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im contra your diction, anti-thesis opposition your THUG PARADOX CONTRADICTIONS, sloppy spittin, in fact im slappin the fiction from your SELF-HYPE composition... look at ya signature...tell me wahts writtin ..
simple~pathetic~syllables, style pessimistic~cynical,
gimp-limpin simplistic midget individual,
SELF-HYPIN EGOTISTICAL imbisil
leavin one LESS-HOPE in this miserable INFIDEL,
DRASTICALLY SELF-CONCIOUS, you must really NEED tha compliments
...fukkin with eck proven stupidity be tha consequence...
pacifist pre-school punches, simply retarded similies
'LIKE TOTALLY' soundin like the twink on beverly hillbilles...HA!
break-down your intellect analytically, while you bragin bout stupidity-reppin hip-hop-hipicritically~conrtadictory prose-no flow emceein artificially...as likely to beat me as snow in tha phillipines
derelict persona, im the down side to karma
mentally IMPRISONED, leave you FIGHTIN for FREEDOM like DALI LAMA
you the queen of drama, a fiend for marijuana
always LOOKIN UP TO ME, the human carnation of AMON-RA!
you aint WANT BEEF with me..you want some VEGGIE BALOGNE
BLOW ME! you already BELOW-ME,
DISTANT and FAKE your styles TELE-PHONY!
(amon-ra is the universal sun god, and the prefix 'tele' means far or distant..)
you best not no show
neva noshowin, my comps been fucked all week so i aint got much time, anyways jus a key as usual, nice piece eck.
ur shit had u "plugged in" so its time i disconnect.................tha name a that title fits u miniscule lightweight eck..............sharp rhymes that slit yo neck..............and leave u bloody and battered.........ur hopes for a further reign like ur dreams have been strategically shattered..............and scattered.........accross thousands of miles with no remorse.................u try to spit ill vocab but ur verse flows off course...............couldnt get a half a mic from source...............ur voice is soundin hoarse.............now i could sense ur fears.............im writin rhymes wit ya blood and washin down witcha tears..........chasin my rhymes with beers................i could be drunk and still beat u..............spent all week writin ur rhyme till u realized " i cant defeat u".......rhymes r see through...........but dont get disentchanted ya dyke.............brought a fan on stage and still couldnt blow tha mic...............amon ra? comn dawg stop that mythical jibberish..............dont u know that raw cat ill is a lyrical killer bitch.................go steal a switch...........i beat that ass like i was ya mother...................tha only place ud get votes is on survivor or big brother...........spacin out ya rhymes cus u thought it made em look better............drop them shits off tha page like ya gurl drops tha pants when tha puss gets wetter..........
Uppin
damn. not as good as id have liked but i was short on time.
until we meet again eck (prolly in tha LT LLI battle)
Peace.
I saw a lightweight champion when I got done reading the verse from..........Ecklipse
YUP
I thought he was ready and he really wanted this win, the other cat spit like a freestyle or somethin'....word my fav fro Eck was:
Quote:
simple~pathetic~syllables, style pessimistic~cynical,
gimp-limpin simplistic midget individual,
SELF-HYPIN EGOTISTICAL imbisil
leavin one LESS-HOPE in this miserable INFIDEL,
DRASTICALLY SELF-CONCIOUS, you must really NEED tha compliments
...fukkin with eck proven stupidity be tha consequence...
Vote = Ecklipse...holla back
Vote=Eck-Lipse
Flow-Eck-Lipse
Punches-Eck-Lipse
Multis/Inners-Eck-Lipse
Werdplay-N/A
Overall-Eck-Lipse
Eck verse was great...I was feling the alliterastion and inners throught the first two stanzas...you fell off a lil but it was still good...IRp couldnt hold up with a keystyle although hes improved a lot. Great verse Eck.
2-0...more votes
yo this was a hott ass battle namean?
ECK shit was blazin i liked the last lines
"derelict persona, im the down side to karma
mentally IMPRISONED, leave you FIGHTIN for FREEDOM like DALI LAMA
you the queen of drama, a fiend for marijuana
always LOOKIN UP TO ME, the human carnation of AMON-RA!
you aint WANT BEEF with me..you want some VEGGIE BALOGNE
BLOW ME! you already BELOW-ME,
DISTANT and FAKE your styles TELE-PHONY!"
i liked that tele-phony shit lol
IRP shit was coo 2 i just wasn't feeling all those....................
feel me?
i liked
ur shit had u "plugged in" so its time i disconnect.................tha name a that title fits u miniscule lightweight eck..............sharp rhymes that slit yo neck..............and leave u bloody and battered.........ur hopes for a further reign like ur dreams have been strategically shattered..............and scattered.........accross thousands of miles with no remorse.................u try to spit ill vocab but ur verse flows off course
i read both verses three times and came up with my conclusion
eck won this off the punches, becuz everything else seemed to be even
nice battle guys and good luck
peace
Flow-tie sorta
Punches-Eck-Lipse
Multis/Inners-Eck-Lipse
Werdplay-a lil from ecklipse
Overall-Eck-Lipse
ecklipse came up with an overall better verse IRP this was pretty wakk shyt from you u can do better., ecklipse took cuz of obvious reasons
~1~
vote-ecklipse
Wordplay: Tie
Punches: Eck-lipse
Metaphors: Tie
Flow: Tie
Multi's: Eck-lipse
Vote: Eck-lipse
I believe Eck took the punch & multi's categories....everything else was pretty even....although Illrhyme included many disses....it didn't seem enough to overthrow eck-lipse's verse....good verses from both emcees
not that it matters but dluxx, crew vote brotha.
4-0
ur vocab was too much dawg
good shit.
*thinks to himself "whos got tha hardcore title?" hmmmm*
Peace.
this was pretty close i think my vote goes for ecklipse though cause the punches were just sightly better
5-0
hope i dont end up like biggz.
Peace.