WK 11: Barcotic (14-4) Vs MV(6-6) - MV Wins

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Originally Posted by Kill Spree

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@MV

check

ill drop tmr morn.

he aint really w the broads unless hes chilling w a mop
any 1 to give Empire State they like him can fit the building in her twat

pistol whip barc n leave his head ringing get caught lackn' ya gone
If we heard you dichotic it's because I kept wackn' ya dome till it was matchn' in tone

vote MV

barcomic, i didnt really like urs tbh. seems rushed, and also like you underestimated ur opponent here.
i feel the set up had nothing to do w the punch and its kinda irrelevant.
the overall bar wasnt hitting for me. no hate,i just didnt like this shit

mv, urs was solid, relevent tie ins and all that. dichotic is a np i havent seen, ive thought of using it, and have developed concepts for it, but i never used it because i always thought it was played, but never knew. this is the first time i think i seen it tho.
overall the bar was good. only critique i have is that i wish you started off ur punch line w "when they" as opposed to "if we"

Interesting match.

Barcotic: Your setup was cool. I like the concept of comparing his bitches to a dirty mop. Lol A Thot overall huh. However I have to agree with Greedy on believing that your bar wasn't that accurate nor directed to your opponent hitting. The Empire state wordplay was horribly executed if its intended to be a name flip as well. Plus the rest was written like a 4th graded wrote it. Run on sentence out the ass. I honestly expected more but I know you can do better. Just not this time around.

MV: Good setup with the gunplay. I just hoped you adapted more after his "head ringing" concept. As well with your actual punch that could have been much harder than used. The dichotic name was very fresh and funny tbh. I just didn't like how you Incorporated with something simple as "matching in tone? " Not sure how the imagery would look for that description honestly lol.. Still it was a punch that held its own for what its worth.

Overall: I think both competitors were weak in some areas that didn't afloat well in the end. Yet I would advise proofreading some of y'all lines before sending your material. Barc had a great concept just didn't excuse well enough in my perspective. Whereas MV came simplistic and still managed to construct a moderate punch. Good battle though towards the both of you!

Vote: MV

Cool battle i got bar here tho thought his was more creative tbh but mv was cool too, props to both.

Lmao.. barcotic ur funny.. the play is dope af but the follow thru was exaggerated a little too much which ruined it for me.. MV never seen this np before so I thought that was dope.. rhyme was off a tad but overall felt u had the harder land..

MV

Empire state works. Concept as a whole was eh though. MV was ok. Leaning his way.

V. MV

MV wins