topical: Shadows
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topical: Shadows
20 lines
house rulez
check in 30 minuts
due 30 minutes after that
g/l
check due in 1 hour ok....topicals take longer ok?
Checking in.................g/l...........
SHADOWS
First time right here.....
Shadows surrounding me in the mist of the night,
street lights glarring apon me as im filt with fright,
Cant see anything can hardly unfold my knife,
Is it im fearing death or the fear of life,
I tumble an fall panicing extensively,
Gasping for breathe as if my shadow was playing tricks on me,
I felt cold blood flowing through my sorrowfull veins,
All shadows beginning to kick as i began to feel the pain,
Thinking to my self am i going to live or am i going to die,
Into my own world wondering why i lived life a lie,
Its the shadows that haunt not the people they follow,
The brightness of the sun the more powerr the shadow,
Not only was this all a dream but a shadow in my life
I reahced for my pocket an unfolded my knife,
I saw the shadows of 5 bodys so i swong for my beleavings,
I slowly begun to feel the sorrowfull die an my pains healing,
not only was it me in my own little world, it was a dream,
I slowly awoke an there i stood with my shadow beside me
* It was a dream about 5 guys tring to kill him. H can only see there shadows. When he awoke there was nobody but him an his shadow*
Shadows
As I stare fiercely at the gun that I have been hiding for days...
I began realize what I had done...and the mistake I had made...
I hadn't planned on it...but my friend dying was not an option...
I turned and noticed a guy had a gun to his head, so I shot him...
The bullet came towards him...he moved away and it barely hit...
But what happened next I didn't expect...the bullet hit a little kid...
So many times I have thought of puttin' myself out of my misery...
Because I mean as soon as the cops catch me...I know I'm history...
I've been running daily to get away from my pain and my fears also...
But I still remember the pain I caused another some few years ago...
Leapin walls to get away from those whose pursue me relentlessly...
Pain I feel for what I've done is worse to me than the death penalty...
Kicking...screaming...crying...and hollering...still can't help ease me...
That day left a mark in my heart....that is never going to leave me...
I don't know what to do now because I have nothing else to run to...
It's like if God gave me life and then said "Imma take it back from you!"...
I am sorry to the mother of the child that I shot at very mistakenly...
Although it still is not forgiveable because I shot at the guy blatently...
I tried to do the right thing...but even that is just only half the battle...
Because now forever I am cursed and my heart is marked with shadows!
uppin for my brother
Its the shadows that haunt not the people they follow,
The brightness of the sun the more powerr the shadow,
vs.
I tried to do the right thing...but even that is just only half the battle...
Because now forever I am cursed and my heart is marked with shadows!
i liked both of da peices... both i can tell put sum thought in to dem... juss up vocab fo both....but ima have to give this to Tempt fo da fact of he was a bit more creative and complex with it... i actualyl had to think about wat was goin on.... and da line i have copied is juss pure hotness... good battle yall... V/// temptation
sorry...didnt kno der was a post limit... if dis is still open in a few more post i will vote.....