Lately

Lately
theres been one thing on my mind
one thing on my mind and its one of a kind
the aching thorns in my eyes have left me blind
but i still can think and share whats mine
theres nothing i can do if u leave whats mine astray
cuz in this life theres no time for delays
i can feel my hearts movement
and its coming your way searching for improvement
i feel the breeze of your soul dogding
i may have missed but i land on hands that r prepared for massaging
which i need indeed
off of love my heart feeds
and continues to grow like a seed
but i will not stop and plead
cuz everyone has a choice
you can go ahead and walk away from that calling voice
but soon you'll regret
that you tryed to forget
its blood that i sweat
from these gouging wounds that you u left
which have now become memories
i can careless of what you think of me
cuz you've made me stronger
theres no place in my heart for u any longer
so now im the one turning my back
i wont turn back around not even to see how u react
cuz i dont care
you've lost me and your not even aware
im floating
the hands have released and stoped the choking
to set me free
far away is where i want to be
cuz its my life
and lately thats what i've been thinking about day and night...

rhyming was kinda simple but the emotion was good and it flowed well

aweosme peice..... simple yet complex at the same time... the flow was awesome and the vocab was good, and emotions were deep and tru.... fave lines:

but soon you'll regret
that you tryed to forget
its blood that i sweat
from these gouging wounds that you u left

keep it flowiN!

:)

yo iight drop! kinda complex but good thought. really nice flow

keepit up

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