Def by mouf vs. MC Quicksand

10-16 lines
No recycling/feeding/biting
No hate/crew/d/r votes
verses due Midnight GMT on Monday

everything has been agreed upon all we need now is checks and verses...

Checky check check son.....oh and your spittin first as the rules stated...

check...it aint matter who drop first, since we ain't meant to be feedin' 'n' all, but it's what we agreed on...

You're right, def by mouth, you ain't need to say more,*
'Cause you've bored us to death with your rappin' before,
Your crew be "lookin' for talent", so why'd they accept you,*
Should try out for american idol, you won't get votes there, too,
"Def by mouf" ain't no way to "killa MC",*
"You the DEFinition of what whack wants to be,*
When he grows up", that's Ras Kass, quotin' ain't outta conduct,
No cats quotin' yours, they'd have a better chance not showin' up,
Been peepin' my battles, and he wanna get a "piece" of me,**
I ain't no "jig-saw", but I'll "slice" you up just as equally,
And this cat's only 15, a shame to kill him so "prematurely",
Ain't learn to "jerk-off" yet, but tell God Def's "comin' up early",
So what was that you said 'bout crushin' my self esteem,**
You ain't got the strength, nor talent, to even beat a queen,***
Sorry, she's a Princess, you still wanna front? You'll regret it,
Leave ya "deaf" by shoutin' "ya lost" everytime you forget it!

*Check his sig/custom title
**http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163403
***http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=157795

MC_Quicksand more like MC needs help Quick
Forget sand, elevations what yo wack ass needs help with
Aren't you getting merked by a member of my crew?
Not mention Effect, Dialect, Genocide`, and MadFlex too
This kid won like 5 battles and now he thinks he's the top shit
But's at the bottom cuz the purpose of sand is to...walk on top of it
This MC's Quicksand has to be filled with a type of wackness
Cuz he's quickly sinking further into it with every practice
He seems to be out lookin for people that he can publicly whore
But this is the same guy who got murdered by Sir loin and 3ncore
Only time dude gets laid's when people decide to sit on the beach
Every other time's like his winning ability...just too far outta reach*
And where is this dude from...um Sydney somewhere in Australia
They call it the "Down Under" for a reason...
...This explains why he likes my genatalia

*meaning he loses a lot...
and the kids battle record as it stands of this moment seems to be 5-5...dunno why but it is...he's lost to more than that but...
ecerything else is self explanatory....so vote up

okay. this was a pretty decent battle here... but i see a clear winner.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by MC_Quicksand

You're right, def by mouth, you ain't need to say more,
'Cause you've bored us to death with your rappin' before

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vs.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Def by mouf

This kid won like 5 battles and now he thinks he's the top shit
But's at the bottom cuz the purpose of sand is to...walk on top of it
And where is this dude from...um Sydney somewhere in Australia
They call it the "Down Under" for a reason...
...This explains why he likes my genatalia

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okay. Quick, your verse was decent, but it looked like you tried to hard on some of the punches & wordplay. the explanations just got confusing. don't get me wrong, i do understand the punches.. i just feel like i shouldn't have to read into them that much. your flow was decent, but your punches seemed forced & you had some fillers as well. Def, your verse was direct & to the point. even though your concepts were basic, you made up for that by going straight at Quick on a personal level. your closer made me laugh & your verse was consistent with good flow & good punches. solid shit.. and so for these reasons...

V/ Def by mouf

Hu1k link in signature.

uppin for the first time...i will return favors if its needed I always do :thumbup:

And where is this dude from...um Sydney somewhere in Australia
They call it the "Down Under" for a reason...
...This explains why he likes my genatalia

by def by mouf

You're right, def by mouth, you ain't need to say more,
'Cause you've bored us to death with your rappin' before

i think the best line by mc quicksand

def by mouf just came with an overall better verse, punches, vocab all of it. kinda one sided really...def by mouf for having better punches then quicksand...

this was a great battle on both sides...
Punches went to Def by mouf cuz his punches were harder and more direct...
Personals--- Def, he spilled all the beans then rubbed Quick's face in it
Flow--- Def, both had a few sloppy bars, juss cuz they rhymed dont mean they flowed, but Mc Quicksand was trying to force flows in alot of them( example-"When he grows up", that's Ras Kass, quotin' ain't outta conduct,
No cats quotin' yours, they'd have a better chance not showin' up,")
all caregories were edged only this was really a close battle but def took it...
v/ Def by Mouf...
hit my battle wit southern finest up honestly... link is in sig...

omg DBM, y tha hell iz ur font so HUGE!!!

j/p, but chea DBM took this, kilt em' w/ tha personals, coulda been more creative w/ em' tho, tha punches werent all that great but enuff 2 win, Quick, next time no make ur shyt 2 complicated, most of ur punches n wordplay wuz forced, makes it confusin and tha flow wuz off

vote-def by mouf

Def won, though both spit well. I can't vote but you'd get it.

I found your only weak line to be the Australia one. If you've mentioned Sydney (your line being he's from sydney somewhere in australia) i'm overly confident 95% of these boards will know where Sydney is in relation to Australia... but that's thinking on a higher basis, which isn't really needed... so you can let that slide ;)

plz hit my battle up... it's notmy best but plz check it out lol http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=163671

uppin cuz I need the win or loss on my stat sheet more preferrably the win....up

okay both rappers be killin this battle verse...

overall:

Def By Mouf: you had the better verse overall, you had the better punches, the better personals, your flow was sloppy in some area's but good in others, man your on fire with these battles, i think your gunna take this one with you...the consistency of the battle verse was phenomenal..


Quick: your verse was pretty decent overall, couldv'e beat me anyday.....but your punches were alittle softer than Def's, and the personal's werent that hot, the flow was forced in some area's but its all good, the consistency of your rhyme was decent....keep battlin...


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DEF BY MOUF