haven't checked this yet, but I will.
Looks good.
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Can I get some feed
@Jukon , I appreciate the feed.
Those lines you speak of, the four you couldn't remember being there...were there lol.
You probably speed read it and didn't notice them.
As always, your feed is always valued and respected.
Thank you.
hmm if u say so lol
i know lol it was early though, thats one of the most memorable lines of the piece
im an idiot
@TheIllyricist sorry about the delay bro, but i got you, tomorrow, on your piece. Just skimmed over it and definitely fuckin with it!
No worries Sammy, take your time man! I appreciate it the lookin' out
To have just a few words is more than an honor for me @Emily
I appreciate all the kind words. As well as the time you spent reading.... It helps me even though I don't show it.
Yeh he needs to post some more shit, probably the most entertaining for me to read right now lol
I've got phx on that list plus a shit load more.
I'm loving so many pieces atm, it's insane.
I don't usually do this, but . . .
Check out my "The Vision Heir" piece. I think the content and the flow with its rhyme scheme and multis and all the other nifty nuances make it an entertaining read. I'd really love to convert it into an audio if I had the set up. No feedback is necessary, I'd just love for others to read it. And if it sucks, you can kill me later and sell my baby sister into slavery (she'll fetch a pretty penny, I do believe).
Thank you @Emily for the feedback by the way whilst I'm on the topic. As always, your words are highly regarded and appreciated.