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just a verse that i recorded 20 minutes ago (out of boredom)
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drop links, i will reply asap!
EDIT: i uploaded a different mix!
links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ml#post8146062
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post8146064
vocals are a bit loud....lyrics are good, delivery isnt bad....cool beat....nice little drop
quality could be a lil better as far as making the vocals solid other than that its ok .. average practice for 16 barz.. keep it up bro! check my muzik and return the love!
vocals are way too loud, delivery and flow are dope lyrics are dope as well, very dope for some quick shit fam
if you can return the feed to either or, i'd appreciate it fam
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...451/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...273/index.html
thanks.. i'm going to mix the vocals a little lower, and i will hit those links tonight
EDIT: i updated/uploaded the verse with a different mix
feelin the lyrics on this one man...beat is illy too.....put a hook on this and a couple more verse's and you could have a hit...shit was deep....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...508/index.html
i like the mix of this the beat is ill .. i just dnt like the way the beat is cut nw and then it messes up the flow of the spittin , keep it up 7/10
I like the overdubs...you sound good here...short n sweet...like my meat...but still good...wait...nvm :(
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iigh checking this one out thomie...like the intro on beat
hmm i like the tone of ur voice man..mad laid back thing dubs are a bit loud...never was a fan of ppl using it all throughout verse unless its not noticeable at all, flow aint bad only thing is delivery is a bit monotone show some pain man in that emotion got a bit redundant just staying laid back
overall cool lil verse man
hit me back with feed please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...595/index.html
recorded vocals way to loud on the track Mixdown could be better but its quick
Flow was good on the beat however I found the beat kind of boring so the track never brought me in. Talent is there
Return the feed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...302/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...469/index.html
Yea I think the quality takes away to a very superb verse. If you can get those quality issues fixed which really only appear to be some level issues you may really be on to something