UH OHHHH
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UH OHHHH
HOT DROP NEEDS SOME BRUSH UP BUT THIS WAS HOT
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What Will You Do For Something Theoretical? It's Mainsteam Feeding The Core...
Stuck In Questions Hypothetical, Todays World Has Become A Bore...
I like that.....
Nice Piece homie........
pretty deep....
Something About Love And Other Feelings... Kinda Hard To Explain... But Umm... Say If You Hadn't Ever Met Your Wife... And You Married Someone Else... And You Tell Your Wife That You Love Her But In Your Other Life You Love Someone Else... So How Do You Know That You Love Is True... And About How People Love Cause It's The Cool Thing To Do... Glorified By TV And Such... Blah... It's Almost Midnight... You Figure It Out...
Teach The Kids From An Early Age Not To Resist, Make A Fist...
On Your Quest For False Items, I Watch From Where I Reside...
Take Your Wrongs And Right'em, I'm Going Back Inside...
^^That Ender Was Tight...You Lost Me In Some Points But Overall Its Pretty Tight..Keep Bringin Tha Gemz Mun...Pz....
...Uppin...
Nutmeg Is Lethal When Injected Intravenously... Or However..
...Uppin...
...Fucking Sleepers...srepeelS gnikcuF...
hey man,nice piece I liked ya multies alot (not only makin the last words rhyme) and ya made sense.Ya kno how to use Vocab as well,good.Stay ^
-Avi
^Welcome Back... You Were Looking At My Pieces When I Just Started Posting Here... :) Need A Crew?
Bash Is Stupid And Is A Fake Vet...
Uppin...
that was a nice drop much props
Hot stuff, loved the ending
was a good element of complexity in there aswell
nice v.enjoyable to read
-pz
I think dat if da structure wuz neater...in a cleaner bar 4mat den dis might b a legend...4 real....it's sum real deep shit....mos def felt dat. KEEP DROPPIN!
^Thanks :)
Last Time I'll Up This