10 lines
due midnight
@Core Vet
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10 lines
due midnight
@Core Vet
Pussy nigga got shot and ran to the gram.
If i ever get shot, im shooting back til it jam in my hand
...ill get to preaching to u niggas like im Malcolm X
And got powder everywhere, just took it out the press.
-Sada Baby
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kvJvZb9mMiM
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Grimm v know P
Lenovo v Core Vet
@Meth @Kill Spree ill take this free win please.
U really a hoe.
U asked for this battle. Still didn't show
And u set the timeline.
Scared to death. Not ready for prime time
Corny as fuck.
Of course u didn't show.surely u suck
For fuck sake.
I wasted an hour on this battle. U owe me a lunch break
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want me to still post? Edit ya verse.
Post up
@Core Vet as long as greedy is cool w it post ur verse and i will clean the thread
Bet.. Sorry for the delay. Life come first. If he get to edit his verse after this, so should I.
parenting can be 50/50 regular or mild, but untamed kids are wild
cant say for ya verse, ya words dont move me like a stubborn child
72-18.. low tiers and half asses, pretty good, see i can do the math
rare u have problems with text, ya only dilemma is i split u in half
blood bath.. no worries i fade em all like a stylist that indiscriminate
the Vet killin shit, dont give a fuck like the end-is-imminent nihilist
real shit... The whips like stiff dick, cuz ya mom love to drive it
realizing.. after i skeeted i had to hide u kid, like im Drake, n u Adonis!
n its funny since URL every battler got gun bars and its cool to text it
the bs reflected when u start talkin u orginally load clips.. like Netflix
should be enough if we not editing.
Due to audience request, i have to bring this faggot his end
So when i put hands encore, the crowd might clap until it happens again
Ppl cant wait to see, would actually pay to see this kid dropping fast
So i should lump sum of this niggas face for a quick wad of cash
Lenox smoked u and u want the highest tier? On principle, i feel offended
For u, the middles cool. Cuz u strugging w niggas that still attend it
See this heater? Now meet the reaper. Nigga, ur steppin to death in the flesh
And that takes a lil Bit of heart. But the slugs will too when they exit ya chest
Shits about to get scary for u. Idk how much more can u take
Im about to bring so much HorrorCore, insane clown posse might perform at ya wake
Fuck it.. Let it run.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Core Vet
Got Joog hereQuote:
Originally Posted by joog
stubborn child line was ight
didn't like the wording on that fade joint.
netflix bar was played.
drake line was okay
vs
Due to audience request, i have to bring this faggot his end
So when i put hands encore, the crowd might clap until it happens again
Ppl cant wait to see, would actually pay to see this kid dropping fast
So i should lump sum of this niggas face for a quick wad of cash
Lenox smoked u and u want the highest tier? On principle, i feel offended
For u, the middles cool. Cuz u strugging w niggas that still attend it
See this heater? Now meet the reaper. Nigga, ur steppin to death in the flesh
And that takes a lil Bit of heart. But the slugs will too when they exit ya chest
Joogie Joogz came with it.
Vote - Joog'i with it.
Vote - Islam Nation.
Geez...
Very one-sided, and that's one Joogs best drop in a minute... He was fucking with these open bar statement... really clever stuff BUT this is old Joog...
The first two bars, you could've stopped there.
v//joog
Whenever JEM votes, I think of the South Park episode where they smell their own farts.Quote:
Originally Posted by JEM.
Joog had some dope shit here. Middles cool was my favorite line. Core Vet was pretty basic, nothing stood out and not much sting to the punchlines.
V/joog
Close this.
Core Vet: Adonis was cool. Wasn't a fan of some of the material tbh. Think u could have chose better concepts.
Joog: encore was cool. Middle school was lol. No real misses. Those were my favorite out ur verse though.
V. Joog...better punches
real shit... The whips like stiff dick, cuz ya mom love to drive it
realizing.. after i skeeted i had to hide u kid, like im Drake, n u Adonis!
vs
Lenox smoked u and u want the highest tier? On principle, i feel offended
For u, the middles cool. Cuz u strugging w niggas that still attend it
See this heater? Now meet the reaper. Nigga, ur steppin to death in the flesh
And that takes a lil Bit of heart. But the slugs will too when they exit ya chest
V- Joog
Authentic, I think u mighta rushed this.... keep elevating and trying new angles... don't get too repetitive... try incorporating some cleverness, wit....nameplay...etc...
Core Vet
parenting can be 50/50 regular or mild, but untamed kids are wild
cant say for ya verse, ya words dont move me like a stubborn child
this line was cool the rest seemed really thrown together. i wasnt feeling it.
vs
Joogletica
Due to audience request, i have to bring this faggot his end
So when i put hands encore, the crowd might clap until it happens again
Ppl cant wait to see, would actually pay to see this kid dropping fast
So i should lump sum of this niggas face for a quick wad of cash
Lenox smoked u and u want the highest tier? On principle, i feel offended
For u, the middles cool. Cuz u strugging w niggas that still attend it
the horrorcore line was aight too but these were some slick ass bars
bold is the bar of the battle imo. shit was funny and nice word play. good shit fellas but im going with joogletica on this one
parenting can be 50/50 regular or mild, but untamed kids are wild
cant say for ya verse, ya words dont move me like a stubborn child
lol nah but stubborn child had potential if you had went a different route with it
72-18.. low tiers and half asses, pretty good, see i can do the math
rare u have problems with text, ya only dilemma is i split u in half
????no
blood bath.. no worries i fade em all like a stylist that indiscriminate
the Vet killin shit, dont give a fuck like the end-is-imminent nihilist
are you messing with us?
real shit... The whips like stiff dick, cuz ya mom love to drive it
realizing.. after i skeeted i had to hide u kid, like im Drake, n u Adonis!
nah
n its funny since URL every battler got gun bars and its cool to text it
the bs reflected when u start talkin u orginally load clips.. like Netflix
no again
Vs
Due to audience request, i have to bring this faggot his end
So when i put hands encore, the crowd might clap until it happens again
ok, twork did it better though vs Cortez
Ppl cant wait to see, would actually pay to see this kid dropping fast
So i should lump sum of this niggas face for a quick wad of cash
nah doesn’t work both ways. Lump sum only works as cash
Lenox smoked u and u want the highest tier? On principle, i feel offended
For u, the middles cool. Cuz u strugging w niggas that still attend it
alright I liked it lol
See this heater? Now meet the reaper. Nigga, ur steppin to death in the flesh
And that takes a lil Bit of heart. But the slugs will too when they exit ya chest
decent
Shits about to get scary for u. Idk how much more can u take
Im about to bring so much HorrorCore, insane clown posse might perform at ya wake
ok
Core you had potential with the stubborn child bar but everything else was pretty bad tbh and I’m not nitpicking at all I promise. I usually give people the benefit of the doubt but yeah man wasn’t feeling your stuff here.
Joog your verse was alright. Your opener was sus but not close enough to put you on blast for, I liked the Lenox bar and your closer was ok. No need to flex the skills here, but if this is your best then I see why you only battle here.
Vote joog