Week 4: Belooshka (0-1) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-2) [OPEN FOR VOTES]
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@Belooshka
@Krucial Th1rt3en
Re: Week 4: Belooshka (0-1) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-2)
You last girl? Unhappy. She told me bout how you were a player cuz
U’ve nvr shown commitment, s’why bitches leave Kru faster than Dagel does
Re: Week 4: Belooshka (0-1) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-2)
beat me?
ya last drops been ass, try somethin thats more your scene,
you can Elevate all u want, but you will never Floor Thirteen.
Re: Week 4: Belooshka (0-1) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-2)
v/belooshka
the np was more direct n connected better then when what 13 dropped.
Re: Week 4: Belooshka (0-1) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-2)
Vote Belooshka
I felt like his punchline hit better
This vote will not count robranda. -Management
Re: Week 4: Belooshka (0-1) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-2)
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Belooshka
You last girl? Unhappy. She told me bout how you were a player cuz
U’ve nvr shown commitment, s’why bitches leave Kru faster than Dagel does
This was light.
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Krucial Th1rt3en
beat me?
ya last drops been ass, try somethin thats more your scene,
you can Elevate all u want, but you will never Floor Thirteen.
You aren't saying much here plus the wording/execution was atrocious, honestly. Plus your setup, concept and transition have no real connection. Try to coordinate your setups with your concepts and punches better man, as you see your opponent did. Your bar was all over the place and not well thought out.
v/Belooshka
Re: Week 4: Belooshka (0-1) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-2) [OPEN FOR VOTES]
Bel had a good no comparison that's facts. Funny. Kru punchline was a good opening for a punch but not a harsh finisher.
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Vote Bel
Re: Week 4: Belooshka (0-1) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-2) [OPEN FOR VOTES]
I really didn't like that bar from Bel, it was so soft and weak as a whole punch. Still it was written better than Kru's which didn't have strong components of a punch.
And Kru, the set up doesn't always have to relate to the punch, it is a wise choice to have it relate tho. Really all that matters is that the 2nd line, the punch, said something a lil clever that either has truth to it or was funny as hell -- or both. Just focus on bringing a good punch to this league for now, until you develop more witty bars that have strong set ups and all that jazz.
Vote: Bel
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I really didn't like that bar from Bel, it was so soft and weak as a whole punch. Still it was written better than Kru's which didn't have strong components of a punch.
And Kru, the set up doesn't always have to relate to the punch, it is a wise choice to have it relate tho. Really all that matters is that the 2nd line, the punch, said something a lil clever that either has truth to it or was funny as hell -- or both. Just focus on bringing a good punch to this league for now, until you develop more witty bars that have strong set ups and all that jazz.
Vote: Bel
Re: Week 4: Belooshka (0-1) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-2) [OPEN FOR VOTES]
Thought Belooshkas bar was nice, not dope but nice. Wording on point.
13's bar however was dope. Wording on point, setup & 2nd line tie-in were there. But was more a self-hype bar and indirect to his opponent.
Bel had a personal which carries more weight to voters.
Dope battle
V/ Belooshka
Re: Week 4: Belooshka (0-1) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-2) [OPEN FOR VOTES]
Lmao at Belooshkas bar simple af np but overall good humor factor and true statement towards the metaphorical comparison. 13 ur bar i got the impression of an audio battle i get elevate floor 13 but as a text battle bar it was basic there was no correlation to it as far as creativity went. I could see if you stating in reference maybe to a movie or something then it would have stood out more. Hope you get what im saying because u couldve used elevate in a sense and said you never floored any number and it still wouldve came off basic for a text bar.
V/Belipshka
Re: Week 4: Belooshka (0-1) vs Krucial Th1rt3en (0-2) [OPEN FOR VOTES]