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1-2 Punch Season 27 E-Zine: Volume 3
1-2 Punch Season 27 E-Zine: Volume 3
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***IMPORTANT UPDATE***
Some of you lazy bastards need to stop being lazy bastards. We will no longer be accepting shitty ass votes!!! Look below for examples of shitty ass votes that will no longer be counted:
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Krucial Th1rt3en
v/og maestro. better bar
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Basic M
V/Knowp...harsher
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Basic M
---Thought Crack had the harder bar
V/C. Morris
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Heise
Smog got it, other dudes was trash
I will not be accepting votes like these anymore. There was some other votes that were shitty too I just posted the worst of the worst. Explain your reason why you voted who you did other than "other dude was trash". Lackluster votes will not count towards final score of the battle and will not count towards the 5 votes you need per week. See below for examples of a good vote:
Quote:
Originally Posted by
OG Maestro
13 I like how you took your time with the punch, but you gotta work those lines and double up on your entendres in order for that type of style to hit. i suggest you look at some of Smack's battles, or Joog's swag and flow battles where they both use the short bar style pretty effectively. and remember, there's a difference between an entendre and word association. like all the apostrophes you kept putting around your words were just small time associations, nothing really clever or mind blowing.
Long story short, you gotta use multiple plays on words and puns for that style to work the best. which is tough to do, i can't see anyone in this league pulling off. maybe you can if you work hard enough.
Basic, you did your thing. i didn't like the bar but it was executed better than your opponent's so you get my vote off that fact.
Vote: Basic
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Smog
Both of these were weak, I felt basic was lazy n didn't put much thought into executing the concept better, cuz def coulda been fire.. kru dropped a weak scheme with terrible structure.. I mean it coulda been worded better for more impact but with the way it stands I got M edging this..
Basic
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Requiem
Neither really had anything special. Basic, well was pretty basic. I don’t particularly like punches that are aimed at ones team/crew/gang etc because these is supposed to be one on one personal. Yes I get that his name plays into it but just a tired concept.
Kru 13 had a decent idea, I’ll give him a round for being a little more original but at the end of the day it was far too wordy and not executed very well.
Tough call here but my vote will bring to Basic M by a thin margin.
Vote - Basic M
Intro
I've updated a couple of the rules, if you want to check them out again. Basically 5 vote requirement (instead of voting on every battle) and contenders and champ are mandatory to vote on. A couple of you were slacking on the voting, so next week I'll be looking over everything and penalizing everyone who didn't meet the minimum voting (including those who leave shitty ass votes).
Battle Summaries
Smog vs Requiem
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Smog
Fuck ur "I get no respect" rant, just peep the truth n believe me, dummy
That^ phrase ain't why ur Rodney Dangerfield.. ur him cuz beatin u is Easy, Money
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
Requiem
Come on dude ... these personals are glum son, none-em add up ...
Sad fuck...
I make millions clown, U makin “Penny - why’s” lookin’ like U suck dick for crack, slut
Smog took this one comfortably. He had a good personal which connected and got the job done. Requiem had an ok attempt at wordplay but his execution was way off. I woulda gone something like "if for every time he gets a penny, why's this clown still broke" or something like that (coulda mentioned him living in the gutter in the first line to add to the correlation) to be more effective. I can see Requiem getting a lot better by the end of this season though.
Witty vs KnowP
Quote:
Originally Posted by
KnowP
You sneak dissing in the chat like a rat, nothing to get your brim hit
Keep playing me stupid and one flash will make your lights dimwit
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
Witty
I hate this faggot fucker, I'm an avid puncher with a savage hunger
I'll crack his structure with a jab to every part of his body like acupuncture.
KnowP had a mehhh nameplay whereas witty had a non connecting similie. By non connecting I mean the punch didn't connect with knowp. The correlations within the bar connected but it wasn't harsh nor was it a proper punch imo.
KnowP took this one fairly easily.
Basic M vs Krucial Thirt3en
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Basic M
You comment on battles like ur talented...ur trash, its no debatin'
I'll drive by & let the ratchet hit Kru...but it wont be gang retaliation
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
Krucial Th1rt3en
this week i have a new 'Top Job'...
i gotta 'Bag' for this 'Basic trash',
shotgun...
if he act 'shady on my stage',
ill put more 'holes in M's/Em's face' than 'Slims jason mask'.
I wasn't impressed with this battle.. I think basic m thought this would be an easy win so he dropped a very sub par "kru" nameplay that had weak correlations and just seemed rushed. His first line talked about his talent and how theres no debating he's trash then his second line goes to shooting guns and a weak flip off of kru. Make sure your entire bar makes sense not just the last line. Krucial dropped a weird punchline that was just wayyyy too wordy and didn't directly attack his opponent. You could have used basic trash and done something like "we know basic trash, s'why I got this battle in the bag" (just a quick format don't judge me) and it would have been better. All that extra "shady on my stage" and "m's / ems face" and "slims jason mask" just took away from the basic trash concept (which was already worded horrible). I know you thought you had some type of thought provoking punchline that had all these angles, but really it was overkill and took away from any potential it might have had..
boston vs Joe Boston
nothing
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
Joe Boston
Fag wants to be on that romantic shit, prays it gets him in the sheets hes hoping
Tries to express his love with a Rose now he got eight women accusing him of groping
"prays it gets him in the sheets hes hoping" is redundant like smog said. Takes away from the impact of the punch by having shit like this. All in all an okay punch, nothing crazy but it was a classic Joe Boston 'take something from the news and turn it into a loosely correlated punchline usually with no personal factor to it'...
plethora vs Bomb Bard
Quote:
Originally Posted by
plethora
ur periodic table punch was missin many elements including zinc & brass
also Hydrogen Bomb.. and hopefully north korea drops one on ur bitch ass
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nothing
plethora had a nice punch this week. Decent namelay with a personal tied in as well. Not much more to say about this battle, plethora wasted a decent punch on a no showing faggot.
OG Maestro vs Crack Morris
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Crack Morris
i'll stun yahh life, got a crew of loyal psychopaths.. do work with a gun or knife
my team like a cult following... with one nod they stabbing the shit out of this manson an wife
Quote:
Originally Posted by
OG Maestro
Listen.
Knife game on horror movie, so he bleedin to death on the first time like I couldn't spare a virgin
It's only fair I'm purging, but Morr's stab wound had Twists & Turns that even scared the surgeon
I dunno who crack morris is but he had a decent punch i thought with a wordplay and current event tied into it. I honestly felt crack morris should have taken the dub here, but voters felt otherwise... so what can you do. Either way it was still close and OG had a decent punch too. One thing I didn't like about either punch is that they were both longgg as fuck lol try and shorten them up. The more you can fit into less, the more it'll have impact.
Diso vs. Heise
nothing
vs
nothing
Faggots
King Los Freestyle
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Week 3 Top Punches
5. KnowP
Quote:
Originally Posted by
KnowP
You sneak dissing in the chat like a rat, nothing to get your brim hit
Keep playing me stupid and one flash will make your lights dimwit
4. Crack Morris
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Crack Morris
i'll stun yahh life, got a crew of loyal psychopaths.. do work with a gun or knife
my team like a cult following... with one nod they stabbing the shit out of this manson an wife
3. OG Maestro
Quote:
Originally Posted by
OG Maestro
Knife game on horror movie, so he bleedin to death on the first time like I couldn't spare a virgin
It's only fair I'm purging, but Morr's stab wound had Twists & Turns that even scared the surgeon
2. plethora
Quote:
Originally Posted by
plethora
ur periodic table punch was missin many elements including zinc & brass
also Hydrogen Bomb.. and hopefully north korea drops one on ur bitch ass
1. Smog
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Smog
Fuck ur "I get no respect" rant, just peep the truth n believe me, dummy
That^ phrase ain't why ur Rodney Dangerfield.. ur him cuz beatin u is Easy, Money
Congratulations to
@Smog
and
@plethora
for holding down the 2 top punch spots 3 weeks in a row now!
Babes: Miss [insert country here] Edition
Miss Canada
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Miss USA
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Miss Puerto Rico
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Miss Mexico
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Miss England
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Week 4 Match Ups / Predictions
Alphabet vs Smash
Alphabet is back from his door to door vacuum cleaner selling career that never took off and he's ready to take off some heads I'm sure.. Alphabet has been doing this a long time and has many well known names under is belt. Smash is more of a video battler but he can drop decent from time to time. But I think Alphabet is going to take this one easily as long as he doesn't sleep on him.
Alphabet: 70 | Smash: 30
Belooshka vs Krucial Thirt3en
I dunno what's gonna happen here. Belooshka is a troll and may not even show or he may drop something that's capable of beating Krucial. Krucial had an eye opening battle last week as he now has a better idea of whats hot and whats not when it comes to good punchlines.. I think Krucial has the edge on this one though.
Krucial Thirt3en: 60 | Belooshka: 40
Joe Boston vs plethora
Joe Boston still dropping current event lines almost every time he drops so with that being said along with his inability to utilize his concepts properly, I think it's safe to say plethora will take this one. Unless something unforeseen happens like aids and he loses by DQ, I can't see Joe Boston beating him.
plethora: 80 | Joe Boston: 20
Smog vs KnowP
KnowP is gonna have to drop something proper to get the edge here.. He was long ago much higher tiered than Smog. But Smog has surpassed KnowP by a fair amount and is one of the first names people will think of in this day and age when top RB battlers is brought up. A couple years ago I may have predicted differently, but today its gonna be:
Smog: 70 | KnowP: 30
Crack Morris vs Allen Knight
Crack Morris proved he has the mechanics down of writing a punchline, so lets see how he does. Allen Knight is consistently dropping good punches and has a resume that can prove he has what it takes to beat the best. Crack Morris will have to drop fire if he's thinking of beating AK.
Allen Knight: 70 | Crack Morris: 30
Requiem vs OG Maestro
Requiem is one of those dudes who's trash but thinks he's amazing. OG Maestro is one of those dudes who thinks he's a master sensei and that he's got it all figured out. Both of them have heads too big for their bodies, but one of them has the higher chance of being the victor.
OG Maestro: 60 | Requiem: 40
The Villain. vs Viral
The Villain. aka Dagel is a topical guy so I have no idea what kinda shit he's gonna come up with.. Viral is a nobody, at least that will be the case until his alias is revealed (if he's an alias). I think if Viral actually shows, he will beat Dagel but I don't know if he will show.
Viral: 60 | The Villain.: 40
Witty vs Basic M
Witty has shown that he can come up with nice concepts but has not shown that he can form his punches from his creative concepts properly. Sweet multi's and Good metaphors and similies don't win these types of battles too often. Basic M has proven he can drop heat but has also shown he either doesn't always take pride or he underestimates his opponents. Basic do me a favour, and drop like you were against the best so we can see what you're made of. I got Basic with the edge on this one though.
Basic M: 60 | Witty: 40
WEEK 1 WTF'S
WTF @ Requiem crying because he didn't get a contender spot right away?
WTF @ Amen mingling with everyone but not actual doing anything productive? Sign up for 1-2 you father fucker!
WTF @ Joe Boston not liking being in the WTF's?
WTF @ Joe Boston?
WTF @ Crack Morris getting robbed?
WTF @ Amen being afraid of midgets?
WTF @ Alphabet coming back to RB and battling again?
WTF @ Miss Canada being the best looking bitch of the bunch?
WTF @ Miss Puerto Rico being the ugliest bitch of the bunch?
@Amen
WTF @ Me lying about Miss Canada? Miss Mexico might be the baddest bitch...
WTF @ Witty fucking peoples sisters?
WTF @ Heise and Diso double no show? Faggots
WTF @ Amen pretending other people wear tube socks but he actually got caught wearing tube socks????
WTF?!?!?!
Outro
I hope you motherfuckers drop some bars and we weed out these no showing cock handlers. I hope Amen stops talking shit about how he's the best at text but never backs it up. You had one HOF pic battle with salamander, you aren't top tier you old carrot stick looking ass humpty dumpty crome dome head havin ass bitch. Joe Boston if you post a shadow boxing video I will let you have sex with Witty and Requiems sisters at the same time. Glad Allen Knight is back.
Beooshka > Kill Spree and Amen combined. Fuck you all. Peace
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Dope Mag as usual
@Fresh
did you pick a cypher winner by any chance did i miss that?
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Ohhh shit @ Fresh im nice with the hands and how many minutes do u want this shadow boxing video to be lol
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GOod mag fresh
Weird predictions tho
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Originally Posted by
Belooshka
GOod mag fresh
Weird predictions tho
why's that?
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WTF
@Amen
being half of the WTF's, lolol...
Fresh a true fan.
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Mag is AF bro. Great content my man. Mad props. And plethora got robbed for the number spot last week. Smog is gay.
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Originally Posted by
KnowP
Mag is ������������ AF bro. Great content my man. Mad props. And plethora got robbed for the number spot last week. Smog is gay.
if his wp wasn't a reach maybe he would have got it. As is though he did not get robbed for # 1 spot, facts.
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Nice job fresh I'll help with the cypher winner of you want
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Originally Posted by Fresh
I hope Amen stops talking shit about how he's the best at text but never backs it up. You had one HOF pic battle with salamander, you aren't top tier you old carrot stick looking ass humpty dumpty crome dome head havin ass bitch. Joe Boston if you post a shadow boxing video I will let you have sex with Witty and Requiems sisters at the same time. Glad Allen Knight is back.
Beooshka > Kill Spree and Amen combined. Fuck you all. Peace
@Fresh
- you have a lot to say to me, eh? Say it to my face tho, so I can open palm bitch slap you, wigga.
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Originally Posted by
Amen
I've ko'd fresh 3 times don't worry about it
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Quote Originally Posted by Krucial Th1rt3en View Post
v/og maestro. better bar
my bad
@Fresh
, cant lie
since i got them disrectful votes my last punch battle i kinda lost my interest here
but i wont do it again.
just being honest bro
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
Krucial Th1rt3en
Quote Originally Posted by Krucial Th1rt3en View Post
v/og maestro. better bar
my bad
@
Fresh
, cant lie
since i got them disrectful votes my last punch battle i kinda lost my interest here
but i wont do it again.
just being honest bro
Well you won't get better if you don't stick around. Unless you think ur slims Jason mask line is as good as it gets
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
Amen
I will beat the shit out of you and Kill Spree with one slap, fugoot
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nah that was quick, on the spot lmao. i thought the wordplay was dope though, 'holes in Em's face, jason mask" ah well, fuck that bar lmaoooooooooo
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Originally Posted by
Krucial Th1rt3en
nah that was quick, on the spot lmao. i thought the wordplay was dope though, 'holes in Em's face, jason mask" ah well, fuck that bar lmaoooooooooo
That coulda been used as an entirely different concept and bar. You had like half a verse worth of material in that one bar lmao
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yeah. u nailed it, i did too much with it, thinking it would over power the other guys bar
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Originally Posted by
Fresh
That coulda been used as an entirely different concept and bar. You had like half a verse worth of material in that one bar lmao
Do you want help picking a cypher winner or no?
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Originally Posted by
Belooshka
No nigga he said no
Where he say no? Cookie sheet lip
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Originally Posted by
Kill Spree
Do you want help picking a cypher winner or no?
Yes if you want it done tonight
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Originally Posted by
Fresh
Yes if you want it done tonight
I'll send my shot over tomorrow night. No time tonight
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Originally Posted by
Joe Boston
Dope Mag as usual
@
Fresh
did you pick a cypher winner by any chance did i miss that?
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Ohhh shit @ Fresh im nice with the hands and how many minutes do u want this shadow boxing video to be lol
even 30 seconds will do
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Originally Posted by
Kill Spree
Where he say no? Cookie sheet lip
Rofl
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@Kill Spree
im crying my man that shit was funny
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
Fresh
even 30 seconds will do
Yall think because im a big dude i cant movelmao
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Originally Posted by
Joe Boston
Rofl
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@
Kill Spree
im crying my man that shit was funny
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Yall think because im a big dude i cant movelmao
i believe ur a boxer, just thought any more than 30 seconds of shadow boxing is over kill
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Glad I’m getting in your head.
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Originally Posted by
Requiem
Glad I’m getting in your head.
Stfu you’re a noob with 11 posts and suck at militia
Keep that 1st dimension shkt to yourself foo
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I meant to say multi
You suck wt multi
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
Requiem
Glad I’m getting in your head.
The only head your getting into is your own. Keep showing everyone how mad you are that your no show win didn't get you into contenders match lol
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No show wins never got you into a contenders match unless it's an absolute must
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Quote:
Originally Posted by
Kill Spree
I've ko'd fresh 3 times don't worry about it
I've KO'd him 4 out of 5 times, I believe. I think he's had 1 vote all together against me. And the vote was his own alias voting for himself (JUST KIDDING... I think it was Robranda, tho serious lol... JUst to get a quick link up so she could lose her next battle.)
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Originally Posted by
Fresh
Well you won't get better if you don't stick around. Unless you think ur slims Jason mask line is as good as it gets
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I will beat the shit out of you and Kill Spree with one slap, fugoot
Lmaoooo - you are a funny guy.
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Krucial Th1rt3en
nah that was quick, on the spot lmao. i thought the wordplay was dope though, 'holes in Em's face, jason mask" ah well, fuck that bar lmaoooooooooo
Hot trash. Being over complex to the point the shit sounds stupid never words. When writing, remember the acronym KISS. It stands for Keep it simple, stupid! Perfect your wording before trying to be all scientific and formulated complex bullshit. WOrk on delivering your concepts in a harsh hand effective manner.
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Kill Spree
No show wins never got you into a contenders match unless it's an absolute must
Absolute must? NO... No shows NEVER get anyone in to a contenders match. Is this your 1st rodeo, dick breath?
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Originally Posted by
Amen
I've KO'd him 4 out of 5 times, I believe. I think he's had 1 vote all together against me. And the vote was his own alias voting for himself (JUST KIDDING... I think it was Robranda, tho serious lol... JUst to get a quick link up so she could lose her next battle.)
Lmaoooo - you are a funny guy.
Hot trash. Being over complex to the point the shit sounds stupid never words. When writing, remember the acronym KISS. It stands for Keep it simple, stupid! Perfect your wording before trying to be all scientific and formulated complex bullshit. WOrk on delivering your concepts in a harsh hand effective manner.
Absolute must? NO... No shows NEVER get anyone in to a contenders match. Is this your 1st rodeo, dick breath?
https://static.fjcdn.com/pictures/Di...fd_3727840.jpg
If all have loss and we need a contender... and the only win is a no show win than that's the absolute must. You latex scent farting faggot fucker
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Originally Posted by
Belooshka
Stfu you’re a noob with 11 posts and suck at militia
Keep that 1st dimension shkt to yourself foo
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I meant to say multi
You suck wt multi
How’s that dick taste young buck?
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Originally Posted by
Fresh
The only head your getting into is your own. Keep showing everyone how mad you are that your no show win didn't get you into contenders match lol
I mad that I can’t fuck your sister too.
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lol you're an awful troll
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Originally Posted by
Fresh
lol you're an awful troll
What’s a troll?
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Originally Posted by
Requiem
What’s a troll?
Y’all know this is Ali A’s right?
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yo
@Fresh
them dudes Krucial Th1rt3en and Requiem swaying hard in the chat thread
that shits mad unfair to Belooshka
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Snitches get stitches. I bet you tell your mommy when your internet friends make fun of you too.
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Originally Posted by
Requiem
Snitches get stitches. I bet you tell your mommy when your internet friends make fun of you too.
this site gets cornyer every fuckin day, i swear to god