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whatevers clever.
weak punches will sleep this fag, the hits u bring ain't bold
my clentched fist will send u packing.. so in other words ur out, cold
i wouldnt relax/take it easy on me..cuz in the end ill supply the smile n win
i ain't gotta leave ya body chopped up in a motel 6 to show this aint a holiday In
i seen this quote/ur last battle.. n relized ill dismantle ur limbsQuote:
Originally Posted by Indrid Cold
cuz VO is a whiskey... n we all know u had trouble handle him
i came across this one to n it made sense.. now ur getting ripped mad quickQuote:
Originally Posted by Indrid Cold
cuz if thats the case then everyone reading your verse will have a bad trip
ill tie u up with rope...stab him if he trys to fight still
throw'em in my trunk n make cold dissapear like a dose of night quil
his avatar says located 'on the way to hell'..it proves i'm above you and you're lower instead
but atleast you know you're a level under me...so its no dispute i go over your head
check goldenglove 21 and the FL champ match, by the looks of it you wont lift to stardom
and it seem's you had so much trouble with alphabet, i wonder how you graduated kindergarten
being top three in fl wont help you gain acceptance..you think you're 'risin' with a great ascension?
but pay attention...because only way he'd ever elevate..is if he reached the gates of heaven
so if he says he'll die standing up...i wont act adversely
ill give him his last rights since he asked for mercy, and leave him dead on his feet like taxidermy
so when i smash this queer, he'll be holding back the tears, and as the end of this battle nears
all there will be left to do is pick up the pieces...because i'll have completely shattered mir
ill tie u up with rope...stab him if he trys to fight still
throw'em in my trunk n make cold dissapear like a dose of night quil
-best from miracle, I expected more from u in this. Alot of the punches were very weak or had a bad flow to them.
so if he says he'll die standing up...i wont act adversely
ill give him his last rights since he asked for mercy, and leave him dead on his feet like taxidermy
so when i smash this queer, he'll be holding back the tears, and as the end of this battle nears
all there will be left to do is pick up the pieces...because i'll have completely shattered mir
-best from indrid, your verse also lacked in flow due to forced rhymes, but felt u had two decent punches to miracles one
Vote-indrid
ill tie u up with rope...stab him if he trys to fight still
throw'em in my trunk n make cold dissapear like a dose of night quil
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so if he says he'll die standing up...i wont act adversely
ill give him his last rights since he asked for mercy, and leave him dead on his feet like taxidermy
V.Cold/Good ass battle,Cold was more consistent with the punches;more hits
miracle had some good concepts but the punches werent strong,
weak punches will sleep this fag, the hits u bring ain't bold
my clentched fist will send u packing.. so in other words ur out, cold
decent opener
i wouldnt relax/take it easy on me..cuz in the end ill supply the smile n win
i ain't gotta leave ya body chopped up in a motel 6 to show this aint a holiday In
i dont see a punch here
seen this quote/ur last battle.. n relized ill dismantle ur limbs
cuz VO is a whiskey... n we all know u had trouble handle him
this lacks multis..
i came across this one to n it made sense.. now ur getting ripped mad quick
cuz if thats the case then everyone reading your verse will have a bad trip
kinda weak here
ill tie u up with rope...stab him if he trys to fight still
throw'em in my trunk n make cold dissapear like a dose of night quil
my favorite line of your verse
his avatar says located 'on the way to hell'..it proves i'm above you and you're lower instead
but atleast you know you're a level under me...so its no dispute i go over your head
nice lines here
check goldenglove 21 and the FL champ match, by the looks of it you wont lift to stardom
and it seem's you had so much trouble with alphabet, i wonder how you graduated kindergarten
this made me laugh out loud
being top three in fl wont help you gain acceptance..you think you're 'risin' with a great ascension?
but pay attention...because only way he'd ever elevate..is if he reached the gates of heaven
nice multi/personal here
so if he says he'll die standing up...i wont act adversely
ill give him his last rights since he asked for mercy, and leave him dead on his feet like taxidermy
nice
so when i smash this queer, he'll be holding back the tears, and as the end of this battle nears
all there will be left to do is pick up the pieces...because i'll have completely shattered mir
nice rhyme scheme and multis
miracle - ive seen several of your battles and you didnt hit as hard in this one as usual
indrid - i enjoyed your personals moreso than miracles so im giving you the win based on this
i came across this one to n it made sense.. now ur getting ripped mad quick
cuz if thats the case then everyone reading your verse will have a bad trip
ill tie u up with rope...stab him if he trys to fight still
throw'em in my trunk n make cold dissapear like a dose of night quil
vs.
check goldenglove 21 and the FL champ match, by the looks of it you wont lift to stardom
and it seem's you had so much trouble with alphabet, i wonder how you graduated kindergarten
being top three in fl wont help you gain acceptance..you think you're 'risin' with a great ascension?
but pay attention...because only way he'd ever elevate..is if he reached the gates of heaven
Good battle, both had some punches. Miracle had some alright punches, but you did exacute the qoutes nicely. Indrid had nice personals, expecially that kindergarten punch. Other lines delt more damage then Mircale's lines. Still, nice battle.
V - Indrid
Miracle
weak punches will sleep this fag, the hits u bring ain't bold
my clentched fist will send u packing.. so in other words ur out, cold
alright
i wouldnt relax/take it easy on me..cuz in the end ill supply the smile n win
i ain't gotta leave ya body chopped up in a motel 6 to show this aint a holiday In
nah, man didnt like this
i seen this quote/ur last battle.. n relized ill dismantle ur limbs
cuz VO is a whiskey... n we all know u had trouble handle him
what?
i came across this one to n it made sense.. now ur getting ripped mad quick
cuz if thats the case then everyone reading your verse will have a bad trip
ROFl
ill tie u up with rope...stab him if he trys to fight still
throw'em in my trunk n make cold dissapear like a dose of night quil
nice
Cold
his avatar says located 'on the way to hell'..it proves i'm above you and you're lower instead
but atleast you know you're a level under me...so its no dispute i go over your head
played idea
check goldenglove 21 and the FL champ match, by the looks of it you wont lift to stardom
and it seem's you had so much trouble with alphabet, i wonder how you graduated kindergarten
ROFL
being top three in fl wont help you gain acceptance..you think you're 'risin' with a great ascension?
but pay attention...because only way he'd ever elevate..is if he reached the gates of heaven
elevation punches r played out
so if he says he'll die standing up...i wont act adversely
ill give him his last rights since he asked for mercy, and leave him dead on his feet like taxidermy
alright
so when i smash this queer, he'll be holding back the tears, and as the end of this battle nears
all there will be left to do is pick up the pieces...because i'll have completely shattered mir
Ive seen shattered mirror concept done on him this is alittle better
MIr had an Alright verse minus that stretched ish and that Vo one.Cold could took this but those played lines hurt you the Shattered mirror concept was cool but since ive seen it before it lost that flare the flip was nice tho good verse but those played lines brought down quality of the verse sorry
Vote Miracle
so if he says he'll die standing up...i wont act adversely
ill give him his last rights since he asked for mercy, and leave him dead on his feet like taxidermy
so when i smash this queer, he'll be holding back the tears, and as the end of this battle nears
all there will be left to do is pick up the pieces...because i'll have completely shattered mir
vs
ill tie u up with rope...stab him if he trys to fight still
throw'em in my trunk n make cold dissapear like a dose of night quil
cold js had harder hits and more lines that stood out to me
v/cold