Week 4: Alphabet vs Smash [Smash wins but booted for not voting]

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Punches due by THURSDAY NOV 30th @ 11:59PM
Voting closes SUNDAY DEC 3rd, 11:59PM

Check Ins
If you can't check in then there's something wrong w/ you
I won't be penalizing for not checking in though. Just make sure you drop a bar

No Shows
1 no show gets you taken out of the "in" roster. You will have to sign back in the next week
2 no shows gets you taken out of the "in" roster for 2 weeks
3 no shows gets you booted from the league for the rest of the season

Voting
Everyone is required to vote on 5 BATTLES MINIMUM. CONTENDERS AND CHAMP BEING MANDATORY
1 vote deduction for every battle link missed
Failure to vote at all will result in a boot from the league for 1 week
If your opponent no shows, you must vote on the required minimum to get the win

Battle Rules
In the event of a 3-way, each battler must drop 2 bars; 1 for each opponent
Battler must drop a bar to get a win, even if their opponent no shows/doesn't check
NO EXTENSIONS. It's only 1 bar
NO editing punches after opponent drops
Biting will result in a league/site ban
Recycling will result in DQ 1st time and League Ban 2nd time

@Alphabet
@Smash

check

g'luck

Check

Everybody say dey blessings, cuz alpha Gettin fucked up... A true 187
Don't worry why I'll throw TNT after I shoot
Cuz it's destined 4 you to hear the clap before the dynamite like J.J. evans


Low key I almost forgot. Lol

@Krucial Th1rt3en this is the 3 line technique I told you about.

He used it decent here I guess. You should look up some of his other battles if you want, I've seen him drop some good stuff,

Smash wins Alphabet is out for a week. Open for feed

this isn't really a 3 line technique, this is hiding the fact that the last line is stretched. This was pretty weak not gonna lie. throwing dynamite doesn't really make sense and was used just to help make a correlation in ur gun bar. Obviously you keyed and didn't put much effort into it.

Bar had potential concept wise but the wording killed it

Got that live battle affect when read out loud. Cool concept but wording was poor imo

I like the whole dynamite JJ Evans metaphore was dope but the throw tnt wording affected the sting factor of the bar wording wise.

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

@Krucial Th1rt3en this is the 3 line technique I told you about.

He used it decent here I guess. You should look up some of his other battles if you want, I've seen him drop some good stuff,

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Sike you lied. He did not use it decent here you noob

Everybody say dey blessings, cuz alpha Gettin fucked up... A true 187
Don't worry why I'll throw TNT after I shoot
Cuz it's destined 4 you to hear the clap before the dynamite like J.J. evans

decent punch, but like the other guys said, throwing tnt at someone is a bit .... different lol
if u throw dynamite at mfs, u a bad muthafucka bro lmao
but overall, the bar connects and makes sense

The line is like the euro-step of battling. I agree with what everyone else said. Clever concept but poorly executed. Polish it up a bit and you’ll be some one to watch for.

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Originally Posted by OG Maestro

@Krucial Th1rt3en this is the 3 line technique I told you about.

He used it decent here I guess. You should look up some of his other battles if you want, I've seen him drop some good stuff,

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Lmao - this shit was garbage. The fuck you talking about? Yo, stop trying to "Help" someone you are ultimately hurting with this weak ass advice your giving.

FLoor 13 - once again, disregard OG. Fake news.

As far as the bar - conceptually trash and execution was trash.