give a 21 salute to the passed
soon to join em- your birth was a pre-made pact
it’s a fact were sinners from birth so sinners we die
get thinner oh my!- anorexia is spread by lies
& obesity is slap on the face of men trying to survive
clap on the vice- my vices are my virtues of life
Russian roulette- living so I throw another dice
Lose finance- so I commit acts with rage and hate
& afar sit the presidents- laughing as I fall in my place
another brother in another jail cell- his mother prayed
still didn't stop him falling victim to tricks of the trade
....
Now let’s not beat about the Bush, don’t push me man
This land is full of outlandish bullshit that nobody understands
Our hands is tied as sour plans of spies are projected
Dupe votes reviewed by a new pope see Satan elected,
The Reagan days were a trip
Now you’re left facing a true pagan with a death-wish
Anti – Mohamed; spreading panic across the Atlantic
Damning the Islamic prone, shooting ammunition at Buddha
Jet planes versus rocks & stones, this competition is super
Secret maneuvers, speaking by phone to J Edgar Hoover,
Murder Brother X, then incur slurs that blur the vision
Concur for next mission; this demolition man has risen
Imprison the prophets of JAH, & distort their wisdom
I
Won’t
Joke, just
Provoke thoughts
They hold rope in
Courts ready
To lynch
The
I
Soldier of the Most High, I’d rather die than take bribes
A thin line divides sane & insane; beware of the fake Christ
Preach the Torah to reveal light, make no mistake twice
Each day I awake to fight the venom of demon snakebites
It’s like an orgy in Hell, a blatant brothel full of lies
As Georgey-Porgey kisses the girls & makes them cry
Pudding & Pie Niggaz
Pudding & Pie
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Re: Georgey Porgey Pudding & Pie- Mortuus & Vortex
P.Mortus- Your stlye is somewhat hard to get into, the lines kinda seem's forced and I read it, then I read it aloud and it just didn't sound right. Maybe the flow was for your enjoyment but as a reader it just didn't 'melt' right into my mouth. With that said, the word-choices we're good. The approach you took to talk about the president actions was nice. All in all this was decent part of the collab.
Vortex- First and foremost, I like your style. Very unique and you put a little poetic style in there. Nice. What you've contributed to the collab was the 'message' believe it or not. Mortus was giving it in a way of deph, such as Imaginary and the background of it all. Where you came in and gave it much emotion, the voice of this whole entire piece. All in all, Nice.
This was a Nice collab here, both parts mesh in the right way, no swaying nor going about interupting the real 'content' of the concept. Great job by both.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...en-354889.html
^^ RTF' plz.
Re: Georgey Porgey Pudding & Pie- Mortuus & Vortex
one of the best collabs i've seen on here........y'all matched each others Energy well........that was Good.....gr8 concept and rhyme patterns......
8/10........
tightest lines were:
Now let’s not beat about the Bush, don’t push me man
This land is full of outlandish bullshit that nobody understands
Our hands is tied as sour plans of spies are projected
Dupe votes reviewed by a new pope see Satan elected,
The Reagan days were a trip
Now you’re left facing a true pagan with a death-wish
Anti – Mohamed; spreading panic across the Atlantic
Damning the Islamic prone, shooting ammunition at Buddha
Jet planes versus rocks & stones, this competition is super
Secret maneuvers, speaking by phone to J Edgar Hoover,
Murder Brother X, then incur slurs that blur the vision
Concur for next mission; this demolition man has risen
Imprison the prophets of JAH, & distort their wisdom ....inspirational
Re: Georgey Porgey Pudding & Pie- Mortuus & Vortex
Pretty cool, guys... I liked what both of you did, I thought both flowed well... mortuus I think I really got ur flow on this, tho you got lazy on those last few lines, lol, the syllables weren't as smooth, it was a cool scheme, though, you just never last-rhyme it completely so I kind of have to resort your lines out in my head to scheme them how I'd like... or maybe the song playing right now just went good with ur verse, but I dug it.
Quote:
mock royalty- I submitted to no other
N.W.O wrestled with ol’ George as a partner
to make opponents cower- worrying over cells
not jails but there IQ sure never prevailed
when George tipped his finger up & an abrupt
“Fuck you” was whispered from an unopened
mouth which seemed shut- but echoed so loud
roped and hung- one gone many more to come
Kind of had to quote the whole thing... I'm very aware of the content... I've done a lot of personal research on NWO, illuminate, etc., as you allude to, and agree it's something to care about... and this was well written and meaningful... really got me into the verse and its why I stopped to read the whole thing and comment.
Quote:
how’d he get so far- when far became close
& the Illuminati put the real president in comatose
to roam & pose- with a charade made by foes
of US- not USA but us- we the meant to be humanity
scathingly attacked- slyly lies covered the mat
so the youth of Islam couldn’t discern fiction from fact
That is very well written, I enjoyed it a lot, it must have poured out the way it seems conversational, yet storytelling and rhymes so smoothly... well paced writing, man, top notch...
I mean, your last few lines seemed a bit lazy, but for the most part, great work.
Ninjah/Vortex/whatever, LoL, very good work from you as usual though you seem to be on a somewhat different vibe, beat-wise, if you catch my drift, but it's cool. You know what is happening around us but you're more throwing out allusions to things than explaining them, but it certainly should inspire some curiosity in the reader... nice job.
Quote:
Our hands is tied as sour plans of spies are projected
Dupe votes reviewed by a new pope see Satan elected,
The Reagan days were a trip
Now you’re left facing a true pagan with a death-wish
Anti – Mohamed; spreading panic across the Atlantic
Damning the Islamic prone, shooting ammunition at Buddha
Jet planes versus rocks & stones, this competition is super
Secret maneuvers, speaking by phone to J Edgar Hoover,
I liked that part a lot, man, very nice writing and information... you musta been in the zone right there... it just turned out real nice, and you obviously had a lot to say, but kind of like I said earlier, you don'd develop the ideas as much as you just kinda state them, LoL, but I know exactly what you're talking about, I'm just afraid most readers won't...
Quote:
Soldier of the Most High, I’d rather die than take bribes
A thin line divides sane & insane; beware of the fake Christ
Preach the Torah to reveal light, make no mistake twice
Each day I awake to fight the venom of demon snakebites
It’s like an orgy in Hell, a blatant brothel full of lies
As Georgey-Porgey kisses the girls & makes them cry
And that whole ending was dope, really turned up a notch... to me probably the hardest hitting part of the entire collab, and at the end placed perfectly... shaped it all up nice with thise kind of "WAKE UP!" feel to it... I loved it, man, nice way to finish a collab, Ninjah.. the fake christ line was dope as hell, really one of the nicest I've read in a while.
You got some knowledge in that head just dying to pour out when you start to perfect this shit, the drugs open a gate, but they don't achieve the goal, you know what I mean? It's effort and a clear head.
Alright, good work guys, hit up something I've done in OM recently or something if you feel compelled to... I mean, that was some bomb ass feed, right? LoL...
Peace.
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this was an ill collab...i like both of your styles alot...they mesh well....mortuus,you always have the more complex style...i read it a couple of times,the more complex the more enjoyable to me..but not so complex..always sayin something..not just rhymin big words...i dig the shit you said about the president and his irrational decisions.....vocab was of course on point..imagery was vivid..with both verses...wordplay was ill..alot more complex with your verse than vortex..but still ill...rhyme scheme did seem off but it just takes a keen eye..and the poetical aspects of your verses are always enjoyable... i really have no argument or dislikes with either verse..you both stayed on point and got your message across very well...all in all a very solid piece...
Quote:
Originally Posted by P. Mortuus
I’m digging holes of deceit
Burying dead relatives- I’m discreet
uncle was pain & aunt agony
Dangled feet in the grave- take a seat
Quote:
Originally Posted by P. Mortuus
N.W.O wrestled with ol’ George as a partner
to make opponents cower- worrying over cells
not jails but there IQ sure never prevailed
when George tipped his finger up & an abrupt
“Fuck you” was whispered from an unopened
mouth which seemed shut- but echoed so loud
roped and hung- one gone many more to come
Quote:
Originally Posted by P. Mortuus
how’d he get so far- when far became close
& the Illuminati put the real president in comatose
to roam & pose- with a charade made by foes
of US- not USA but us- we the meant to be humanity
Quote:
Originally Posted by P. Mortuus
scathingly attacked- slyly lies covered the mat
so the youth of Islam couldn’t discern fiction from fact
pick up your GAT & give a 21 salute to the passed
soon to join em- your birth was a pre-made pact
it’s a fact were sinners from birth so sinners we die
get thinner oh my!- anorexia is spread by lies
& obesity is slap on the face of men trying to survive
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vortex
Now let’s not beat about the Bush, don’t push me man
This land is full of outlandish bullshit that nobody understands
Our hands is tied as sour plans of spies are projected
Dupe votes reviewed by a new pope see Satan elected
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vortex
Anti – Mohamed; spreading panic across the Atlantic
Damning the Islamic prone, shooting ammunition at Buddha
Jet planes versus rocks & stones, this competition is super
Secret maneuvers, speaking by phone to J Edgar Hoover,
favorite lines..keep droppin the hottness for sure.~1~
Re: Georgey Porgey Pudding & Pie- Mortuus & Vortex
damn quick reply..srry.i edited it so it wasnt the same long shit twice
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Re: Georgey Porgey Pudding & Pie- Mortuus & Vortex
Mortuus- Your flow was okay but got me a little lost.
It still was pretty dope just the style wasn't any of
my interest.
Quote:
I’m digging holes of deceit
Burying dead relatives- I’m discreet
uncle was pain & aunt agony
Dangled feet in the grave- take a seat
Very dope.. Sorry Im not gonna quote much from
both of you but Im in a rush. Overall you did amazing
either way and put alot into this... Good job..
Vortex- Very dope and smooth flow. I was kinda
feeling your style a little more. And your whole
verse killed it. So im not even gonna quote it.
You did a real good job, bro...
Well you both had amazing verses and didn't fall
off topic. It was incredible. And Mortuus keep
flowin', man... You did great, too, yo.. But I just
wasn't diggin' the style. But I did get where you
were coming from....
Have a good one guys and thanks for the read...
Re: Georgey Porgey Pudding & Pie- Mortuus & Vortex
Re: Georgey Porgey Pudding & Pie- Mortuus & Vortex
I got alil lost on the Mortuus part but after i read it i think i got the style you was implementing, it was a good concept just need a little work on how you transition from one thought to another then back. If you just fix that gap I think every one would understand it more clear. I like Vortex part to it was nice smooth delivery all the way though. All in all i think it was hot, ya'll should "tag team" again
