Talent

I say this completely calm and with no Malice:
You motherfucker’s are sleeping hard on my talent
What do you want? Punchlines? I've got em bitch, what kind?
Truth's styles are more versatile than Haagen Dazs or Duncan-Hines
You want multisyllabic rhymes? Check me spitting them double time
Here in the rapbattles halls of shine...fuck a nomination I don't need validation
From a couple of fags in their late twenties on constant periods of menstruation
I'm just tryna kick some rhymes in poetic form that challenge taboo and social norm
Alike because the deep want to bust mics makes me flaunt the ill skill to just write
Reader's Porn. It just so happens I'm the rappin pied piper on this forum
And I got these dudes scared to run the site's streets, staring hard from the balcony
Blowin horns. Get on my level and let go of your blatant tendency
To dickride the proven formula to gain access to HOF entry
This is in no way a diss and I've an ass you can kiss if you think I'm yanking your chain
I'm speaking to say there's a fault to the system and I've been a witness to the shit simple & plain
Damn right, I'm a little bitter but with lyrics as sweet as liquor
Made in Carolina backwoods beside the Smith river that can make a grown man quiver
You would be too! I understand the deference is unintentional
But jeez! Where's my due? I've got it all and then some. I'm a lyrical miracle
Waiting to happen... not trying to get spiritual but here we go...
Who the hell do you think is saving earth while Jesus is nappin?
You can say I'm backpackin or you can same I'm old fashioned
But half the shit dropped today belongs in the trash bin beside napkins
And used condoms. I can say that because you chumps don't want problems
See, around here I'm as OG as it gets. Don't believe me? Check the catalog
See for yourself I'm the king around here bruh, check the fucking SS battle log
So believe me I'm the talent 'round these parts you want on your next dope piece
I can't guarantee everyone will like it, but it will be ill and grab a HOF NOM at least ;)

Lmao I can't believe you had an 'everybody can sick my dick' party and didn't tell me. Not that I would want to go, I'm just hurt you didn't invite me lol. This was dope, and considering I have never seen you do an ego piece(not that I can remember) this really caught my attention. The rhyme scheme was dope, I love how they bled into the next line instead of always at the end of the line, it gave your flow a bit more fluidity. I think I saw one typo were you wrote same when you meant say, but that's it. The last bar was dope, kind of felt directed at me lmao. This was a dope drop my nigga, sometimes you just have to slap your balls on the table.

lmao i was vibin with this joint until the very last line. we collabed and our shyt didnt get nom'd u llying sack of puss bag!! Anywho, i think this would rocked hard on audio. I like how u said u wasnt bitter then went on a rant about being bitter! I fuks with you truth, but ironically speaking, the truth hurts...


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Lmao thanks for the feedback y'all. HEC I love collabing with you it makes me go all out and Knowp we need go collab again

I bump

I say this completely calm and with no Malice:
You motherfucker’s are sleeping hard on my talent
What do you want? Punchlines? I've got em bitch, what kind?
Truth's styles are more versatile than Haagen Dazs or Duncan-Hines
You want multisyllabic rhymes? Check me spitting them double time
Ok you've introduced the topic nicely, lets see where we go from here
Here in the rapbattles halls of shine...fuck a nomination I don't need validation
From a couple of fags in their late twenties on constant periods of menstruation
I'm just tryna kick some rhymes in poetic form that challenge taboo and social norm
Alike because the deep want to bust mics makes me flaunt the ill skill to just write
Reader's Porn. It just so happens I'm the rappin pied piper on this forum
First thing for me that throws me off is the rhyme structure.. It would probably be fine bumpin this shit as audio, but for me throwing "just write" in between "social norm" and "on this forum" threw me off a bit. I realize you had readers porn that rhymed, but I dunno seeing it dislayd like that threw me off. Other then that, I see what you're doing here now lol. PPL sitting on your shit? haha, but no flow is decent, I like how you have sort of a "punk" attitude if you will, by saying fuck what you think of me I'm doing my thing..
And I got these dudes scared to run the site's streets, staring hard from the balcony
Blowin horns. Get on my level and let go of your blatant tendency
To dickride the proven formula to gain access to HOF entry
This is in no way a diss and I've an ass you can kiss if you think I'm yanking your chain
I'm speaking to say there's a fault to the system and I've been a witness to the shit simple & plain
Flow is superb here, I read it thru my head a couple times, and it sounds nice..
Damn right, I'm a little bitter but with lyrics as sweet as liquor
Made in Carolina backwoods beside the Smith river that can make a grown man quiver
You would be too! I understand the deference is unintentional
But jeez! Where's my due? I've got it all and then some. I'm a lyrical miracle
Waiting to happen... not trying to get spiritual but here we go...
Who the hell do you think is saving earth while Jesus is nappin?
You can say I'm backpackin or you can same I'm old fashioned
But half the shit dropped today belongs in the trash bin beside napkins
And used condoms. I can say that because you chumps don't want problems
I liked this up until "beside napkins and used condoms, I can say that because you chumps don't want problems" I can't quite put my finger on it, something just seemed a little cheesy about it (sorry)
See, around here I'm as OG as it gets. Don't believe me? Check the catalog
See for yourself I'm the king around here bruh, check the fucking SS battle log
So believe me I'm the talent 'round these parts you want on your next dope piece
I can't guarantee everyone will like it, but it will be ill and grab a HOF NOM at least
Well I liked the reasons you wrote this. I grew up with a punk background and basically lived by these ideals most my life. All in all cool read Truth. the only thing I would work on is rhyme structure.. Other then that, straight drop, stay at it bro.

Truth I got a laugh out of this, and I DO realize this isn't satire but true to life feelings lol displayed in poetical form for us to think
you're a good writer and not at all bitter that we don't all get the feed we want on ALL our pieces lol.
I love the gutsy 'in ya face' attitude you have here. The rhymes are decent and funny at times, and the flow flows for the most part of this piece, well.
My favourite lines are the first two. They sucked me into the piece and I had to keep reading. Nice intro my friend.

"I say this completely calm and with no Malice:
You motherfucker’s are sleeping hard on my talent"

lol Classic.

I think its cool how you go from bitching to bragging and then blame ..."fags in their late twenties on constant periods of menstruation"...for your bleeding ways lol lol. Ahh, the good old days of people saying it how it is.

Love it Truth.
Cool wording and flow make me a happy camper.

ps) The tampax are in the second draw.