Animal Nation...feat The Vortex
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2-The Vortex
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I see nothing but devils... blasphemous rebels running amok
With weed in my sock - I'm bedazzled at the metal gunning the block
A mock media spits no truth, yet insists its tactics are smooth
This is the list of proof, as pissed-off youth make systematical moves
Dramatic news, fanatic film crews cruise through looking for bruises
Panic ensues… satanic issues, - so they blame the fucking music
While cops hit kids in the head with sticks- then say it’s not abusive
That’s an illusion; mad mass confusion can only lead to ruin
Doomed desolation, chasing solutions is what we should be doing
Proving ourselves worthwhile, big brother smiles, juveniles rot in jail
Since if all fails - the infidels crucify life with a cross & nails…
As the sky blackens - I visualize what will happen imminently
See crocodiles snapping… X-file spies - all acting discriminately
No saving grace… talking UFO shit… - agitates flipped natives
Fakes embrace the 666 as they play tricks with a makeshift matrix
This is subsistence, missions’ prefixed via virtual images
Scientific facilities… possibilities are limitless
Great debaters listen to Satan’s desecrated seminar
Roll the camera… hero’s villains & stars, X-rated cinema
Fly high Pan-Am to Panama… diplomat car waiting at the port
Priests & Popes don’t Rome where I go w/o a fucking armed escort…
This is death-sport… report the city mayor for fraud
Fall to your knees in prayer, - & make the Savior your Lord
A rare form of physics… we visit this war-torn terrain
Soldiers scorn pain clutching carbon copies of King James
Sons that’s the gospel… the 1st apostle to floss truth
Dragons with fire nostrils burning the holy mosques roof
Youth’s get mad… & sweat Jihad through pores
Backpack killers - wit not a fucking fad to live for
Perhaps if we shared more, the poor wouldn’t even exist
No need to be scared, or… - walk around in this darkness
How can I smile, while these reptiles keep eating my crops?
No one wants to take a beating when competing for props.
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Re: Animal Nation...feat The Vortex
Re: Animal Nation...feat The Vortex
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1-Wordploy
2-The Vortex
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I see nothing but devils... blasphemous rebels running amok
With weed in my sock - I'm bedazzled at the metal gunning the block
A mock media spits no truth, yet insists its tactics are smooth
This is the list of proof, as pissed-off youth make systematical moves
Dramatic news, fanatic film crews cruise through looking for bruises
Panic ensues… satanic issues, - so they blame the fucking music
While cops hit kids in the head with sticks- then say it’s not abusive
That’s an illusion; mad mass confusion can only lead to ruin
Doomed desolation, chasing solutions is what we should be doing
Proving ourselves worthwhile, big brother smiles, juveniles rot in jail
Since if all fails - the infidels crucify life with a cross & nails…
As the sky blackens - I visualize what will happen imminently
See crocodiles snapping… X-file spies - all acting discriminately
No saving grace… talking UFO shit… - agitates flipped natives
Fakes embrace the 666 as they play tricks with a makeshift matrix
This is subsistence, missions’ prefixed via virtual images
Scientific facilities… possibilities are limitless
Great debaters listen to Satan’s desecrated seminar
Roll the camera… hero’s villains & stars, X-rated cinema
Fly high Pan-Am to Panama… diplomat car waiting at the port
Priests & Popes don’t Rome where I go w/o a fucking armed escort…
This is death-sport… report the city mayor for fraud
Fall to your knees in prayer, - & make the Savior your Lord
A rare form of physics… we visit this war-torn terrain
Soldiers scorn pain clutching carbon copies of King James
Sons that’s the gospel… the 1st apostle to floss truth
Dragons with fire nostrils burning the holy mosques roof
Youth’s get mad… & sweat Jihad through pores
Backpack killers - wit not a fucking fad to live for
Perhaps if we shared more, the poor wouldn’t even exist
No need to be scared, or… - walk around in this darkness
How can I smile, while these reptiles keep eating my crops?
No one wants to take a beating when competing for props.
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hey man, this was a cool peice, i also like the intent of this text too, good read, it's flowed well at start till a bit pass the second paragraph, it slowed down a bit. i find your trying to put too many big words but it's makes it less flowwee....... but vocab was not a problem to me, good vocab, keep it up man, maybe next week we could co-lab, already busy at the moment with someone, anyways, peace
Re: Animal Nation...feat The Vortex
ha weird, cuz verse 1 seemed like an older piece written by verse 2. it was the same approach, cool idea, but it was delivered as well as the second stanza at all, it seemed nearly the same just far less developed. if vortex is who i recall (ninjah?) then it was no surprise the way that verse summed up. it was original, great vocab, meter was strong. can't really complain about it at all. first verse however, feel like vocab was misused, the meter was at times rough and a bit choppy, but i did like where you tried to take it. stay up.
Re: Animal Nation...feat The Vortex
yea cheers. h
i hadnt wrote in a while, 1st verse was written a lttle while earlier than second, same day though
same ninjah
