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Haiku Time!
Let's write. And then at the end we can all pick the one we like the best.
Just a little casual comp to keep the spirit alive.
For now we'll write then we'll work out the feeding/voting system later.
For now though, its all for the love of Haiku.
Let's keep the 5/7/5 format.
Enter as many times as you like.
Take pause 'fore the light;
That tunnel's luminous end
is only the end.
Railway station blues.
Two lines dividing minds eyes,
treading the same tracks
Traveling alone,
A destination unknown;
Let's see where we go
hungover: yes, soon
Pouring beer by the gallon
I may hump someone.
Stuck at the red light
Road to nothingness in sight
One last site; delight
beat the keyboard
letters to-get-her... wordplay
submission.. no replies
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.. i actually like the style of word you used .. very well con-sieved
Bring forth the righteous
Their belief has brought no doubt
Blessed is their way out
My favourite is the Karaoshi piece.
Second favourite is Poeta Demonia.
Don't have time to write why atm, busy busy busy.
I think a new pic would be good.
Anyone wanna pick the pic?
Also, which piece do you guys think is the best?
I like Poeta's. Definitely new pic time. I'd share a pic but this website is an asshole for posting pics from mobile devices.
We doing a new pic then?
Yep. Soon as I work out how to post a pic again lol.Quote:
Originally Posted by Messiah.
Give me a min.
OR....if someone beats me to it, you're welcome to drop a pic.
@Anyone, post a pic please. I'm having trouble posting pics.
heaven is empty,
but the angels are not hear -
mercy deserted.
Saturday morning
Ethereal cognizance
A land before time
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Vote/ Po'
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Originally Posted by Emily
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What y'all think of that one?
thank you @Sammy
ur welcome. hopefully its enough to draw some thoughts from.
Barren cardboard homeQuote:
Originally Posted by Sammy
Rain; Disdain reigns; Soggy Tears
Dampened, tattered soul
<3 I've missed your words bro.Quote:
Originally Posted by Atti
infinity smile,
he found love in skeletons
-poor as he was dead.
me tooQuote:
Originally Posted by Poeta Demonio
we can keep dropping in here, but thank God we actually have a proper haiku league starting soon.
Once it does, then this can be shut down.
Forums up, just need the mod to do his thing and we're off to business!
Bring it.
Never thought I'd hear myself say that.
But bring it!
It's superb.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sammy
I'm down, champ previously but never won it. I have unfinished business.Quote:
Originally Posted by Emily
Quote:
Originally Posted by Messiah.
I like it ; )
our passing glances
half-sheltered. fully removed.
cobblestone comfort.
when it only reigns
we must grow to love the shade.
all daylight reproached.
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Decisions foul wrathQuote:
Originally Posted by Sammy
"Hollywood or Hoboken?"
Thoughts of past crossroads
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Soles, sitting in rain...
Watching people sailing by.
Open the flood gates
Niiiiiice.Quote:
Originally Posted by Poeta Demonio
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Originally Posted by Truth Iscariot
Truth, this was brilliant writing imo.
@Jukon , we can probably get rid of this now.
thank you : )
Hey Sammy, long time no see.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sammy
I can't revive this. I have little time and I'm also no longer pc mod.
As for Juke, I haven't heard from him in forever. He must be busy with life.
Sure seems quiet around this board atm.
Btw, Sammy, I think this thread was just for fun anyway, so there's nothing stopping you from dropping a pic in here and letting whoever wants to chuck an ol 5/7/5 at it.
@Emily ah well that's too bad. its not the same without everyone involvement. and for whatever reason, I've been traversing the PC section, specifically the league from the tail end of 2016. man, we had so much talents here. can't believe i spent 3 hours rummaging the battles lol. it was worth it.
We did. We had some amazing work handed in and some major talent tap dancing tunes on what seemed a daily, entirely inspirational at times. It made you want to write. Plus as you said, when there's more people its a lot more fun.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sammy
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I think PS was my favourite. That was so full on but def worth the effort.
yes!! i read these last night and all 4 poems stayed fresh in my head.Quote:
Originally Posted by Emily
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ricist-(EMILY)
such an awesome battle u had with, Ill! must've read it like 12 times!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...i-vs-HEC-(HEC)
honestly i never knew HEC was this dope! that piece also stayed with me long after.
omg HEC is astounding to read. He transports me to other dimensions.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sammy
His writing reminds me a little of Ctrl Alt Elite and Self Activate.
There were a lot of really good pieces written in that league.
I doubt ive written that much in such a short amount of time since then.
It was brilliant practice, to keep the pen moving and be constantly inspired was a buzz.
i wish i was more active but i'm not much into competitive writing but i'm one of them lurker who would read every battle lol. I actually have to credit PS in molding my writing style. i was told i have a very poetic style and i feel it was certainly influenced by PC writers. you were def one of them. Illyricst and Whoami were the two biggest influences. well now i'm in a mood to write lol!
well, like wise. So many were my teacher, and its nice to know we feel the same about being inspired by those around us. so cool to know we have the ability to see our improvement inspired by those we love to read. There are a few in my list too and you are one. Some writing I just cant get into, or just bores me a bit, but other pieces have me in a harmonic heaven.Quote:
Originally Posted by Sammy
Yeah.
I miss writing.
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I miss writing and reading.
I miss PS, was constantly surprised at the quality of writing that came thru there
Stop posting those nudes or you won’t be posting hereQuote:
Originally Posted by evinkikejet