latenightstumble

headphones tied round the neck
like nooses count the steps
and see how many are left
got pizza box stench on the brain
got green seas under the pits,
got karaoke under moons
titled any way you like
got the mainframe by the mainbrain
drain the main vein in the gutter -
Paolo's got the Jeep, JEEPERS CREEPERS
banging trashcan lids like cymbals,
we reenact spiderman
i think the first one,
sticking fingertips to a reluctant
adhesive on a brick wall,
pull my hat all the way over my face
tell my girl to pull it way down and
then up and kiss my lipsss!
so i mount upside down,
gravity shmavity livin' lavishly
quite ravishing when I fall
WHAT'S HAPPENING? Paolo
plays chauffeur and swings
around the corner like a
rather gay valet.
we walk and trip over granite
this planet, take a rock
and goddamnit i slam it
like i'm in the NBA.
Either way - day's a long
way off, so we cascade
and parade into the next
dimension of night...
Humiddddd movementt...
Let's do it again tommorow.
Meet right at my house
at least four drinks down
and no way no how sober up...

wtf, lol...

some weird ass meta's, but they were decent. it'd been nice if you would go into more detail with this, i'd be in to it loads more. I mean, you have some talent, lots of potential, you just have to strain to get better. so - props on getting the talent speach from me... keepw writing.

Links?