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Just you
how can you be so mean acting like your some fucking queen//
well theres the door you fucking whore come back when your the person that i knew once before//
one that would do any thing for me wouldnt pick a time to be just would//
so how could you say that you will see me another day when you got other plans, but o... I have to full fill your demands//
hell i got more loyalty from one of my friends//
help your self cuz you have lost your fucking mind are you blind//
your losing me and it's to easy to see why you would be a second thought//
unless of course you had my credit card cuz you can be fucking bought//
now didnt you think i could drop you in a blink//
all you need to do is take a second to think about someone other than your self//
you make my life a personal hell I would be beter off in jail//
fuck this trick ass bitch im ready to bail//
peace now im gone my life has failed//
If I live another day im sure to prevail//
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...Um, very simple and original....Next time show more creativity and unique style, otherwise, title this as a poetry piece and add more depth....This was too short to add real feedback so use the suggestions to progress......-Realizm-
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