Sanity Shift

alright guys its been forever but im back so tell me wwut u think plz....thanks

sanity shift.

we live to hate the end
yet we hunger from within
to forget that we're condemened
to finish what our past begins

a lost soul inside
dreams and destiny collide
and then red eyed i lie in wait for the shift

theres a needle in the haystack, a plague in her smile
the memories i begin to see soothe me for a while

and then it shifts!!!!!!

caged insanity!
temptation begins demanding me
to lend my thoughtless apathy
to those corrupt that dont do crap for me

I hope the shift comes soon!!

Because i dont know how to turn to ash
this hell that burns within my past
from first to last......
as the shift begins I search for sanity to grasp..

eh, awkward.

havent seen you in forever.. but i guess you could make a comeback, you got lots of work to do.. i didn't really like this piece because you tried to do something that would have been a good idea, have this piece been more thoughtout.. nice try though.. keep writing.