Week 9: Plaz 0-1 vs. Smog 0-0 SMOG WINS

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@Plaz @Smog

10's fine bro

nice, let's get it!

due tn brethren @Smog @Plaz

[QUOTE]Originally posted by Plaz
dammit i swear i went beastmode when writing that verse and it was all for nothing[QUOTE]


I know right..

.. I fuckin hate ho shows, times to precious to have that occur to dudes
So I'd rather not write a verse n cop the free win...than HALF ASS n murder u
All of a sudden ur dope son? Nah pussy, u made the UBC finals thanks to a cold front
No1 thinks u turned a new leaf.. we ALL knew bar was to busy RAKING UP OLD ONES!
A 100 locs'll wipe out ya whole hood, we bring hell totin shit to burry lames
Bet, when we stormy seas death.. n'd have a better chance sailboatin in a hurricane
In this Art Of War anything goes, so if u rather use glocks then go ginst this pencil
Then U'll get Beat With The Gunshots... but it ain't a 2pac n Bone instrumental
Claimin I ducked u, please, I don't get pleasure bodying wack fucks
I mean Soo WACK! I even dreaded checkin in like the mo mo lobby was backed up

nice, just finished my verse too, am a little burnt out but was able to piece this together.

goodluck man


i could air you out in your own house, you foldable as shit bro
cuz clearing out smog from the room is as easy as opening the window
i keep a poker face, plus i already peeped what your concealing son
and your cards are such a 'shorthand' - that this is probly the quickest iv'e killed someone
shit, just looking at your bitch has me pullin my hair..
she's like the stock market, can't tell if it's a bull or a bear
we ain't equals, even in a series, you'd get shellackings..
just check your monitor - we wouldn't even be '1:1' in pixel mapping
and you already know when it comes to the ciggs it be a dreadful mistake
cuz it's clear you really don't want the smoke - ok bro, we get it, you vape

I know right..

.. I fuckin hate ho shows, times to precious to have that occur to dudes
So I'd rather not write a verse n cop the free win...than HALF ASS n murder u
2.5/5 aight
All of a sudden ur dope son? Nah pussy, u made the UBC finals thanks to a cold front
No1 thinks u turned a new leaf.. we ALL knew bar was to busy RAKING UP OLD ONES!
2/5

A 100 locs'll wipe out ya whole hood, we bring hell totin shit to burry lames
Bet, when we stormy seas death.. n'd have a better chance sailboatin in a hurricane
2/5 ok

In this Art Of War anything goes, so if u rather use glocks then go ginst this pencil
Then U'll get Beat With The Gunshots... but it ain't a 2pac n Bone instrumental
2.5/5

Claimin I ducked u, please, I don't get pleasure bodying wack fucks
I mean Soo WACK! I even dreaded checkin in like the mo mo lobby was backed up
2.5/5 aight

11.5 points

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i could air you out in your own house, you foldable as shit bro
cuz clearing out smog from the room is as easy as opening the window
2.5/5 solid opener.

i keep a poker face, plus i already peeped what your concealing son
and your cards are such a 'shorthand' - that this is probly the quickest iv'e killed someone
2/5 aight

shit, just looking at your bitch has me pullin my hair..
she's like the stock market, can't tell if it's a bull or a bear
3/5 funny shit.

we ain't equals, even in a series, you'd get shellackings..
just check your monitor - we wouldn't even be '1:1' in pixel mapping
2.5/5 solid
and you already know when it comes to the ciggs it be a dreadful mistake
cuz it's clear you really don't want the smoke - ok bro, we get it, you vape
2/5 ok

12 points.

Very close call, V/Plaz by a hair.

i could air you out in your own house, you foldable as shit bro
cuz clearing out smog from the room is as easy as opening the window

Vs

In this Art Of War anything goes, so if u rather use glocks then go ginst this pencil
Then U'll get Beat With The Gunshots... but it ain't a 2pac n Bone instrumental

Overall Vote: Clear winner here, I mean smog could of easily took this he had some
FIre set Ups They Just Fell flat each time or the sting didn’t equal to how good he set It up
Plaz ain’t Do to good either but his errors wasn’t as bad his opener was the best haymaker landed
Everything else was again hurt By wording or poor execution on the punch my vote: Plaz

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i could air you out in your own house, you foldable as shit bro
cuz clearing out smog from the room is as easy as opening the window

Vs

In this Art Of War anything goes, so if u rather use glocks then go ginst this pencil
Then U'll get Beat With The Gunshots... but it ain't a 2pac n Bone instrumental

Overall Vote: Clear winner here, I mean smog could of easily took this he had some
FIre set Ups They Just Fell flat each time or the sting didn’t equal to how good he set It up
Plaz ain’t Do to good either but his errors wasn’t as bad his opener was the best haymaker landed
Everything else was again hurt By wording or poor execution on the punch my vote: Plaz

new leaf vs plaz's opener. Smog had the better overall verse tho tbh. plaz didnt execute some of his ideas well.

v. smog...more polished

[QUOTE=Smog;8903102][QUOTE]Originally posted by Plaz
dammit i swear i went beastmode when writing that verse and it was all for nothing

Quote:

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I know right..

.. I fuckin hate ho shows, times to precious to have that occur to dudes
So I'd rather not write a verse n cop the free win...than HALF ASS n murder u
ok

All of a sudden ur dope son? Nah pussy, u made the UBC finals thanks to a cold front
No1 thinks u turned a new leaf.. we ALL knew bar was to busy RAKING UP OLD ONES!

got em

A 100 locs'll wipe out ya whole hood, we bring hell totin shit to burry lames
Bet, when we stormy seas death.. n'd have a better chance sailboatin in a hurricane

eh nah

In this Art Of War anything goes, so if u rather use glocks then go ginst this pencil
Then U'll get Beat With The Gunshots... but it ain't a 2pac n Bone instrumental

nice creative

Claimin I ducked u, please, I don't get pleasure bodying wack fucks
I mean Soo WACK! I even dreaded checkin in like the mo mo lobby was backed up

idgi

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Plaz

nice, just finished my verse too, am a little burnt out but was able to piece this together.

goodluck man


i could air you out in your own house, you foldable as shit bro
cuz clearing out smog from the room is as easy as opening the window

lil too simple here

i keep a poker face, plus i already peeped what your concealing son
and your cards are such a 'shorthand' - that this is probly the quickest iv'e killed someone

nah

shit, just looking at your bitch has me pullin my hair..
she's like the stock market, can't tell if it's a bull or a bear

kind of funny but eh

we ain't equals, even in a series, you'd get shellackings..
just check your monitor - we wouldn't even be '1:1' in pixel mapping

ok this is better

and you already know when it comes to the ciggs it be a dreadful mistake
cuz it's clear you really don't want the smoke - ok bro, we get it, you vape

nahhhhhhhhhh lol

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i got smog here... i def thinks plaz is burnt out his past couple verses were better imo

All of a sudden ur dope son? Nah pussy, u made the UBC finals thanks to a cold front
No1 thinks u turned a new leaf.. we ALL knew bar was to busy RAKING UP OLD ONES!
In this Art Of War anything goes, so if u rather use glocks then go ginst this pencil
Then U'll get Beat With The Gunshots... but it ain't a 2pac n Bone instrumental
Love that joint^^



VS


Stock market was cool, ..wasnt feeling much more tbh bro. some played/basic bars in there.

V/Smog

Smog:
Opener- decent personal
New leaf- played, but ill get u credit w the personal angle
Stormy death- i liked the wordplay here. Wasnt crazy about the bar overall
Pac n Bone- fire

Vs

Plaz-
Opener- i fk w it. This is pretty gd
Pixel mapping- nice


Vote smog. Better overall verse

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Smog

I fuckin hate ho shows, times to precious to have that occur to dudes
So I'd rather not write a verse n cop the free win...than HALF ASS n murder u
pretty bland but pretty true. it hit
All of a sudden ur dope son? Nah pussy, u made the UBC finals thanks to a cold front
No1 thinks u turned a new leaf.. we ALL knew bar was to busy RAKING UP OLD ONES!
dope. 1 of the best janks tdw my work, lotb
A 100 locs'll wipe out ya whole hood, we bring hell totin shit to burry lames
Bet, when we stormy seas death.. n'd have a better chance sailboatin in a hurricane
nah
In this Art Of War anything goes, so if u rather use glocks then go ginst this pencil
Then U'll get Beat With The Gunshots... but it ain't a 2pac n Bone instrumental
nice try but nah. creative pts but nah
Claimin I ducked u, please, I don't get pleasure bodying wack fucks
I mean Soo WACK! I even dreaded checkin in like the mo mo lobby was backed up
miss

1 good punch
1 jab
3 misses

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Plaz

i could air you out in your own house, you foldable as shit bro
cuz clearing out smog from the room is as easy as opening the window
played af
i keep a poker face, plus i already peeped what your concealing son
and your cards are such a 'shorthand' - that this is probly the quickest iv'e killed someone
no
shit, just looking at your bitch has me pullin my hair..
she's like the stock market, can't tell if it's a bull or a bear
tf? whack
we ain't equals, even in a series, you'd get shellackings..
just check your monitor - we wouldn't even be '1:1' in pixel mapping
the concept was creative, but it fell flat
and you already know when it comes to the ciggs it be a dreadful mistake
cuz it's clear you really don't want the smoke - ok bro, we get it, you vape
way too simple/played

no good punches
no jabs
5 misses

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v/smog
no hate

BLAME METH FOR MY SHITTY VOTE THIS WEEK

In this Art Of War anything goes, so if u rather use glocks then go ginst this pencil
Then U'll get Beat With The Gunshots... but it ain't a 2pac n Bone instrumental

v

shit, just looking at your bitch has me pullin my hair..
she's like the stock market, can't tell if it's a bull or a bear
we ain't equals, even in a series, you'd get shellackings..
just check your monitor - we wouldn't even be '1:1' in pixel mapping

Vote Plaz Pixel mapping was retarded but the concept was tight.

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Just FYI no one is going to get why it's tight.

People on this site are retarded.