Hhmmm... Heres where I'm at a standstill. God's handbook. Is this the bible your refering to, something you came up with, personally, or a book with that title and your taking your own twizt on it? Either way...
The piece was very creative. From the begining, it had me captured in it. I loved how when you broke down each chapter, you inserted an excerpt from God's handbook in there and kind of gave clarity/forshadowing as to what was going on/going to happen next. Real good there. The vocab for it as well was used very nicely. Not too many big words, but t'was like they were not needed. Also, the way you described when God came down, kill'd Damien, made Satan and his army of darkness retreat, to when God saw what had happened then the children, along with God were grieving, very, very good description as to what was going on.
Basically, the whole story was in my head the whole time I read it. Very good imagery. And a very dope piece.
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