Rnd 1 Slayerr vs Malediction [Malediction wins]

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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

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@Slayerr @malediction

sorry slayerr ... dont take it personal

Freaking Britts, Your King’s rooting for and Theyre doing waves… in the crowd
Dont know what’s funnier!! reading you’re verses, or picturing you say them.. aloud

I’ll leave you floored, malediction is the weakest on this board
You only hit a stone cold stunner whenever you check your battle record

I'll honest. Not super big on either punch. But Mal's punch was made more impactful by the fact that Slayerrs scheme work was sloppy.

Vote Mal

Mal had dry humor factor but overall his punch was structured better. Slayer missed with his punch the wording was off.

V/Mal

Freaking Britts, Your King’s rooting for and Theyre doing waves… in the crowd
Dont know what’s funnier!! reading you’re verses, or picturing you say them.. aloud

ok. thiis is mild tbh.. a bit corny but it hits ultimately..

Vs

I’ll leave you floored, malediction is the weakest on this board
You only hit a stone cold stunner whenever you check your battle record

statementish punchline.. plus battle records are over played


im going with the humor factor here.. malediction kinda made me smirk.. ive seen slayer do better tbh.. v/malediction

Malediction- you had the personal with a dash of humor. Nothing too creative, but I don't have any real complaints other than it being pretty simple/basic.

Slayer- I had to read this in a British accent for it to work, but I'm not holding it against you. But I will hold the whole "battle record" angle against you because its been done too much.

Vote- maledictorian
-less things that I Didn't like

Malediction wins 4-0.